Date: 05/07/11 11:42 pm Title: Chapter 1: Abduction
You are going to come back right? ;( I'm so sad.
Author's Response: I am dreadfully sorry for how long this next chapter took. It's up now! Thank you for hanging in there! It's also longer than my norm, which I hope makes up at least a bit for the crazy wait.
Date: 04/14/11 11:57 pm Title: Chapter 1: Abduction
I miss you ;( where are you?
Author's Response: Argh, Asahi - I suck! I got very distracted writing a different story, but it is complete now so I'm going to give Incepted some love. I'm sorry for the delay!
Date: 03/07/11 09:42 am Title: Chapter 22: Confrontation
*note to self* read. those. goddamn. books! (because I still haven't) becasue this story just keeps getting better and better and more wonderful!
I feel like you just took their personalities, bended them into wraeththu and then let them loose in this crazy-ass but incredibly intruiging adventure through a near post-apocalyptic world, managing to wave through the twin-bond, the band and all Bill's thoughts like..
*sigh*
yeah, it's good.
Sorry for the lack of reviews. I HAVE been reading everything, i swear.
Please update soon? I really want to know what happens!
with tom and.. ahem, the Grissecon *goofy grin*
jk
Love,
Dawn
Author's Response: Reviews are appreciated but by no means an expectation - it's great to know you guys are out there and enjoying but there's nothing to apologize for certainly. My own life gets in the way of timely updates sometimes, that's way worse! I'm so happy you're still enjoying and it's great to hear from you of course! I hope you check out Storm's books one day, they're really wonderful.
Date: 03/07/11 12:30 am Title: Chapter 22: Confrontation
I really hope this works for them. Bill is something they didn't count on when Shyaa incepted him but I could proove to be a very good thing or bad thing. I'm not sure how Bill's uniqueness will be for them. I just hope that they can reach Tom soon. I do love though that his rockstar status got them a place to sleep and possibly a friend even if the others can't or won't help. It is ironic that his near miss turned into something useful.
Author's Response: I was going for a bit of humor there before we descend into the climax of the story, there are only five chapters left to go. It's going to be very, very strange being done after this ones been with me for so long!
Date: 03/03/11 08:53 pm Title: Chapter 1: Abduction
A lot of awesome fics go unfinshed, it's great to know you have this one all mapped-out.
I plan on checking-out your other fics you've mentioned too - I really like your writing : )
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I know exactly how it feels to get interested and then, poof - a story doesn't get finished, so I would never do that. Also writing here is absolutely wonderful practice. I really appreciate your interest in my other stories, that's a great compliment to receive. One of them is just a fluffy little one shot and the other is a long drawn out chapter fic like this one. Sci Fi, of course. LOL
Date: 03/02/11 07:28 pm Title: Chapter 1: Abduction
That's great!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 02/26/11 02:22 pm Title: Chapter 21: Revulsion
I think that`s one of the best stories here!
Author's Response: Wow - I've read a fair number of amazing stories here on the site, so I'm not sure I actually agree with you, but thank you tremendously for the compliment!
Date: 02/25/11 08:49 pm Title: Chapter 21: Revulsion
Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Coming soon! I finally finished my road map to the rest of the story (aka the plot outline). I've been flying blind and going chapter by chapter all this time so it feels good to finally know where I'm going to wind up.
Date: 02/24/11 01:02 am Title: Chapter 21: Revulsion
Of course there is nothing normal about Bill! He's Bill and he has always been amazing! Poor Tom. He doesn't know that Bill had help with his inception and this poor person doesn't seem to. THey have been left to suffer alone and it makes me sad ;( I hope Tom is not left to this fate. I'm still not sure if I think what Tom is doing is brave or stupid but I guess that's a chance he has to take. Bill is always so stunning no matter what situation any author puts him in but I can't wait to see what he can do in this story. I have a feeling that he is one of a kind not matter what. :) Can't wait for more of this :)
Author's Response: I couldn't agree more, there isn't anything ordinary about him, is there? Thank you for reading! Now that my completed plot outline is finally finished I know for certain where we'll wind up and how we'll get there.
Date: 01/25/11 08:12 pm Title: Chapter 20: Confession
I can't imagine how strange it must be for the twins to be sepporated like this. Not just in distance but physicaly too. I'm glad Tom wasn't mad at Bill but I don't blame him for being stunned and upset at first. i'm just glad he knows Bill is still Bill and the Bill that is his brother and friend is still very much there. Planning escape is brave but it could lead Tom to trubble. More than he's already in.
Author's Response: Sorry I'm so late in responding! I appreciate your appreciation of my take on Tom's reaction, it seemed... too easy somehow for him to just get pissed and cause a rift between them. I don't easily let rifts develop between me and people I love, and my fictional Tom doesn't either. Thanks for reading!
Date: 01/25/11 05:19 pm Title: Chapter 20: Confession
yeah, go Tom! *throws party for James-Bond-Tom* finally moving! Getting the hell away (we hope) in your faces evil wraeththu! (we hope even more)
I really like the little upcoming characters of Marc and Dox, they're very good for the mental visual and I'm already starting to like them!
