Date: 05/15/25 07:29 pm Title: Chapter 8 - If you want your happy ending, you've really got to work for it.
That was awesome!
Date: 02/02/11 07:07 pm Title: Chapter 8 - If you want your happy ending, you've really got to work for it.
Thank you for that you wrote this story. I love time travel. I know how hard it is to write but you managed it perfectly. With my poor English I can not write more for you to understand it, so I'll write briefly: an amazing job! Thank you! Me & Google Translator with respect :o) Janule
Author's Response:
Oh man, I lost count of how many times I had to re-write this story because I realised I'd messed up the timeline. It's hard enough trying to keep track of a linear timeline, let alone one that jumps around all over the place!! XD
Heheh, I love you and your google translator replies! :P
Date: 01/31/11 05:18 pm Title: Chapter 8 - If you want your happy ending, you've really got to work for it.
Gosh i just love u man! This story is soo good, i love it! i didnt want it to end. i love how they left the messages for future referce, it fit really well. and how bill told her how he remembered it happening. lol. and the atmosphere around them both was so fitting. i just absolutely fricken LOVED it. its the best story-line idea ever. but it saddened me quite a bit that it ended so abruptly. i thought it'd go on a wee bit more. but its still pure awsomeness! now i really cant wait for that one-shot!ill be eagerly waiting for it!
Amazing job, just amazing. xD
Author's Response:
Thank you!! ^_^
Yeah, I'm not so good with endings - generally, I never know when to stop so I have to just cut off!! I'm working on it :P
I've finally got the one-shot up too, it's called "Well, to preserve the space time continuum and all..." :)
Date: 01/31/11 03:28 am Title: Chapter 8 - If you want your happy ending, you've really got to work for it.
my head is dying from the complexity of the time-space continuum. so bill went...explain the whole time-travel sequence again, please?
Author's Response: Lol, time travel is always a bit of a headache. I've put up a one-shot to go with this, found HERE, detailing the final chapter from Mini-Bill's point of view, which might help!! Drop me a line if you're still confused, I'll try to explain (without making my own head implode in the process!!) XD
Date: 01/31/11 02:12 am Title: Chapter 5 - This is an incredibly stupid idea. Why am I doing this?!!
wait...did hannah's grandfather travel in time too?
Date: 01/29/11 06:55 pm Title: Chapter 8 - If you want your happy ending, you've really got to work for it.
Have I mentioned how much I love you? I do. Hun, you totes rock my world. I’m so happy and at the same time torn that this series is coming to an end. But there’s always that oneshot to look forward to! And new stories? Hells yeah!
I am so proud of you, sweetie. I’ve read this entire series and I’ve got to say it has to be in my top 5 faves ;) You’re writing has improved over the coarse of this story too! And I mean that entirely as a compliment. I love your characters. You’re Bill is so adorable. You had me falling for the kid more with every chapter. Hannah is so awkward and over thinks everything. God, I love her. Lol
I can hardly wait to see what other wonderful stories you’ve got planned for us. Keep being awesome! :DD
Love times the power of infinity,
This girl! ;)
CJ
Author's Response:
Aww, thank you so much!! *blushes*
Hehe, I'm so happy you said that about Bill - when I was writing this series, I really didn't want him to be someone who everyone immediately loved just because it's Bill K., so I tried to balance him out and give him some less desirable traits (e.g. bit bratty, stupidly jealous) but at the same time, keep him likable too!! I'm glad you loved Hannah too - I'm always terrified of creating an original female character (particularly a romantic one!) for the pure fear of inadvertantly unleashing a Mary-Sue!! XD
Pssst!! The one-shot's up. :P
Date: 01/28/11 11:28 am Title: Chapter 8 - If you want your happy ending, you've really got to work for it.
Thanks for writing this :)
It was such a brilliant story.
I do love a good happy ending, being the sap that I am.
Author's Response: Yeah, there's nothing better than a happy ending :P Thank you!!
Date: 01/28/11 12:35 am Title: Chapter 8 - If you want your happy ending, you've really got to work for it.
hey, loved this! even if the ending was a bit sudden...D: great story, loved bill very much :D
Author's Response: Hehe, yeah I'm not so good with ending fics... I can't stop writing most of the time! XD Thanks! :)
Date: 01/28/11 12:10 am Title: Chapter 8 - If you want your happy ending, you've really got to work for it.
Well, as a die-hard slash fan, and a terrible lurkie-loo; I'll admit it. I've lurked since the first fic. However, THIS, my friend, was epic. I am so glad that this was written-even if it was het, lol...IM KIDDING! Het, when done WELL, like you have, makes all the difference. I'm sorry that I haven't left reviews and such, but in my defense, I have been deathly, deathly ill since this first started being posted. Enough rambling from me: Amazing. Simply wonderful!
