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Reviewer: Autumn_Lane Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/14/10 10:15 pm Title: Chapter 2 - And once reality ensues, so does the screaming.

I think that Hannah and Bill were kinda out of line but i love it keep them coming

Author's Response: Yeah, they're both as bad as each other really... :P Thanks!

Reviewer: kcrose Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/14/10 09:34 pm Title: Chapter 2 - And once reality ensues, so does the screaming.

Loved it can't wait till the next chapter! I am so happy you are continuing this story line.

Author's Response: Hopefully the next chapter will be up next week at some point! :) Thanks!!

Reviewer: cleverone Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/14/10 09:16 pm Title: Chapter 2 - And once reality ensues, so does the screaming.

bill is sooooo jealous! loved it!

Author's Response: Haha thanks!! :)

Reviewer: Geekasme Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/14/10 08:38 pm Title: Chapter 2 - And once reality ensues, so does the screaming.

Oh no!!! Bill was kinda douche but i'm guessing it was because he was...Jealous...? please update soon :D I'm hooked

Author's Response: Thanks! :) And mmmnnyeess.... maybe he was jealous... *mysterious smirk*

Reviewer: Geekasme Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/13/10 09:48 pm Title: Chapter 1 - And after the fun times, reality ensues.

This is wonderful!! this story reminds me of "The Time Travelers Wife" and it makes me want Bill and Hannah to get together. Please update soon :D

Author's Response: Heheh, thanks!! :) Yeah, a friend of mine pointed out after I started writing this that it was a bit Time Travellers Wife-esque but funnily enough, when I started this, it never actually occoured to me! Someone in a later chapter actually does briefly refer to the book... :P

Reviewer: JumbieCasanova89 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/10/10 10:41 pm Title: Chapter 1 - And after the fun times, reality ensues.

I wonder, Is Hannah's friend in a TH video? because it said she was going to br in a rock video.
How old is Bill this time?

Author's Response:

Nope, Hayley's just in a random music video - although she does reveal the name of band later in a squee moment! :P

rn

And Bill's age is quite significant... Hannah works it out in the next chapter.

Reviewer: Autumn_Lane Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/10/10 06:55 pm Title: Chapter 1 - And after the fun times, reality ensues.

OMG i wonder what bill is ganna say? what is he ganna do? how old is he? haha OMG i FUKIN LOVE IT

Author's Response:

Heheh, Bill's age is actually quite important... It'll be revealed in the next chapter :P

rn

Thanks!! :D

Reviewer: TokioFan89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/10/10 11:40 am Title: Chapter 1 - And after the fun times, reality ensues.

Poor Hannah. Is this the fight in the summary? Anyway yay for this story.

Author's Response: Yeah, this is the aforementioned fight... well, the start of it anyway! :P Thanks!

Reviewer: Janule Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/10/10 11:31 am Title: Chapter 1 - And after the fun times, reality ensues.

If you don't mind that my response will be a bit muddled, because I'm really lousy English, so I'll write you. ;-D Google Trnslator my assistant sometimes is a complete bitch :-D, so I hope you understand my reviews. At least I try. :-)
First, I want to tell you how happy I was when I saw the sequal "Thirteen." I love Hannah so much, she is a funny girl, who was lucky in life, that she met Bill. Unfortunately, now she sits naked on her bed :-D, and must face the angry Bill, which is probably jealous of Paul :-D Or is it something else? Perhaps he had read her letter that she was dying of cancer? :-D She is very imaginative, I am very curious to see if she will meet with Bill in real time, and I hope that soon I'll be able to read the next chapter of your amazing story.
There will be grammatical errors, for heaven's sake! :-D me & my helper Google Translator J. :o)

Author's Response:

Go go Google Translator!! :D

rn

Hehe, thanks!! :) And yes, Bill's probably just a little jealous... but why on earth would he be so? :P

Reviewer: peachicetea Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/10/10 09:13 am Title: Chapter 1 - And after the fun times, reality ensues.

God i love you i really truly do
marry me?
love it you have a talent
xx

Author's Response:

Aww, thank you!! OK, I'll marry you! :D When's good for you? I say a Christmas wedding's quite romantic... :P

Reviewer: moniixmoore Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/10/10 07:59 am Title: Chapter 1 - And after the fun times, reality ensues.

oh mannn i NEED THE NEXT CHAPTERRR

Author's Response:

Hehe, it's coming sooooon!! :)

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