Date: 09/22/10 08:10 am Title: let me be your lover tonight
....and you did it again.... superb, girl.
What I liked so much about this little piece of awesomeness was how multi-layered it seemed to be. It was a perfect mixture of all various elements that complemented each other really well and it all became so rich and interesting to read. You write sex incredibly well but there are always emotions and all those small poetic undertones woven deeply into it that makes "just good sexy story" into incredible, emotionally engaging, tender, beautiful, SEXY story. My probably favorite line?
"He was coping with the most complete shifting of his axis that he'd ever known; realigning gravity, coming home"....now I do not know if you can realign gravity, but I do not care, because this single line was incredibly beautiful and descriptive of what the whole story was just basically all about. Tom's coming home.
I was amazed how incredibly well you structured the whole thing happening in Tom's head basically, his internal discussions, reasoning....how he guides us through all happenings and we can see it through his perspective. I really loved it.
You mastered well the shifts in tempo/pace of the whole story. Sometimes it slowed down, then the pace picked up again (like during the cyber chat), such a thrilling experience to be able to read something like that...never boring, never repetitive.
Last but not least, I adored how Tom's deep love and true caring for Bill permeated all his actions...his constant concern not to hurt Bill, not to cause any distress to him. So sweet. I have a soft spot for "tough macho man turning all sweet, gentle and considerate". It is such a powerful turn-on in a smut story (at least for me).
Bottom line.....great, sensitive story that didn't lack sexiness but also had plenty of substance to it.
Author's Response: Wow, I don't even know what to say! My eyes pretty much went like this *____* when I got your review notification. I'm so incredibly happy that you got all of those things out of this story; definitely so intended.
Definitely this was about Tom coming home, together with Bill.
Thank you for the beautiful compliments! And I'm especially pleased to hear it was fresh and not repetitive. :) And yes, the love from Tom that was in everything he did for him. He's definitely sweet on Bill in every way.
Thanks so much for your detailed review! It means a lot to me to hear all of the things that worked for you in the story.
Date: 09/20/10 07:01 pm Title: let me be your lover tonight
ohhhh fuck this is wowwwww i don´t have words to tell you how fucking sexy this is love it!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so so so much! :) I really appreciate it.
Date: 09/20/10 10:59 am Title: let me be your lover tonight
That was one of the best one-shots I've ever read and also one of the longest sex scenes I've ever read. My hat is off to you.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! What lovely compliments, I really appreciate it.
Date: 09/20/10 01:10 am Title: let me be your lover tonight
gnugh..big pile of goo.
Tom should really know by know that resistance to Bill if futile.
Author's Response: You'd think he'd learn. ;) Thanks for your review!
Date: 09/19/10 09:07 pm Title: let me be your lover tonight
Wow, I think this is the hottest cybering I've ever read. *fans self* And yay that we got the real thing in the end!!! This fic just about killed me! *needs a moment*
Author's Response: *_* A high compliment indeed! Thank you so so much. And yes, of course Bill was going to get his way. ;) Thanks for your review! ♥
Date: 09/19/10 07:48 pm Title: let me be your lover tonight
oh my god, you did AMAZING! Cyber is always a good thing so written by you was overload! This was so hot, so sexy and i loved the love. Definitely not just sex, it was pure love :) this entire fic was just beautiful! I loved the whole premise and how you set it up so perfectly. Aw gawd i'm blown right away. I kept trying to sit down and just READ this all the way through, but RL seemed to have other plans. So the wait for this made it all the more exciting to finally read :D
Man, i can't believe how much you write! I was actually thinking just the day i got this notification telling me a favourite author had posted a new story, that i hadn't got a 'New story at THF' email and then TWO popped up, one of them being this and i had a little bit of a flail and then even more of one when i realised it was you and then i was just amazed it WAS you considering how much you're writing atm o____O how on earth do you do it!? And it's always so perfect! Phew, well i'll say goodnight now :) thanks for this, it was just incredible xxxo
Author's Response: Thank you so sooo much! I've never written cyber before so I'm very happy to get such positive responses! Thanks so much. :3 Definitely about the love as much as the sex. I'm so so happy you enjoyed it so much!
