Date: 09/18/10 01:51 am Title: let me be your lover tonight
Holy christ, you shorted out my brain, sure as Tom shorted out his laptop with beer. That sex was spectacular and dangerous. When Bill said, "I want you to fuck me." and Tom gasped out loud, I choked on my cracker. And it only got hotter. I think I didn't breathe through half of it and probably have some brain damage from lack of oxygen. But goddamn if it wasn't worth it.
And this, I loved this: He was coping with the most complete shifting of his axis that he'd ever known; realigning gravity, coming home.
Yeah. Excellent work. ♥
Author's Response: >:D YAY. Spectacular and dangerous, I think that's one of the best compliments I've ever received! And ooooh, hurrah. Is it naughty of me to say "yay for lack of oxygen?" :D
That was one of my favorite bits. I'm so glad it spoke to you. Thank you SO much! ♥
Date: 09/18/10 01:25 am Title: let me be your lover tonight
Jesus woman, you kill me every time. FABULOUS as always!!
Author's Response: :D! Thank you! I'm SO glad to hear it, yay! ...I think this was my first cyber fic.
Date: 09/18/10 01:20 am Title: let me be your lover tonight
great!! i got excited and jumped for joy when i saw that you wrote something, i adore your stories/one shots!!
Author's Response: Yay, I'm so happy to hear you were excited! \o/ Thank you! ♥
Date: 09/18/10 01:20 am Title: let me be your lover tonight
OMG I had a horrible night full of nightmares and this is about to save my day!!! Gonna read it at work again so I blame you if I'm being totally unproductive today know it in advance!
Full review tonight ;)
Author's Response: Yaaaaaay, I am so happy! I really hope you enjoy it! :D I added a bit more cybering for you. ;) Thanks and I'm SO looking forward to it!
Date: 09/17/10 11:08 pm Title: let me be your lover tonight
*_* You totally made day with this new story, even before I read it ! Nearly 14 000 words of new stuff from you in one read, I’m really happy now cause I needed something good to read after a day spent doing homework :D Thank you for cheering me up !
My god that was so hot! I really like the plot too, how they’ve always wanted each other but never let themselves have it. I really enjoyed the twins in this fic. Also, the cyber stuff was so sexy, I like how they were learning so much about each other through it. And then, when they were together, I particularly enjoyed how Tom was jealous when he thought that it wasn’t Bill’s first time! Their first kiss was so sweet and passionate at the same time, really well written! Anyways, you get the idea, it was awesome and so hot!! I love this fic, going straight to my favorites :D
Author's Response: Aw, I'm so glad! I think this is the longest one-shot I've ever posted. If I'd remembered how long it is I might have split it up into two parts... >_> I'm so happy I could cheer you up, yay!
So so happy you found it hot, thank you. ♥ Really pleased you enjoyed all of those things about it. *_*
Date: 09/17/10 10:36 pm Title: let me be your lover tonight
WIN
Dude you rule. Cybering rocks my effing Gustavilicious world
awesome job! :)
Author's Response: YAY!
Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it so much! ♥
Date: 09/17/10 10:31 pm Title: let me be your lover tonight
I always flail all over the place whenever I see anything new by you. :D Just the perfect amount of angst. Demanding Bill is one of my favorite things to read. So hot. Love it. :)
Author's Response: :D! I am glad to learn of this! Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed the angst and the sexytiems and demanding Bill!
Date: 09/17/10 10:15 pm Title: let me be your lover tonight
VERY GOOD
Author's Response: THANK YOU VERY MUCH!
Date: 09/17/10 08:58 pm Title: let me be your lover tonight
JESUS HELL WOMAN ARE YOU TRYING TO KILL ME
Author's Response: Mwahahahaha >:D I'm glad to provoke that kind of reaction!
Date: 09/17/10 08:56 pm Title: let me be your lover tonight
Damn girl, I'm throbbing in places I didn't even know I could. Shit that was hot. fjafjdjasldjfalsdjfsdj
My mouth is all dry, my skin is hot, I'm ALL kinds of messed up.
And I love it.
xoxoxoxo
Author's Response: XD XD XD Woohoooo! I'm happy you enjoyed it so much. ;) Thank you for your review!
Date: 09/17/10 08:15 pm Title: let me be your lover tonight
*SQUEEEEEE!!!!*
Now I'll go read. ;)
Author's Response: Heeee hee hee, I appreciate your enthusiasm! :D