Date: 05/29/18 07:17 pm Title: Chapter 10
are you ever going to add the last chapter??
Date: 05/21/11 04:11 pm Title: Chapter 10
Lol, I'm *still* confused! XDD
Gah! I hope I find out exactly what happened. Mentally unstable narrators aren't that reliable XD
Date: 05/21/11 04:10 pm Title: Chapter 10
Hmmm....... Awesome so is Tom dead? And even though it's a bit tricky to follow it's a really great story
Author's Response: . . .he is now. heh, sorry for confusion! The Next chapter (which really is the last!) will clear everything up :)
Date: 03/21/11 11:26 pm Title: Empty Eyes Accuse A Face So Evil
*-* It's showing on my computer that it cut off part of my review.. >.<
Anways, I was apologizing for any grammar errors I made.. xD
Date: 03/21/11 11:23 pm Title: It's Happening Again, It's Happening Again
You are an amazing writer *-*
I've been following this story from the beginning.
I adore this story :D
I actually found out about Alesana from this fanfiction. ;D
If you don't mind, on my Tumblr, I am making a page of my favorite authors on here, and I'd like to post part of this story and links to your page on here
Author's Response: wow, you have no idea how much your review means to me. Thank you so much! I'm also super excitd to hear that you know listen to Alesana! I adore them, seeing them in concert last year just made my whole life! lol Not to be corny, but . . I would be honored to be one of your favorite authors (well, if you still are anyway, being i took forever and a day to respond!), and pretty please could you put a link for me, so i can see as well? thank you so much for your support! <3 :)
Date: 03/16/11 01:46 am Title: It's Happening Again, It's Happening Again
Hehe, "In the Tomb by the Surrounding Sea". Does that mean there's two more chapters?
Oh my goodness, I need to know what happeniiiing! Hallucinating!Tom
Aw, I wish Bill would magically be alive again. Then maybe Tom would be sane again. Though there *was* that "what makes you think that I would let you live?" line XD
Date: 03/16/11 12:54 am Title: It's Happening Again, It's Happening Again
Okay um.... wow, wait who killed Bill? was it really Tom or.... I'm slightly confused. Poor Tom and Bill, well I would say Bill has it worse you with being chopped up (and possibly killed) by the one you love and all but I think Tom has it just as bad having to chop up your lover and all that jazz. But all in all a very depressing story......I LOVE IT!!
Date: 01/05/11 01:08 am Title: Dead Boys Don't Just Appear Out Of Thin Air
Omg this is an awesomely depressing story, but I'm a bit lost. It really good though ;)
Date: 01/04/11 11:36 pm Title: Dead Boys Don't Just Appear Out Of Thin Air
Eeee! Update :D
Also, I think this is the most confusing thus far of all the chapters XD He's crazy, I tell ya.
Date: 01/01/11 01:42 pm Title: My Feet Are Slipping
So first, I normally don't read storys with major character deaths in them because it makes me sad, even though I know it's not true. But sometimes, depending on the way ts writin it seems real to my mind. But anyways, I read your story because the summary was really well writin and I just couldn't stop myself. Your story is quite enthralling, maybe it's because it's writin in first person so you get a feel for what the character is feeling... Who knows. But it's good! Soooo you should totally update soon so we can all finally meet Bill. XD can't wait for the next chapter :D
Date: 12/05/10 01:42 am Title: My Feet Are Slipping
I'll make a banner for you! (Hehe, I assume you mean for future fics because all your current ones have one) I'm not as good as Cherryrose, bless her, but I'm pretty good. I made the one for my fic Nephilim.
Oh my god, why in the world did that guy kill Bill? Gah!
The man in the mirror was Bill?? But, that was... He said he saw a madman in the mirror
Date: 11/24/10 02:54 am Title: Her Somber Silhouette Dances For Me
so lyric-y! xD I want Bill to come, NOAW.
I love this inner conflicts Tom has.
And the fancy language. Pretty.
yay for early update too! ^_^
can't wait for more
Date: 11/23/10 08:19 pm Title: Her Somber Silhouette Dances For Me
*gasp* Mysterious. Brilliant as always.
There were a few times you referred to Bill as female in the lyrics, but Idk whether you meant to keep them like that.
Date: 11/22/10 10:29 pm Title: Her Somber Silhouette Dances For Me
Okay so Tom didn't really killed Bill but this other person?
Date: 11/17/10 05:27 pm Title: I Immerse Myself In Sick Reflection
Ooooh twisted xxx
Date: 11/17/10 04:04 pm Title: I Immerse Myself In Sick Reflection
This is..... dark, twisted, but yet it's beautful at the same time. I was hesitant to read this for a while. But I'm glad I did. I can't wait for more.
Date: 11/16/10 10:42 pm Title: I Immerse Myself In Sick Reflection
*gasp* I love this.
I've been singing Hymn of the Shameless for a couple days now.
Oh dear, Tom's still on the loose. I think/hope that he'll restore some of his love for Bill when he sees his sketchbook.
Mistakes:
It's not 'reek havoc', it's 'wreak havoc'. (Don't worry, that's a really hard one)
You said 'her' instead of 'his' in 'lying by her side?'
Date: 11/16/10 10:11 pm Title: I Immerse Myself In Sick Reflection
Short but yay an update! :)
I think Tom is not crazy, since crazy people don't think they're crazy lol. And that the boy isn't Bill.. just.. because.
I'm not fully sure how to respond to it, it wasn't much, but something. :p In honesty.
I really want to know if Bill will be back, and if the person he saw *is* Bill then.. yay! B/c I'd like to meet him. ^^
And the kid how she knew Tom was 'evil' is true, kids sense evil better. So that part stood out to me. :D
The chapter isn't a filler, since we look more into Tom's mind. :)
Date: 11/16/10 08:20 pm Title: My Thirst for Blood Turns Me On
:O Tom, you got CAUGHT. That's rule number one, hun. Don't. Get. Caught.
I can't wait for an update! :D :D And was it Andreas who saw him? o.O
Date: 11/16/10 08:17 pm Title: It Was Your Poisioned Kiss That Turned Me Into This
I don't even. I mean... I just don't even! What have you DONE, TOM? D: *babbles incoherently*
*runs away and reads chapter four*