Date: 09/21/10 03:31 pm Title: Chapter 5: Inception
Hey, I think way more people would r&r if you changed the summary and got a banner.The story line is really cool and people here typically seem to go for similar fics.
Author's Response: Thanks for the suggestions! I would love to have a banner, I have tried to contact two artists so far who are listed in the banner section but haven't gotten any response from either one. I will keep trying though! I'll also keep tweaking the summary to try to make it more intriguing, I've been struggling a bit with what to say there.
Date: 09/21/10 02:37 pm Title: Chapter 5: Inception
Very descriptive, especially the inception part. I liked "frost lightning."
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 09/16/10 09:58 pm Title: Chapter 4: Preparation
Could you please have someone draw a pic of their genitals, because I have no idea what it's supposed to look like.
Author's Response: Ironically the only drawn image I know of is actually on the cover of the RPG book - it's the lighter image behind the dagger. I believe that's what it looks like when the "petals" are open and it's erect. Here's a link...rnrnhttp://www.dot20.com.br/wp-content/uploads/2010/05/wraeththu-cover.jpgrnrnObviously instead of a hilt it would be joined to the body in the appropriate spot. I'm sorry I couldn't do a better job on the description; it's a difficult thing to describe effectively!rnrnHope this helps!
Date: 09/14/10 09:46 pm Title: Chapter 3: Destruction
This looks so cool! I looked up the wraeththu universe and Bill so fits that description.
I have to say it's not that often that I find a new, chaptered fic that is both unique and interesting in plot, as well as expertly written. But this one fits the bill! (NPI)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review! I've been writing for a long time, but this is my first ever attempt at fan fiction of any kind - I'm enjoying the writing process of it very much.rnrnRegards,rnrnAzaria