I write just about every day. :) I have way more ideas than I'll ever be able to get through! Thank you. I'm happy you enjoy my stories so much. The twins are my muses right now and I'm going with it as far as they'll take me!
Date: 09/19/10 03:20 pm Title: let me be your lover tonight
OMG it's sooooooooooooo good! *fans self* OMG it's so good. It's one of the hottest things I've read in a really long time. And it's sooooo long. OMG I need to stop saying OMG and OOOOOOOOO. It's very good and it seems to just go on forever, just when it feels like it might wrap up it just keeps going. The emotions and storyline are very realistic. It's awesome!
Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much! *_* That is such an amazing compliment though, I really appreciate it! ♥ I'm all flail-y. I'm glad you enjoyed it so much and found it to be realistic!
Date: 09/19/10 04:28 am Title: let me be your lover tonight
mmmmm...omg lucky, i want to.....haha. sexy and cute. very nice
Author's Response: Haha, I'm glad you enjoyed it so much! Thank you. ♥
Date: 09/19/10 01:40 am Title: let me be your lover tonight
Guhuhhhh......d *blubbering mess*
I love how they were completely getting it on and everthing was hot, sexy and amazing, then they finally shared that kiss...it was the sweetest thing ever. Obviously the smut was super hot too.
Bossy Bill is adorable because Tomi knows that he's really just nervous, innocent, and vulnerable. T_T crying at the complete sweetness
Author's Response: Heee. :D Yes they totally were! And the kiss. *_* I love those kinds of kisses. Thanks so much for the lovely compliments, I totally appreciate it! :D
Date: 09/18/10 06:00 pm Title: let me be your lover tonight
That was amazing, such a good plot and you wrote it perfect - I dont think you could change anything to make it better because it flows so well.
I love the pent up emotions at the beginning and you really set the story with the visuals.
You should be so proud of this, it is perfect!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I really appreciate the lovely compliments. I'm so happy you enjoyed all of those things. I'm very happy with this story, and thanks so much for your review!
Date: 09/18/10 05:21 pm Title: let me be your lover tonight
Dear God....I read this at work and I managed to become engrossed in the story so much that I missed my cue to go to commercial break during a live radio show and had to wipe drool from my mouth. How embarrsing. LOL.....Damn, it was good though.
Author's Response: Oh my god, this may be one of my best reviews ever. ;D Knowing you got that engrossed in my story is quite an awesome compliment, thank you!
Date: 09/18/10 04:33 pm Title: let me be your lover tonight
That was a beast of a one-shot. I feel exhausted now, I have to check and make sure I'm not Tom. *blink* Lots of moments in which gasps, squeaks and other various shocked sounds emitted from me, and I have to wonder why even after all this time, I still find twin-time somewhat unpredictable. (In particular ways, the general picture I'm consistently prepared for.) I suppose insatiability isn't always a bad thing. :) If the novelty doesn't wear, who am I to complain?
Cybering has never really been my thing, on any level. I don't know why, really, I just don't find it all that sexy. *blink* However, for what it's worth you made it so this was the sexiest I have yet to come by! *blinks some more, dry eyes* The classic fluff and twin elements, you can never really get enough of those, all very nice. :) I loved the questioning period, but I think my favourite thing (as always) was bossy, smart-alecky Bill, but protective Tomi can't be ignored. I think you really hit the bullseye with these traits, I enjoyed it so.
Anyway, this cheered me up a bit, it was a fun read. A bit of a challenge, but I like the feeling of accomplishment. XD Super job~~ ^^
Author's Response: It's the longest one-shot I ever posted! If I'd thought about word count before I went to post I might have broken it up into two parts, hee. And wow, I'm just happy this one-shot could evoke so many responses from you! Insatiability can be pretty awesome, though. For sure. ;D
Cybering was the request, so I gave it my best shot! I'm very pleased you found it to be sexy even though it's not normally your thing. And this is definitely the closest I will get to a "classic" twin story, I think! It was a pleasure. I think we see a lot of bossy, smart-alec Bill and protective Tom but it rings true, you know? Thank you, I'm pleased you thought I hit the mark.
So pleased to cheer you up even if it was awfully lengthy! Thanks so much.
