Date: 11/11/14 07:35 pm Title: Apart
Oh my god this is so moving, this is really a wonderful piece of writing.
I do so miss your writing, but I'm happy it's still here for whenever I need a fix :)
Date: 02/16/13 09:29 pm Title: Apart
God, this story is heartbreaking. So very heartbreakingly sad.
I've read it before, and I don't know why I haven't reviewed.
I think this fic is beautiful. One of the most beautiful I've ever read actually. I think it's the simplicity of it. Gustav saw so little, yet so much. It's incredibly powerful. This story is like a whole entire world in one punch, and it's knocking me over. There's so little here to hang on to, so little to grasp, and yet it makes me want to cry for the twins. I can see why Gustav would feel the same way. This story is just amazing. Nothing else like it. So simple and so deep at the same time. I'm thinking about it now, and I feel as helpless as Gustav. How can you help the twins hold on to a love so meant to be, so pure, and so wrong, when either they dont see it, or are fighting so hard to stay away from it?
Well done. This fic is a masterpiece IMO.
Date: 02/26/12 11:55 pm Title: Apart
i never read "G" stories - this was really lovely and extraordinary.
Date: 04/14/11 10:12 am Title: Apart
AW GUSTAV YOU IDIOT
you can't let them grow apart ;___;
awh. now i'm sad.
great story tho.
Date: 03/13/11 01:09 am Title: Apart
I can't type properly cos i'm crying so hard. That breathing thing shattered me. Sometimes I wonder if it's really like that... and my heart breaks even more.
Date: 01/30/10 11:04 pm Title: Apart
very captivating. I felt like I was actually in another world while reading this. I liked how you told it from Gustav's perspective because that's not something that's done a lot on here and it made things more interesting. I think you captured Gustav's personality very nicely in this too.
Date: 10/29/09 03:53 pm Title: Apart
Really good. I was mesmerized by the idea of them becoming sort of one entity as they stood there connecting. It was intense :)
Date: 09/14/09 10:43 am Title: Apart
I love allot of your stories, but this is one I come back to time and time again. It just seems so honest, we seem to learn as much about Gustav as we do about the twins though nothing at all is said directly about him.
It's as beautiful now as it was the first day I read it.
Thank you ever so much for sharing your art.
~riv
Date: 09/09/09 08:54 pm Title: Apart
What a great story you've got there.
I loved the writing, it was really careful and subtle. It just made the fic somehow... special. Wow.
Great work!
Date: 08/08/09 09:09 am Title: Apart
omg!soo beautiful!
:(
They grow apart everyday. Because they can’t grow closer.:(((
thats so true..
Date: 07/03/09 07:45 am Title: Apart
man, that was depressing.
BUT very well written!!!
Date: 05/14/09 09:21 am Title: Apart
The whole atmosphere of this story is so entirely special. It's heartbreaking, but lovely written. Really. ,_, < + 3
Date: 03/28/09 08:54 pm Title: Apart
Very painful and touching.
It gets to me how you described the dilemma Bill and Tom are in - are maybe all identical twins...being both right and wrong, wether together or apart.
Date: 02/21/09 09:12 am Title: Apart
I'm speechless........Beautifully written.
Date: 02/04/09 08:57 pm Title: Apart
The mood and emotions and overall point of this fic are extremely clear throughout it. The feeling of the twins growing apart and, later, the feeling of longing for each other in a way that they shouldn't long for each other is papable. You are an amazing writer. I can only hope to be like you.
It's from Gustav's point of view, right?
Author's Response: Thanks. :) And yes.
Date: 12/31/08 08:32 pm Title: Apart
holy shit this was fantastic. blew me away!
Date: 12/29/08 03:31 am Title: Apart
Beautiful!!! GAAAAAADD...
It's beautiful, yet so sad... I love it when you used Gustav's perspective. Just like him... Sigh...
This is just... SAD. But I love it... It's gotten into me... Sigh... *faves it!^^*
Date: 11/28/08 02:08 pm Title: Apart
WOW!
I...
I am amazed how fucking GOOD this was!!!!!!!!!
To see it from another POV is always refreshing.
Although it is a sad story, I am happy right now. I am happy for I have discovered it and read it and because it is SO GOOD!!!!!
Thank You a thousand times!
Date: 11/02/08 04:55 pm Title: Apart
This is really really depressing...I love it, but it's really depressing...Great job!