Date: 09/12/10 04:19 pm Title: Empty Eyes Accuse A Face So Evil
Curse of The Virgin Canvas?
Lol, I love Alesana so this is gonna be awesome.
Author's Response: yay, you guessed right! i love alesana, they are amazing, and they are amazing live! i hope i can make this a awesome story for an awesome band :D thanks for taking the time to stop an leave me some love <3
Date: 09/12/10 02:24 pm Title: Empty Eyes Accuse A Face So Evil
curse of the virgin canvas, creative. I personally didn't like the song all that much, but The story already sounds pretty good to me. I love angst with passion and I'm looking forward to finding out how (I'm presuming it's Tom, sweet little artist -murderer- tom ^-^) Killed his poor beloved Bill.
-cryeyes-
Nice style of writing, really captivating.
With love,
Dawn
Author's Response: yay, you guessed right :D and yes, the Artist is Tom. im really glad you like it, and thank you for taking the time to stop and leave me some love <3
Date: 09/12/10 01:57 pm Title: Empty Eyes Accuse A Face So Evil
mysterious! ;D i uber love it!!
Author's Response: im so glad you like it, makes me feel all :DDD thanks for taking the time to leave me some love <3
Date: 09/12/10 01:41 pm Title: Empty Eyes Accuse A Face So Evil
The bolded words are from Alesana's curse of the virgin canvas ! :O
You made me discover this great song :)
(Sorry for changing some of the lyrics sentences, I didn't know it was from a song :S :S)
Anyway, it's very well written and a very original idea :D
Good job
Author's Response: woot woot! you're the first person to guess it right! -gives cookies- ilove this song, and im glad i could share it with new people :D thanks so much for taking the time and leaving me some love <3
Date: 09/12/10 12:47 pm Title: Empty Eyes Accuse A Face So Evil
This is neat, so enthralling! It's like watching a movie; really vivid and personal.
Author's Response: thank you so much! and thanks for taking the time to leave me your input <3
Date: 09/12/10 12:31 pm Title: Empty Eyes Accuse A Face So Evil
Okay lol I have not the slightest clue where the bolded words are from. :p
Yay for using my banner? :3
Now onto your story...
Your summary is captivating, I loved it. :D Just to tell you!
The chapter was short, yet the way you got into Tom's mind was lovely. :) You really made it work. Hmm it was very emotional too.
So Bill is his lover... when you first told me about your plot I thought that Tom would find Bill dead on his sofa or shit and be like WHOTHEFUCKISTHISWTF and spazz... /shot
Mmmh.. Tom made love to him then woke to see him... bloodied and dead...? Blames himself? SO SUSPENSEFUL ALREADY OMG GO ON.
Tom do something...? Draw something that could've caused it? :O He obviously killed him, states so the last sentence. :p But OMG this is GOLD.
Please continue and update soon! *-*
< 3333333
Author's Response: lol, some people guessed. i know yay for amazing banners!!!! im glad people liked the summary, i was so scared they would be like, "eh, thats stupid, eh" i was so mad the chappie came out so short, but i SWEAR the next chappie is sooooo much longer, and it has a LOT more happening. and im so glad you like it, it makes me all :DDDD i will update very soon!