Ohhh my.... Hawt dayummm!! That was positively delicious!! The description of this was awesome too as it's clearly different than sex amongst humans. So hawt might I add. I lovve the last line "We must have inspired them." Made me smile. ;-)

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad that you enjoyed! I'm in the process of re-editing my current chapters to make them flow smoother, but I should still be able to upload the next chapter this coming week sometime.

i can not even explain in words how very thoroughly i enjoyed that. i honestly expected it to be at least a little...icky? Strange? Creepy? it was actually very intense and realistic. like this is legit stuff happening. you are an artist. truly. i can't wait to read more [:

Author's Response: Thank you! I was actually a little unhappy with that scene so I tweaked and reloaded it again this morning. It hasn't changed significantly I just wanted to smooth out a bit of the language. I am glad you enjoyed it though and weren't 'icked out'. LOL

Wow.. Um.. that was interesting to say the least but oh so sweet. It was an interesting description and I actually liked it. Shyaa must care more that we know because he didn't push Bill. He also kept away from what Bill didn't want to do... Create life. I'm not sure how I feel about it either. I'm happy for them though and I can't wait to see where this adventure takes them. Oh please find Tomi.

Author's Response: Tom did get left in a bit of a cliffhanger for this chapter - I'll be heading back to where he wound up next. Thanks for reading!

I can't believe the amount of love I hold for this story, after just having discovered it!
It's so complicated, foreign and absolutely amazing in all it's strangeness.
The scene wasn't confusing at all, you're very good at explaining.
But I have to ask, did you get this from the book too, or did you come up with this yourself?
Because well, I'm still amazed by the emount of realism that I find within Shyaa, Juri and Finn.

I really like what's going on and that it's going slow, but I can't wait for Tom and Bill to be re-united again, though I'm not sure how soon that will be.
I hope Tom will be incepted.. *grins* I would love to see him discovering his 'female parts'
Sorry, that was mean. I really do hope everything will be allright.

God I'm so happy now, because you updated..
do it again, soon, please?
~Dawn

Author's Response: Thank you! Your comments always give me *squee*. To answer your question; Aruna is not described in quite this much detail in the books by Constantine, she leaves parts to the reader's imagination so I filled them in the ways that seemed the most interesting to me. Shyaa, Juri and Finn are all original characters that I created - Juri and Finn just for this story, whereas I've been writing Wraeththu fiction with Shyaa in it for a long time (I think about seven years now). In the next chapter I'll be catching up on what happened to Tom. You're giving me interesting ideas of scenes to write for him further down the line... lol This tale is getting long and will probably be longer, and in my head I'm already plotting a sequel. Talk about getting ahead of myself!

Wow Bill! way to PMS love. Poor Tom I really hope he's ok and I hope these people don't have ill intentions towards him. Bill seems so confused but at the same time he also seems to understand now what he needs and why he needs it. I hope Juri doesn't hate him, Bill didn't mean to do what he did. Really hope that Bill can find Tom. I don't think that even after Bill is better he will be easy to wake. I'm not sure that this problem was caused soley by lack of parnic energy. If Bill's mind is attached to Tom's then it would cause a mental strain on him to almost physicaly be with Tom in a dream. Just being in a deep sleep like state in order to comunicate with his brother could make it difficult to disconnect from Tom and making it hard for them to wake Bill. Both issues make sense. I can't wait to see what Bill is like after he and Shyaa..well... anyway... it will be nice to see Bill back to himself for the most part and feeling better.

Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I'm enjoying exploring the ever growing twin-telepathy in progress and I'm glad you are too. I should have included a disclaimer apology to Tom fans in this chapter for getting him into such a nasty car wreck, but it was a necessary part of the tale. Trust me!

BILL WHHHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!??!?!?!??!??! Okay first off I will admit I don't like that they as in Shyaa and Bill will become lovers. I like them more as in 'friends' but know thats not gonna happen. As for Tom. AGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH Please let him be okay!!!! PLEASE. Also I was wondering why those other tribal people were following him for as well? Is Tom going to become like Bill?

Author's Response: Aww... I am sorry you don't like that, but it was the way this has been heading from the start. Although this story explores a very deep twin connection it's not actually a twincest piece, unless mental counts. LOL But thank you for reading! Hang in there, I know I was pretty mean to Tom in this chapter...

You would not believe my reaction when i saw you posted the next chapter.
It's too rediculous, so I'm just going to say now that it really didn't dissapoint.
GODS, I'm in love with this story and everything about it! I love the wraeththu and what they're doing and how Bill and Tom are searching for each other! It's so sweet and completely awesome!

I have a slight fetish for dreams, so I love how they played a role in this chapter. Bill was scary as hell and I really liked it.

Your writingstyle is very soothing, you know that? I completely forgot I had a headache while reading. I love your constructing technique and now, I can't WAIT for next chapter.
Please, please, update soon!
~Dawn

Author's Response: Dawn, your reviews make me so happy - thanks so much for leaving them! I don't think I have ever, to my knowledge, eased a headache before, but that's completely awesome. I love exploring the fantasy aspect of dreams too, as well as mental telepathy so the whole thing is coming together into a big ball of goodness for me. I'll begin the next chapter tomorrow and it should arrive quicker than this one did now that mid terms are behind me.rnThanks again!

bedside lamps hurt...... and did tom change too?????????

Author's Response: LOL! Yes, they do! No, Tom has not been incepted... yet. Thanks for reading!

So intence but I really like that about this stroy. There is always so much going on and I enjoy learning to be this new person along with Bill. It's nice to kind of get a feel for what it is like for him. I'm worried like the others though. I don't want Bill to become a monster like you said in another review. I wan't him to be ok but I also understand him wanting to trust and not just jump into this. For him this is much more emotionaly. Bill wants to have true feelings for the peoson he shares himself with and not just lust. Shyaa is right not to push but I just hope he doesn't wait too long.

Author's Response: Thanks for sticking with this one, and for the encouragement! I'm so familiar with Wraeththu it's hard to view it from the perspective of someone who is not, and finding a proper balance between too much information and not enough. Thank you for reading!

I rather liked that. I loved the scene of Bill and the "magic" I could see it with him and it was beautiful. I was wondering about the women as well when Bill asked and I must say I'm a bit hurt about them beeing left out but. I can really understand Bill's anger with the situaltion. He worries for his mother so much. Poor Bill. I feel so badly for him. He is so far away from his family and now he's somthing totally new. I must admi, he is dealing quite well though. Bill has always been strong though. I just hope he can stay that way.

Author's Response: Thank you! The lack of inclusion of women in Wraeththu mythos is definitely the most difficult (and sad) aspects of it... but like Shyaa said, they DO have their own path which will be revealed in time!