Date: 03/29/15 03:14 pm Title: Chapter 25: Destruction
Awesome fic - would love to read more!
Date: 04/12/13 06:34 am Title: Chapter 25: Destruction
Omg. You can't be serious... There's no chapter anymore! Please write more soon!
Date: 02/23/13 12:01 pm Title: Chapter 25: Destruction
I realize there is a thing called "real life"....however, this is simply too good to be left unfinished! I really hope you come back to it again.
Date: 08/13/12 01:53 am Title: Chapter 25: Destruction
So... I was thinking about this last night. I can't remember if Shyaa was born human and incepted as Bill is or not. If he was not then would that mean that Shyaa would have to incept Tom? I'm just curious because of the predicament they are in at the moment. Bill's blood is mixing with Tom's although since they do have the same blood to start with, could Bill actually change Tom? Not to mention would Bill be strong enough to do it and would Tom be strong enoght to go through such a thing at the moment. It seems that Shyaa would have to heal Bill as Bill is trying to heal Tom. I'm nervous that it would drain too much from Bill in the end even though Bill is trying. This is a really scary thing for them. Both Bill and Tom are hurt and they are in a very unsafe place to try help them. Bill seems stronger than Shyaa thought since he was able to stop Tom from being cut but not them both from being shot. I so interested in how this will play out. every time I read it I get more curious about it.
Date: 07/31/12 01:30 am Title: Chapter 1: Abduction
Please up date soon. I want to know what happens to them!!!
Date: 05/13/12 12:11 am Title: Chapter 25: Destruction
Wonderfully sad but at least they are together. Though Tom is going to have a rough awakening. Especially when he sees the changes that Lil' Tom has gone through...
Author's Response: Lil' Tom... that is too freaking funny. Yeah, waking up for him won't be entirely pleasant. LOL
Date: 04/06/12 11:35 am Title: Chapter 25: Destruction
Noooooo nonononono! This cannt stop here! This Is too good to stop here. What happend r they alive or dead?? Moore i beg you....
Author's Response: I'm a slow at responding to reviews as I am at updating, sorry about that - but thanks for reading! I'm re-editing the initial chapters of the story which is what has slowed things up a bit.
Date: 04/06/12 05:25 am Title: Chapter 8: Completion..?
Hahaha so far i reaally like it!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 03/30/12 05:26 pm Title: Chapter 25: Destruction
I´m happy, you updated. thank you!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading!
Date: 03/29/12 08:13 am Title: Chapter 25: Destruction
aaaah, it's ridiculous how happy I get every time this is updated. I adore your stories and your writing style and I'm exceptionally intruiged by this story. It's so well built, written and portrayed! I love the fact that it's about the twins trying to find each other (and when they do, this happens, figures) yet also about the change in the world and the change of Bill vs Tom. Something is going to happen with that, I'm sure of it.
either way, I loved this chapter and I hope you update soon!
Love,
dawn
Author's Response: Hi Dawn! Glad you're still with me. Yeah, you knew I wasn't going to make them finding each other easy, right? LOL I am working right now to re-edit the rest of the story because I've learned so much in the past year that the previous chapters have gotten a little painful for me to look at. The content of the story isn't going to change, I'm just fixing the awkward phrasing and attribution. It's slowing me down a little, but I'm trying to get the update done too!
Date: 03/29/12 02:37 am Title: Chapter 25: Destruction
OMG!!!!!!! I waited so long!!!! Finally you came back!! :)
This chapter... I'm so happy they found eachother but so sad :( I hope Bill can save them both but I'm worried he won't have the streangth. I can't believe it... that they bothe were shot but I knew something was going to happen. That it wouldn't be that easy. I hope Shyaa can help but there are still the others. The ones on the train. They will have to get through them to make it to Bill and Tom. Now I'm really scared :( I love this story though. Please update sooner than later. I don't know if I can wait that long again with them near death.
Author's Response: Yes, I'm here! Sorry for the long wait! Right now I'm re-editing the rest of Incepted because the attribution and word usage is awkward, but I'm also plugging ahead with the finish. Don't be too scared, although yes, I did kill Dax. That was a weird, spur of the moment decision and I forgot to update my warning to account for it. Whoops... Anyway, working on the next chapter and the edits - I have vacation coming up so I'm hoping to get a lot of the work done then.
Date: 12/12/11 02:57 pm Title: Chapter 1: Abduction
It's funny, because I *just* started reading the first of the Wraeththu books and *they* remind me of *Bill* XD
I think I'm going to finish Enchantments before reading this, though. Just so I understand it more.
Author's Response: The Wraeththu series is definitely work a read, I'm obviously a big fan. And yeah - isn't Bill just SO like one of them? lol
Date: 11/13/11 07:23 pm Title: Chapter 24: Obfuscation
Very glad to see the update and can't wait for the next one : )
Author's Response: Thanks for sticking with me, I'm working on the final few chapters now!
Date: 11/13/11 12:39 pm Title: Chapter 24: Obfuscation
I'm so glad you finally updated this. This is definitely one of my favorite fics and I would have been sad if it had died. :D
Author's Response: I'm too stubborn to let it die unfinished, I just get slow sometimes. LOL So glad you enjoy it!
Date: 11/10/11 11:55 pm Title: Chapter 24: Obfuscation
How terrifiying for them. The spell worked though. I love Bill so much in this. He is so amazing. I can't wait to see what happens when they finally find Tom. I'm worried though. Shyaa is still not telling Bill everything I think. He just passed over telling Bill what the ache could be.
Author's Response: I always write Bill to be pretty strong because I believe he is, despite how fluffy he can be at times. I'm glad you enjoy my version!
Date: 09/25/11 11:25 pm Title: Chapter 1: Abduction
I hope you haven't forgotten about this story! I love it so much. You've made me want to read the books it's based on, so the series is on my Amazon wishlist. lol. :D Please come back!
Author's Response: I haven't forgotten, I just got HORRIBLY blocked up on this story. New chapter is up and I have about four (I think) to go, before we reach the bitter, bitter end (kidding). Thanks for sticking with me and I hope you enjoy Storm's books!
Date: 07/05/11 12:00 am Title: Chapter 1: Abduction
Hey, You keep forgetting about us :( i hope everything is ok for you,
Author's Response: I am good, it's just horrendous Wraeththu-related writing block. The new chapter is up though! Thanks for hanging in there!
Date: 05/22/11 11:09 pm Title: Chapter 23: Exhibition
I'm re-reading the series and your story is a great bit of extra to go along with the books. Looking at Bill and Tom, they would be perfect. Bill reminds me of Pellaz.
Author's Response: Hello to a fellow Storm fan! I'm glad you're enjoying my TH related homage to her work. I agree, Bill has many Pell-like qualities. And Tom I suppose could be a bit like Terez...
Date: 05/20/11 04:31 pm Title: Chapter 1: Abduction
Yey you're back! Great as always ;)
Author's Response: Technically I didn't leave - I just got VERY distracted writing other things. I have that problem with writing way too much at once, unfortunately. Glad you enjoyed!
Date: 05/20/11 02:32 am Title: Chapter 23: Exhibition
Wow! That was just...wow I just... Ok I don't have words right now but I promise I'll come up with some ok ;)
Author's Response: The wow is good - thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed, writing Grissecon was trickier than I thought it would be.