Date: 02/10/08 08:27 am Title: Apart
that is good. really good.
Date: 02/10/08 06:02 am Title: Apart
It's beautiful! You totally mezmerized me when Bill and Tom were alone in that room. It was like the whole world stopped. Amazing!
Date: 02/10/08 05:10 am Title: Apart
I always like seeing the twins from different perspectives, and you've done it beautifully. I love the vague heartbreak and the hopelessness the twins feel. I wish that meant they would look to each other for strength but that would be a perfect world and I could appreciate the fact that you weren't going to make it perfect and there was no clear cut solution. All in all, a great fic.
Date: 02/10/08 04:49 am Title: Apart
I've never read a story like that. Beautifull.
Date: 02/10/08 04:44 am Title: Apart
I can't name the feeling coursing through my body.
Sometimes lack of explanation means no resistance .
Beautiful
Date: 02/10/08 03:24 am Title: Apart
I cried. I don't cry when I'm reading fanfiction very often but this got me. It hurt to read but it was so very beautiful. The sense of loss was overwhelming.
Their foreheads were pressed together and Tom’s hand gripped the back of Bill’s neck, holding him in place.
So very powerful. That scene was so utterly heartbreaking.
Date: 02/10/08 03:17 am Title: Apart
oh my....!!!! (in love)
Date: 02/10/08 03:10 am Title: Apart
this is very interesting.
i'm looking forward to reading more of your works. XD
Date: 02/10/08 01:17 am Title: Apart
You. WRITE MORE.
And then he looked up, taking a step back. And it was done. Normal again. Wrong again.
Two halves again.
Apart.
Oh, goodness. What a beautiful, beautiful piece of writing. I loved it!
Date: 02/10/08 01:16 am Title: Apart
Wow this so suits my mood at the moment, I love the way this is written. I look forward to more :)