Author's Response: Aww, thank you!! It really means a lot to know I got a slasher convinced :P Hehe, nah, I'm the same generally - I've seen far too many het fics where it all goes so horribly wrong due to some mary-sue self-insert with an angsty past (!) and I generally do stick to slash. Hannah's actually the first original female character I've created in fanfic for a couple of years! I hope you're feeling better, I'm sending lots of positive vibes your way :)
Date: 01/27/11 10:49 pm Title: Chapter 8 - If you want your happy ending, you've really got to work for it.
omg I loved it, every part of it :)
I loved the little time messages they gave each others it was so right and appropriate, I also liked the fact that despite all what they went through they were able to remember those little details (because if I were in that situation I probably would have forgotten everything in the same week I was told) :D
I really liked all and the part when she told and payed to Charlie and Hayley that she've got another interesting job to add to her CV it was hilarious and little bill was so cute and dumb.
I love this story congrats and thank you for such a wonderfuls chapters :}
Author's Response: Hehe yeah, they've both got specifically good memories as far as each other is concerned. Come on though, if you knew Bill, you'd probably dedicate a lot of time to memorising everything he said to you!! XD Thank you!! ^_^
Date: 01/27/11 09:28 pm Title: Chapter 8 - If you want your happy ending, you've really got to work for it.
Loved it. Loved it loved it loved it!
Wonderful ending. Open enough to get your imagination going but closed just the right amount for it to be The End.
I really do adore Hannah and Bill's chemistry here. It has the long-term friendship vibe I think you were going for but the romance added didn't feel out of place at all.
It was a wild ride and I'm a little bummed to see it go, but great job Alice! Well done indeed. :D
Author's Response: Thank you! :) I'm so glad you liked Hannah and Bill's chemestry as that's exactly what I was going for! I wanted them to be completely comfortable around each other because I think there's nothing more jarring than when your reading romance and you can't stop thinking "Wait, WHY are you together?!?" I admit, I had far too much fun writing some of the banter between them :P
Date: 01/27/11 09:11 pm Title: Chapter 8 - If you want your happy ending, you've really got to work for it.
I LOVED this series!!! I actually didn't want it to end!
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Date: 01/27/11 08:14 pm Title: Chapter 8 - If you want your happy ending, you've really got to work for it.
Amazing Ending! And loved the story!
Author's Response: Thanks!! :)
Date: 01/27/11 07:57 pm Title: Chapter 8 - If you want your happy ending, you've really got to work for it.
I wish I was on a computer so I could leave a massive review for you. But for now I will say this. ~I FRICKEN LOVE YOU~ xD
Author's Response: Thank you!! XD
Date: 01/27/11 07:25 pm Title: Chapter 8 - If you want your happy ending, you've really got to work for it.
I love this fic so much i can't believe its over. I can't wait for that one shot.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'll have the one-shot up hopefully on Monday... ;)
Date: 01/24/11 10:22 am Title: Chapter 7 - One mad sprint across Malaysia later...
ohh please update soon this has to be one of my all time favorite fictions :P
Date: 01/17/11 12:13 pm Title: Chapter 7 - One mad sprint across Malaysia later...
What a wild rollercoaster ride that was! It left me speechless there for a minute or two--but clearly I've recovered.
Lovely, just lovely. I like how personal each chapter seems to be, with Hannah's little sidenotes and anecdotes. It really wraps you up and takes you along with her. That's probably why you get so many hysterical reviews. XD
But this is definitely one of my favorite stories and I can't wait to see it finished, though it'll probably be a little bittersweet for me, as it will be THE END. Oh well!
Date: 01/03/11 09:48 pm Title: Chapter 7 - One mad sprint across Malaysia later...
TT_TT this is pure awesomeness, but when's the next udate going to appear? x]
Date: 11/29/10 06:05 pm Title: Chapter 7 - One mad sprint across Malaysia later...
Oh.....Mein....Fickin....Gott...!!!
that was wicked!! omg i SO did not expect another time warp bill to pop up !
such a cliff hanger. why do you kill me so? i cant wait for the next update!
if theres no new chapter soon, i think there might be blood shed >:D
i loved it a million times over.
Date: 11/26/10 09:28 am Title: Chapter 7 - One mad sprint across Malaysia later...
I'm going into a total melt down right now and so is my friend !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU CANT DO THIS TO US !!!!!1 MUST HAVE MORE BEAUTIFUL BILL STORY (i think u just killed my friend)
PLEASE BRING HIM BACK IN [PROPER AGE!!!!!! OHMYFREAKINGGOD I AM SERIOUSLY FREAKING FREAKING OUT HERE!!!!!!!!! I CAN'T FUCKING BREATH PROPERLY!!!!! PLEASE BRING HIM BACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Oh my God, breathe woman!!!! Deeply in... and out. In... and out! (And I hope your friend's OK!!) :P