Date: 06/11/23 04:16 pm Title: Chapter 1
I have left a review on other stories of yours, but wanted to say that I enjoyed this one too!
Date: 03/21/11 09:44 pm Title: Chapter 2
This story was hot, and well written. Really well done. It was a bit predictable, but at the same time kept me on my toes, hehe. I loved the build up between the three of them. I have a few teensy weensy criticisms though: I wish the threesome scene was a bit more surprising and mind-blowing (just something to top the already really great smut) and I wish there was less Het. But that's just me, cuz I'm a twincester. Lol. This was fabulous though, even with the Het, cuz I can't stand Het normally. :) The twins getting caught by Sara and then making out in front of Sara was my fav. I would have loved more twincest... for example, they never fucked, but i guess its part of their dynamic, like, how Tom said- its just a getting off thing. Anyways, and then Bill getting her off while Tom is doing the fucking was also fab. Hehe. Well done. :)
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it! :) Although can I just say, the story is predominantly het, so therefore there couldn't have been less of it, and the twins aren't meant to be in an actual relationship, hence the no fucking thing. thank you for reading :)
Date: 09/21/10 12:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
My internet crashed just before I clicked next, I screamed which took some explaining (stupid computer lol!)
Anywy finally finished it.....
OMG fantastic I loved Bill and Tom.
Loved Bill finally acting like a Boy rather than girly. I always love reading about Tom. Sara was a great character I liked her personality.
GREAT STORY!!!
Author's Response: Ah, I hate when that happens, but I'm so glad you liked it because I spent ages on this, haha. Thank you! :D
Date: 09/21/10 02:31 am Title: Chapter 2
Wow! Love that Bill and Tom are sleeping with each other and also other people and neither is upset or jealous over it. Love the threeway too. ;D I also love how you wrote Bill's character here. So normal and grown up.
Great story! Loved it!
Author's Response: Brothers with benefits? ;D Thank you for reading and commenting! <3
Date: 09/21/10 02:28 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh my goodness! You had me at the title!
Great first chapter! :D
Author's Response: Haha, and here was me, worried about the title :p Thank you!
Date: 09/20/10 08:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
What a little great story this was. Too bad it has come to an end. I looked forward to reading this all day! It was incredibly hot and delicious.
Author's Response: =D Thank you so much :)
Date: 09/20/10 05:42 pm Title: Chapter 2
Well I think the best attribute of this story was obviously the hot sex. But besides that, I must say again that I liked seeing Bill depicted as a normal guy. Not only did he sleep with the girl, but he was very skilled (even more so than Tom, which I found hilariously great). For some strange reason though, I won't read purely het fic. Weird huh? Anyways, Sara neve ended up annoying me. I think this is beacuse she wasn't overcharacterized in any direction; she wasn't in love with the band,but neiter was she a cynical TH hater.
Author's Response: Haha, thank you! :3 I'm glad you liked the characterizations and the OFC; having an OFC liked on this site is a huge feat conquered in my opinion, haha. Thanks for reading and commenting <3
Date: 09/20/10 05:29 pm Title: Chapter 2
This was so yummy and good.
The end kind of got to me, for some reason. Sara just walking away like that.
Either way, still hot. :3
Author's Response: Thanks! It did? It was meant to be slightly ambiguous, like Sara gained closure from it.
Date: 09/20/10 05:21 pm Title: Chapter 2
That was so hot! I love the twins interactions in this fic and the girl was not annoying like some other original character sometimes are. Really good job with this fic, I enjoyed it a lot!
Author's Response: I'm really glad you liked the OFC =D Thank you so much :)
Date: 09/20/10 04:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
...I have no words. This was ridiculously hot. & like I said, I love reading this characterization of Bill. You should definitely do it more often. :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! And who knows when this Bill will pop up again :p
Date: 09/18/10 10:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is very interesting ! I like the idea of this fic! It's so different to read something where Bill is acting like a man, I love it!
Can't wait to see more of Bill and Tom relationship!
Author's Response: I'm really glad you do, thank you! There's more Bill and Tom in the next part :D
Date: 09/18/10 07:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
Loved this! I am such a sucker for threesomes or any story involving a female character seeing the twins hidden relationship. This first part was so well done. You really set the tone, and gve outstanding descriptions. You also made the female character likable and someone I would sure like to be! Well done, can't wait for part two!
PS - What is the FQF community?
Author's Response: Thanks! And so am I, which is why this prompt grabbed me and attached itself so thoroughly haha. Damn, wouldn't we all like to be Sara? Maybe even more so in the next part, *cough* ;) Part two coming sooon. :)
The FQF fest is run on http://community.livejournal.com/th_fanfic/tag/fest%3A%20fqf_2010. It's finished for now, but there'll be a Secret Santa there in a month or so and then the Georg FQF in March before it all starts again. It's really really aweomse :)
Date: 09/18/10 07:08 pm Title: Chapter 1
Well I thought it was hot. And Sara didn't annoy me, which is a huge acheivement all on its own. I also love seeing Bill acting like a guy, which he did in this one. I'm intersted to find out more about the twins' relationship, seeing as they sleep together but don't mind sharing, or at least casual sharing.
Author's Response: Haha, thank you! And I'm really glad Sara wasn't annoying. That's always my main goal with an OFC, to keep her faaaar away from the Mary Sues. The rest is already written, so it will be posted soon! :)
Date: 09/18/10 03:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh, yes, I love this so far. The whole scene with Bill was definitely my favorite. Its no fun when Bill is only with Tom/guys. :p Looking forward to the next part.
Author's Response: I agree with you so much! No matter how much I love me my slash, I love a bit of het on the side ;D Thanks for reading :))