Date: 11/16/10 08:01 pm Title: Sweaty Hands Will Fail To Lock The Door
Oh wow! That was horrifying and heartbreaking. D:
Date: 11/16/10 07:51 pm Title: Empty Eyes Accuse A Face So Evil
Whoa, shit. >.> So like... Tom killed him? o.O
THE FUCK'S GONNA HAPPEN NOW? *runs away hysterically to chapter two*
Date: 11/04/10 01:35 pm Title: My Thirst for Blood Turns Me On
Oooh is it Gustav?
Oh dear Tom's on a mad man rampage XD xxx
Author's Response: it is, it is. i figured he would be perfect for this mysterious character. :0 thanks for leaving me a review <3
Date: 11/04/10 09:17 am Title: It Was Your Poisioned Kiss That Turned Me Into This
Oooh I'm loving this! It's very intriguing :) xxx
Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it! :) thanks for taking the time to leave me a review <3
Date: 11/04/10 01:57 am Title: My Thirst for Blood Turns Me On
Yeah, Bill, look what you started *roll eyes* (XD)
@beginning note: Eee, yay! :D
I listened to Hymn for the Shameless and The Thespian while reading this. At first I believed all the massacre-ing was all in his head.
Unfortunately I'm already pretty certain as to who that mysterious person is. Dang ppl who spoil things...
I find it very amusing in a dark way how easily he went insane.
In hindsight I will realize if I had never tipped my heads back should be 'head'
Oh so quickly, oh so easily.
"Oh so patiently,"
You want to put a comma after all these 'oh's.
Lol, and if you wanna be *really* accurate, generally women are 'blonde' and men are 'blond'.
Yay :D
Author's Response: gosh bill! xD i'm glad you liked the dedication :DDD aw, damn who ever did spoil it :/ and thanks for all the tips, i went back a fixed them all i think :) thank you so much for sticking with this story, and i hope the rest to come is to your likings. i will try to update sunday <3
Date: 11/04/10 12:01 am Title: My Thirst for Blood Turns Me On
The thespian? Maybe lol. I've read the emptiness. And this is wonderful, almost as great as the original.
I'm a fan. =]
Author's Response: ha, you know it! xD wow, you have absolutly no idea how much that means to me! thank you so much. you have just made my night :) thanks for talking the time to leave me some love <3
Date: 11/01/10 10:51 pm Title: It Was Your Poisioned Kiss That Turned Me Into This
Update?? :)
Author's Response: new chapter is up :) <3
Date: 09/18/10 01:37 am Title: It Was Your Poisioned Kiss That Turned Me Into This
Ooo, and you spelled 'decade' wrong.
I haven't slept alone in nearly a deacade.
And I think here: His poisioned lip is supposed to be 'lips'?
Lol and I recognize the last two (unboldened) lines from Lunatic's Lament.
Author's Response: well thats embarassing. thank you though, i'll fix it now . .. kay, it's fixed. and yup it is from that song, i really love that song <3
Date: 09/18/10 01:30 am Title: It Was Your Poisioned Kiss That Turned Me Into This
Lol I've already listened (and downloaded =O ) the first three songs off of The Emptiness. But I didn't want to listen to more than that or else I'd know the story XD
And filler is totally unavoidable. I would know. Readers should be fine as long as there aren't chapters upon chapters of filler XD
Author's Response: really? that's so awesome! i love the emptiness cd, and I'm glad you didnt want to ruin the story :DDD thanks for the assurance, i myself would die if my story came out with a ton of fillers x.x thanks for taking the time to leave a review <3
Date: 09/17/10 11:58 pm Title: It Was Your Poisioned Kiss That Turned Me Into This
How come I can't increase the text size with your story? D; I have to Zoom in with my internet browser. -.-
Anyways, filler short chapter but still gets me questioning.
Tom killed Bill for a purpose... not accidental.
and this part: You got what you deserved. If you are looking for peace, resolutions, fine. I did it all for you, it was all for you.
Makes me think.. Did Tom abuse or displease Bill somehow, making him want escape...? Like to Heaven or just away or some other sanctuary of some sort...? Strange. Really good though, very suspenseful...
I love the inner conflicts with Tom and his now (dead) lover...
Really interesting.
Thanks for fast updates. :p I couldn't wait. SERIOUSLY. Most people lie but I reread ch. 2. O_O
Yay next chapter will be long! ~:D
Thanks for entertaining us :3
Lovely story.
Cannot wait for future updates and what will come of Tom and his issues with Bill's death!