I feel sorry for the twins, it must be very painful to find out the one you care so much about is no longer like you in that way. *shudders* horrible, but a lovely display of angst and drama. Great job!
The garden too, is such a wonderful touch to an incredible story you've woven.
Please update soon, I'm waiting impatiently!
~Dawn
Author's Response: I am so late catching up on reviews and even later posting my updates. I'm working on a grad degree and two fics at the same time - not smart of me! It is always so good to hear from you. Because I'm psycho, I'm actually already planning a sequel to this piece. Talk about getting ahead of yourself... Thank you for reading!
Date: 01/09/11 08:14 pm Title: Chapter 19: Abduction Revisited
Love it and can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank you for reading! Incepted will update this week!
Date: 01/08/11 09:47 pm Title: Chapter 1: Abduction
I loved Wraeththu and I'm loving this fic!
Author's Response: Thank you! It is a pleasure to write as well!
Date: 01/05/11 12:06 pm Title: Chapter 19: Abduction Revisited
You wouldn't belive how excited I get every time I see you've updated. I'm so anxious to know what happens to Bill and Tom. Plus, I love the way you write this amazing piece of art. I love the angst and the search of the twins.
I've been obsessed with twins for all of my life and I LOVE that connection you're discribing between our brothers now.
Poor Tom thouhg, for some reason, I'm really scared of the moment they're going to decide to incept him, without Bill and shit. It would be wrong.
At the same time, it would be absolutely awesome, for it would give us a very large amount of angst, but on the other hand, Tom being incepted while Bill's there seems so lovely.
You discribe things very vividly and I can imagine everything perfectly! I can tell you have a lot of experience and some serious talent.
Please, PLEASE, update soon?
With love,
Dawn
Author's Response: Thanks as always! I'm enjoying exploring the connection and telepathy between the twins myself. I'm switching back and forth between updating Incepted and my Dr. Who fic; Starlight. Starlight got attention today, then I'll go back to work on the next chapter for Incepted tomorrow. And yes, I'm thinking it was a bit nuts to start two chaptered fics at the same time. LOL
Date: 01/04/11 11:47 pm Title: Chapter 19: Abduction Revisited
Poor Tom ;( it does seem that the ones who caught him are the bad ones ;( Oh Tomi please don't do anything stupid. I really hope Bill can find him soon but I feel like it will be harder than we think.
Author's Response: It's always got to be a bit difficult to be good, or so I think. Thanks for reading!
Date: 12/30/10 10:28 pm Title: Chapter 18: Discussion
Poor Tom. He is in a bad situation and I'm scared for him still but I'm glad he at least knows Bill is coming and they can comunicate in some way, even if it is only in sleep. Bill is feeling better and I'm happy. I'm still worried for him as well though. I love Juri for his compassion and Finn for being wise. Shyaa is a little crazy but you almost have to be to be with Bill. He's not like other people. I'm nervous for what will happen in the next chapters but I can't wait either!
Author's Response: Thanks for sticking with me, I know that was way too long a wait between chapters! We're finally getting closer to the climax of the story now. :0) Yes, Shyaa is my crazy little brainchild, but I loves him. *pets Shyaa*
Date: 12/28/10 09:14 pm Title: Chapter 18: Discussion
absolutely fantastic, I can't begin to tell you again how much of an awesome writing style you have.
I love the world you're discribing and the connection between the twins is so weird, yet so natural at the same time.
Poor Tom, though.
But I secretly really like angst, but don't tell that I kind of enjoyed that part... :)
Great chapter, I have the hopes you'll be updating soon-er now?
Love,
Dawn
Author's Response: Thank you again, I'm glad to see you're still with me after the long break! Yes, I want to get to the climax of this chapter fic soon so I'll be updating more frequently. No huge long breaks again, sorry about that! I'm also planning the sequel (just in my head at the moment). And I feel a bit bad for Tom too, to be honest...
Date: 11/13/10 12:39 am Title: Chapter 17: Concussion
Wow. Hot, and beautiful. I want more.
Author's Response: Thank you! Next chapter on it's way soon!
Date: 11/12/10 02:15 am Title: Chapter 17: Concussion
love love love love! have i said this before? who cares! i've been raging over here waiting for this update. not disappointed. sigh* Shyaa and Bill make me happy and loving. ugh, i need a break.
can't wait for more!
-your die hard fan [:
Author's Response: This was a longer wait than usual between chapters for me, so thanks for hanging in there! Now that I've got another big project out of the way I should be able to update at least once per week. I'm so glad you're liking Bill and Shyaa together! *pets them*
Date: 11/12/10 12:41 am Title: Chapter 17: Concussion
Poor Tomi ;( I'm glad he's alive and I hope that where ever he ends up that some one will treat him ok. Right now I'm just glad he's alive.
Bill and Shyaa...They're adorably sweet and I'm happy to know that Bill finally let himself trust enough. I couldn't stand it if Bill hurt himself for the sake of stubbornness. I'm nervous for what happens next though.
Author's Response: There's still a difficult time ahead for Tom, but thanks for reading and enjoying Bill and Shyaa together - took a long time for them to get where they are now!