Date: 09/01/14 10:09 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh. My. GOD.. This is so incredibly good! Ahhh damn that was intense. Great job with the descriptions in his blindness, ya feel kinda lost with him, which just makes the whole thing better :D
Date: 12/20/12 10:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
I don't really care TOO much about Georg's objectification. I mean, it's smut. That's kinda the point: To make everyone in the smut a sex object, unimportant, or a cock-block XD Plus, Bill and Tom were just too hot in that for me to care about Georg XD Awesome fic, Clare-san, and I can't wait to read more of your stuff ^-^
Date: 04/30/12 07:07 am Title: Chapter 1
objectification of Georg? I Love it. I dont thing Georg minds either (snicker) I really like this story
Date: 12/27/11 02:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
I feel like a total creep to review this story second time but it's Christmas and I am skimming through my all time favorites in THF and this one is definitely one of them.
Still as amazing as the first time I read it a year ago or so. Left me all breathless and in haze. Marvelous thing!!!
Date: 01/21/11 08:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
omg this was amazing :D
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Date: 10/17/10 09:03 am Title: Chapter 1
Whoa whoa WHOA! That was, man, I can't even function after reading that xD I can't BEGIN to tell you how much I felt reading that. It was an emotional tyrade! Seriously, oh god, I'm left speechless. I'm not really into bondage, and this is one of only a handful I've read but a friend recommened this so I headed on over and was completely knocked off my feet o__O Wow you have incredible writing talent. Something just so powerful in your words. I'll definitely be checking out more of your work other than the two I've just read :) God I could feel Bill's desperation running throughout this, it was, gaaah, SO good *___*
Author's Response: This is such an incredibly sweet review - thank you so much! I've always loved bondage, but purely because of the psychological aspect of it... to me it just intensifies everything that the character is feeling (which is why it means so much to hear that you could really relate to Bill and sense his desperation). That you called the story an 'emotional tirade' is just beyond flattering, and I'm so incredibly happy that you enjoyed the fic. Thank you again for all your kind words, and sorry for taking ages to respond! xoxo
Date: 09/26/10 11:17 pm Title: Chapter 1
The desperation is utterly devine
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 09/13/10 03:56 am Title: Chapter 1
I am amazed..... one of the most evocative, imagery-rich, intense, INTELLIGENT smut stories I have read on this site so far. Such a piece of brilliance.
I have to repeat.....INTELLIGENT. You did such a terrific job to get under Billīs skin, into his head, into his boiling blood. How you describe his psyche is mind-blowing.
This story is also incredibly well-balanced, awesomely paced, never repetitive, just pulls you in and takes your breath away.
Georgīs presence in this story was written with just a brilliance! Just a touch of him, just a shadow of a comfort-giving character that is not threatening, overpowering but rather completing and counterbalancing Tom/Billīs electrifying chemistry, toning everything down a bit, taking too sharp edges of their intensity away just a bit to make it just PERFECT. It takes skills to write this way, girl!
Gosh, I could ramble about this oneshot forever, thatīs how damn good it is. You are bloody talented, you know that. Canīt wait for something new coming from you.
Author's Response: You should know that this review makes me smile to the point that i look like a deranged lunatic. As I'm sure you've picked up on, I tend to write a lot of pretty explicit smut lol, but my favorite thing about writing sex is not the sex itself, but what it says about the characters and their relationship. This is why it means so much to me that you mentioned the way the fic emphasizes Bill's psychological experience, and how Georg's presence impacts the dynamic between the twins. I wish I could hire you to give me your thoughts on everything I write lol, because your reviews are just incredible. If I could get away with it, I would print them out and stick them to my mirror as a source of daily validation lol
Date: 09/09/10 11:22 pm Title: Chapter 1
I'm crying, I just...that so beautiful and full of so many things and it's so hard for me to feel the emotions a fic is meant to make me feel, it almost never happens, but this- I seriously don't even know what to say.
Thank you, thank you thank you, that was...everything.
Author's Response: *hugs you* This is probably one of the sweetest reviews I've ever gotten, and I can't tell you how flattering it is that that you were able to feel the fic so strongly. Thank you so much.
Date: 09/09/10 01:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
*___________*
That was so hot and twisted and perfect!
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Date: 09/09/10 10:43 am Title: Chapter 1
so hot!!! need...sequel...nau!!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 09/09/10 05:45 am Title: Chapter 1
That... I... you...?!
*searches for breath* You blew me away o.ō That was hot, girl. And I usually don't like Biorg (or any pairing with Georg, I'm not interested XD) but I was so focused on Bill that it could have been anyone down there and I wouldn't have minded!
You described everything so perfectly well that I could feel the desperation and that feeling of beeing overwhelmed that Bill was having... I was really out of breath at the end, and... hot. Yeah, definitely hot XD
It was good reading something from you again *jumps happily* Love you! *hugs*
Author's Response: Fedy *glomps you* I am just now going through and responding to reviews (having yesterday finished that other fic that I told you about ages ago), which means that PBTR is next!! (And also on the list is beta'ing your billshido oneshot, which you should know I feel absolutely ashamed about for not getting back to you months ago. Literally, months ago. Have I told you that I am the slowest person/worst friend in the world? If i haven't, I'd like to take this opportunity to assure you that I am.) Anyway, I'm deep into another bushido obsession as I'm prepping myself to start writing him again (I've read his autobiography again, and watched his movie. And his Berlin's most wanted video about 45 times. And his tamarrata one with Kay One. And his BMV with Fler. Fine, I've watched all his videos an embarrassing number of times). But this is a review response and not one of my remarkably pointless and tangential emails that I occasionally send you about Bushido lol, so I want to thank you and tell you that you are incredibly sweet. Also, your comment about Georg made me laugh because I feel pretty much the same way... we are so alike in our preferences, it's scary. Mwah! xoxox
Date: 09/09/10 04:40 am Title: Chapter 1
Thank you!! <3
Author's Response: *hugs*
Date: 09/09/10 02:05 am Title: Chapter 1
i dont understand why bill had to have georg fuck him? i mean, damn me if it wasn't hot, but still...thats the only thing i dont get.
Author's Response: I think that Bill has quite a few little kinks, and that he found the idea of Georg fucking him quite pleasant lol :)
Date: 09/09/10 01:45 am Title: Chapter 1
Just wow, just saying this was hot doesn't even begin to describe the amazingness of this story. Please tell me there will be a sequel to this so yummy -licks lips-
Author's Response: Thank you so much :) I do have a sequel of sorts in my mind, but whether or not I find the time to write it is another issue...
Date: 09/09/10 01:08 am Title: Chapter 1
Oooohhh Daaayuuuum!!!! O__o
Deff wanna kno how the twins repay dear Geo. 8-) Heehee
Author's Response: lol :)
Date: 09/09/10 12:53 am Title: Chapter 1
FAACK. Yes, Georg is a good, good friend. Willing to fuck Bill like that. ;)
Very hot.
I need a moment. Alone.
Author's Response: loool :)
Date: 09/08/10 11:58 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is one of the greatest stories I have ever read on this site.
Amazing!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Date: 09/08/10 11:46 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ngghhhlkajsdf *____* Omg, I loved this way, way too much. *wipes drool off keyboard* Loved the bondage, loved the voyeurism, loved every bit of this. :)*faves*
Author's Response: Awww, thank you so much!
Date: 09/08/10 11:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
the begging just killed me :0
I just love being submisive like that
Author's Response: Thank you :)