Date: 09/18/10 03:55 pm Title: let me be your lover tonight
Oh wow, I've never read such a long smut before...
Except this wasn't really smut IMO. I loved the sex, it was hot and detailed and I loved the anticipation - though I think that maybe it was on the edge to become even too long, I don't know. But it was great just like I know you can write it :).
The most - however - I loved the way you wrote and built the twins relationship. You managed to catch all those nuancies and little details in a context of sex and it is a rarity to be able to do so. I wish I could ever write the element and especially that everlasting longing in my twins. It is unbelievablöe, it is the heart of twincest, and you did a great job bringing it to the story.
The idea of finally coming home when Tom was able to love Bill the fullest made my heart clench. It was so beautiful.
I can't even say was this hot or beautiful more. It was both. I feel so fulfilled with twin love right now. So great job, like you always do. :)
Author's Response: I tried to make it a bit of everything, you know? A full story. ;) It's the longest one-shot I've ever posted, for sure! Thank you so so much. ♥
It means a lot to me that you enjoyed everything about the relationship that I wrote between them. Thank you for the lovely compliments. ♥
And, I'm so pleased you enjoyed that, especially!
You're totally making me blush. ♥ I really appreciate your review.
Date: 09/18/10 01:18 pm Title: let me be your lover tonight
Oh and I still managed to be productive at work while reading it (except when the phone would ring in the middle of a particularly hot moment and I would swear under my breath that this wouldn't take long just to be able to read next part even if I already KNEW it all or nearly)
Author's Response: Woo woo, go productivity! ;D That's the difficult part of reading sexytiems at work, you know. Thank you again!
Date: 09/18/10 01:13 pm Title: let me be your lover tonight
I was even better than the 1st version!! =D
I really love the long cyber building part before getting to the actual sex! Totally what I was excpecting!
Thanks again!
Author's Response: I'm so happy to make it everything you were expecting! ♥ Thank you, I'm pleased you enjoyed it.
Date: 09/18/10 07:40 am Title: let me be your lover tonight
I love how this story isn't just smut, but has all the angst of the beginning and all the contentment of the ending. I also unreasonably love that one mention of Gustav ("You're an idiot")...haha, so much personality in such an off-hand remark.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm really happy you enjoyed all of those things in the story. And yes, his personality shines through with that. ;D Thanks for your review!
Date: 09/18/10 07:25 am Title: let me be your lover tonight
You did fucking AMAZING!!!!!!
I'm not even joking, this was the best thing I've read in MONTHS, and I read a lot of fics on THF. lol.
You managed to capture just about every emotion and nuance that makes twincest irresistable... the forbiddenness, the virgin!Bill (which is EPIC), the still brothers, the jokes, the "I've wanted this for so long", the emotional termoil, the drama, the love, the retarded SUPER SEXXXYNESS!! lol. Like wow, your graphic details in this story were "Top 5" I've ever read I think. They were fucking right in front of me, I swear. You can't get much better than this story unless someone was to drop an HD DVD in front of me of the twins *actually* fucking. lol.
You're a fantastic writer. I love your word choices and your fabulous dialogue, and the way your characters feel so alive and human. You hit all the right kinks with this one. I LOVED IT. Fantastic. :)
I'm about to go to bed a very happy girl. :)
PS- Thanks for making it so long! XD
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Ahh, wow! I'm really happy you enjoyed it so much, and got all of those things out of it. ♥ And wow, that's a pretty amazing number, I really appreciate it! :D This review put a big smile on my face. Thanks, I really appreciate the lovely compliments! And, I decided to post it all in one instead of chapters - glad you thought it worked!
Date: 09/18/10 04:55 am Title: let me be your lover tonight
NNNNGGGGHHHH OH GOD *puddle of goo* so so hot and yummy and oh damn I need some private time *huggles*
Author's Response: Mwaha--I mean, hee hee. Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it so much!
Date: 09/18/10 02:36 am Title: let me be your lover tonight
You did wonderfully. Wow.
Author's Response: :D ! Thank you SO much!
Date: 09/18/10 02:12 am Title: let me be your lover tonight
That was super hot. I loved it!! Great job!!
Author's Response: Thank you SO much! :D I'm really glad!