^_^
Author's Response: im sorry, but i have no idea why, i have n idea how that works. i barely figured out how to convert the file to even post. thanks so much, but i guess we will have to wait and see right? you reread chapter two?!?! -tears- i will update as soon as the chapter is finished :DDD thank you so much for leaving me so many lovely reviews b29; b29; b29; b29;
Date: 09/17/10 11:49 pm Title: It Was Your Poisioned Kiss That Turned Me Into This
OH TOM WHAT HAVE YOU DONNE? *needs explanation*
Author's Response: ha, you and tom both. I'll try to update soon. thanks for all the reviews <3
Date: 09/17/10 11:48 pm Title: Sweaty Hands Will Fail To Lock The Door
THIS IS SCARY. AND AWESOME
Author's Response: I was so scrared this chapter would scare people away x.x
Date: 09/17/10 11:45 pm Title: Empty Eyes Accuse A Face So Evil
WHOA. THAT'S INTRIGUING. WHAT HAPPENED! IWANNNNNNAKNOOWWWWWA
Author's Response: you'll have to wait and see xD
Date: 09/15/10 07:24 pm Title: Sweaty Hands Will Fail To Lock The Door
*cough* Gore doesn't bother me, but D;;; *cringes* Cutting off his body....?! Oh Jesus. I don't even... @_@
I was like ew, xD Picturing him just snapping his leg in half and gaaaaaaaaaaah! But your description was lovely, and you really captured it I was just a bit disturbed. xD
Either way, I was shocked at Tom. Roughly holding his lover like that... not letting him rest. But he comes back to life then. I knew that'd happen, just KNEW it.
I love the bolded words and writing style, very nice and imaginative. I love it.
Tom gets an axe in his neck...? Did I read that correctly? O_O!1
Thanks for the longer chapter btw. xD
"They'll be there soon" I'm assuming 'they' is the people, villagers, people.. Priest, and whatnot.
Interesting story, I'm craving what will happen next.
And when we'll see some artist!Tom parts, then Bill comes to life.. Damn, will be SOMETHING!
< 33333333
Author's Response: ha, about the gore, i find it quite amusing I can't write smut to save my own life, but gore and blood just come out like . . idk, it just comes out xD i hope i didn't freak you and other people out too much x.x personally i feel bad for tom, just waking up to a body and having to dispose of it. poor guy was just doing what he had to. sorta, tom uses the axes to take off the limbs, but a machete to take of the head, but not on himself of course x.x i tried to make this chapter as long as possible to make up for such a short first chapter. as for the 'they'll be here soon' we shall wait and see, huh ;DDD i'll try to update ASAP, and see what I can do to put some artist!tom for you :D thanks for taking the time to leave me such amazing reviews <3
Date: 09/15/10 11:00 am Title: Sweaty Hands Will Fail To Lock The Door
*is speechless*
I really have no idea what to say. I'm not grossed out, just .. wow. That's all I can think. Truly hauntingly beautiful.
Author's Response: I was really hoping the gore wouldn't scare people off :/ but thank you, and thank you for taking the time to stop and leave me your thoughts <3
Date: 09/15/10 07:47 am Title: Sweaty Hands Will Fail To Lock The Door
Oh my god..
Author's Response: *covers face with hands* i cant tell if thats a good thing or a bad thing
Date: 09/15/10 02:29 am Title: Sweaty Hands Will Fail To Lock The Door
wow i really love this. Its so detailed and well written. I hope you get better soon and grace us with a new chapter xD
Author's Response: thank you so much, i'm glad you enjoy my story! I'll try to update t least by this weekend. thanks for taking the time to leave me some love <3
Date: 09/15/10 12:32 am Title: Sweaty Hands Will Fail To Lock The Door
Lol, this is sick and gruesome in the most strangely magnetic way.
Author's Response: lol, i'm counting on that xD thanks for taking the time to leave me your thoughts <3
Date: 09/13/10 09:48 pm Title: Empty Eyes Accuse A Face So Evil
I appreciate the choice of first POV. It's give a deeper sense of insight to Tom's character. Your diction, use of words and the overall sentence structure amazes me. You effectively used very vivid use of imagery that gives a genuine mood and tone to the already haunting picture.
Beautiful use of lyrics and just choice of song in general. You know I'll always root you on this awesome bloody fic. Love you Emmers :3
--OWL
Author's Response: yay! i'm glad you like it! and if you like blood and gore, you'll love the next chapter :3 thanks so much for leaving me your imput <3
Date: 09/12/10 08:55 pm Title: Empty Eyes Accuse A Face So Evil
How interesting *clicks track button* Now Im curious as to what happens next :P Keep up the good work!!
Author's Response: thanks jared :D