Date: 09/08/10 11:17 pm Title: now
I see why you had to preface this stating there would be no more. Who wouldn't want more?
For what it is, its absolutely great. I love it. Thank you so much!
Date: 09/08/10 11:06 am Title: now
This was artfully done, encapsulated well even though there's no explanation. Who needs one? What matters most is that they were reunited. Great job! Great little story in a nutshell.
Date: 09/08/10 12:17 am Title: now
gyah!!! ahh i LOVED this gah! bean! you rock my world! gah!!!!! no words con express how much i loved this!! ahh! and i can't even say WHY exactly i loved it, it was just everyhtign about it was perfect!!!
Date: 09/07/10 08:41 pm Title: now
I liked it. It was short and sweet. Perfect. :)
Date: 09/07/10 07:31 pm Title: now
Aww you're writing again *cheers* I'm so happy!
As for the story now you've gotten me curious. Can't wait to see if you turn this into a full-out fic!
Date: 09/07/10 06:38 pm Title: now
It was beautiful... really lovely I loved the 'homecoming'. And how Bill came home... and the twins cried, I loved it. At first I thought Bill had died, before he appeared in the story so I clicked out, checked the warnings and saw none.. Story's lovely.
You made 2 grammar mistakes that stood out to me.
"He wanted to be be with Bill and only Bill."
And.
""I thought I'd never tell you I love you, or that I love that your my twin." Should be 'you're'. YOU ARE my twin. By the way, that scene was so precious!
I'm assuming that.. Sam thing is Sam and Froudo dude, whatever his name is... Uhh. .yah. :'D
First day of school was today, first story I read of the next grade. :p
And it was beautiful! :)
Date: 09/07/10 06:08 pm Title: now
Oh wow, that was so beautiful! I really liked it, rich wish emotion and sweet with love :)
Date: 09/07/10 04:50 pm Title: now
I think it's perfect just the way it is. I like the mystery around what exactly happened and how Bill got away to make it home. The what happens next. All of that would diminish and cheapen the this scene. Maybe it wouldn't if there had been a whole story but I really like this just the way it is. Don't let anyone pressure you into writing a full length story from this. It's perfect just the way it is.
Author's Response: I wouldn't have said perfect, but thank you! *huggles tight* You have no idea how happy that review just made me
Date: 09/07/10 04:24 pm Title: now
Simple, but so very beautiful. This was just what I felt like reading right now, thank you so much:)
And I hope you're feeling better Synnie, for what a stranger's words are worth. Even if I might not know you (hell, I don't even know if there really is something bothering you, and I know it's not my place to ask either), I do wish you only the best:) I'm sending you lots of love and cupcakes in my thoughts. Or wait, maybe I'll just eat those cupcakes in your honor. Yummmm! *is in cupcaky-heaven*
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm just working at straightening my life out. It actually does mean alot to have random people that I may not know but that know me (if that makes sense) wishing me the best...But dude...Gimme cupcakes for real lol!
Date: 09/07/10 04:00 pm Title: now
Beautiful. So effing beautiful. And so very true. No matter what happens to them, they always know the way home. And where home lies.. with in each other. Again, beyond beautiful. Thank you for writing this :)
Author's Response: Aww thank you so much for your review. I honestly didn't think this would go over well, even though it's so fluffy