Date: 07/02/11 11:59 am Title: Was It Not Enough To Just Have Me?
beautifully melancholic... the lyrics of the song you used were amazing, and fitted very much too ^^
Date: 11/04/10 08:43 am Title: Was It Not Enough To Just Have Me?
terribly beautiful
Author's Response: thank you so much :) im glad you think so, it's such an amazing song too
Date: 09/11/10 06:49 pm Title: Was It Not Enough To Just Have Me?
Wow... This is amazing... I can't find anything wrong with it.... Just wow ^^
Author's Response: thnks so much for the review, I'm glad you liked it <3
Date: 09/09/10 12:13 pm Title: Was It Not Enough To Just Have Me?
... It was good... Even if i didnīt like it... Iīm crying... I hate it when people die... The weird thing is, two I knew, just killed their selfs, and I didnīt even cry over that... But Iīm crying over this... Am I sick?
Author's Response: thank you :), I'm sorry I made you cry, but I don't think you're sick, maybe you're just not ready to cry, and you could be expressing it in a different way, not everybody cries. Thank you so much for the review <3
Date: 09/08/10 10:14 pm Title: Was It Not Enough To Just Have Me?
;_; that's really sad. The lyrics were really powerful.
The only thing is I would have tried more to express the desperate emptiness and exhaustion Tom must have felt to reach that point. Because even to leave Bill, he must have reached some sort of boiling point and everything turned upside down and gone downhill. To even come to distrust Bill might have reflected more in Tom's last words (maybe more of "why do you care, Bill?")
Really though, great read!
Author's Response: thank you so much for your imput! I was disappointed i couldn't get a true indepth reason for why Tom wanted to go, I was just so desperate to get it up. I hope one day I can go back and rewrite it, let more of the story come out. But still, thanks for giving my story a chance, and for leaving a review! <3
Date: 09/08/10 09:43 pm Title: Was It Not Enough To Just Have Me?
However, I think you wrote it so beautifully :"> Short oneshots with big BIG emotional impact deserves attention and love :"D *gives story attention and love*
I've never actually heard of this song before and I think it adds more to the suicide sort of effect. Great descriptions and use of words!! :3
[Also, it's not so bad seeing the banner in action ;)]
--Jilly
Author's Response: yay! long review!rnrnlol, yeah youre right, so i went and changed it xDrnrnthank you so much! i'm so glad i can finally share it!rnrnand it really does look good doesnt it? *admire's banner*rnrn*huggles* thanks for making me finish it jilly!
Date: 09/08/10 09:12 pm Title: Was It Not Enough To Just Have Me?
this was incredibly sad... *cries*... I loved it though.
Author's Response: did you really, or is you just sayin that? thanks for the reviews though babes. ich liebe dich :DD
Date: 09/08/10 08:59 pm Title: Was It Not Enough To Just Have Me?
THIS IS SO SAD UR BRILLIANT I LOVE IT
Author's Response: thank you so much :DDD I'm glad you like it :)