Date: 05/07/13 11:22 pm Title: At last
Very sad, painful story, but with a bright hopeful end! Poor Tom. My heart reaches out to him. But I think he'll be fine now. Very powerful story!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing, I'm glad you liked it, this is a very dear story to me so it's always nice to see that someone read it :)
Date: 12/19/11 11:04 pm Title: The book
this story has very horrendous grammar. You should consider revising it. if you take out all the run on sentances, it makes for a great plotline
Date: 12/19/11 11:04 pm Title: The book
this story has very horrendous grammar. You should consider revising it. if you take out all the run on sentances, it makes for a great plotline
Date: 09/16/11 07:32 pm Title: At last
That was fucking BEAUTIFUL! Horrifying and fucking beautiful. I loved it. So fucking much.
Author's Response: Oh, thank you so much! I'm so glad then someone reads any of my stories, and even happier then they likes them :)
Date: 03/28/11 04:13 pm Title: The book
This is so lovely, and beautifully written
Well done :)
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it :)
Date: 11/20/10 06:28 pm Title: At last
*Wipes tears* that was beautiful! Very strong story! Thanks a lot! *Burst in tears*
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing, glad you liked it!
Date: 09/11/10 04:52 pm Title: At last
Dirty dirty past!
I so cried through Geo's note.I absolutely luffd it
Author's Response: Yes, he had had a really dark past, but maybe can it be better, now when Georg knows?
Date: 09/08/10 08:23 pm Title: At last
Strange ending... Not how I pictured it.
This fic sort of implied Torg, and the lack of a close twin relationship. (sort of.. like it was lost)
Tom in the hospital...
what happened to Bill?
:/
The letter at the end... O_O
Woooooow. :O
Amazing and so emotional..
short lovely fic.
(sorry I'm about to fall asleep on my keyboard, your story was the only thing that kept me awake. :P -.- *dies*)
Author's Response: Well, you must keep in mind that Tom had been in the hospital for some time and Bill took care of the move, I'm sure he stayed with Tom at much as he could. But even if the twins has each other I think the fact that they have Georg and Gustav makes them even stronger, think they both need someone else to feel safe with, then the other is hurt or sick, an older brother. Like Georg. rn
Date: 09/08/10 08:20 pm Title: Bring me back to life
Wow.. o_o The.. journal entries are so interesting.
Lmao no one cares about Gustav. :p
His fear for Bill.. will something happen to Bill in the last chapter? Or to Tom?
So much talk about Bill! Must be foreshadowing...
:3
Author's Response: Maybe he doesn't worry about Gustav because he feels safe with him? :)
Date: 09/08/10 08:14 pm Title: Secrets
o.O Wow.. omg. :(
Georg seems so involved...
Tom's.. job. DX D:
omg....
Amazing concept.
*reads on*
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 09/08/10 07:26 pm Title: At last
This was so awesome. I loved every single word of it *hugs*
Author's Response: Thanks you for reading, glad you liked it, and thanks for reviewing!
Date: 09/08/10 07:22 pm Title: Bring me back to life
His broken soul is on display in that diary :(
Author's Response: Yes, I guess it was the only place he could let everything out :(
Date: 09/08/10 06:15 pm Title: The book
This story made me cry a lot. I think you really captured what it is like to feel like no one wants you, the feeling that you don't even really exist. I have never liked a story as much as I like this one. Even if it is really sad.
You are a really great writer. I'm glad I made the choice to read it. Thank you.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review, I'm glad you liked it and my way of writing!
Date: 09/08/10 12:33 pm Title: At last
Wow. Just so powerful and full of emotion. Especially the last note. That really hit me.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading it, glad the story worked out!
Date: 09/08/10 11:10 am Title: At last
oh my gosh. this story.....it's something else. it's so amazing and so real and so good, i love it. it made me cry, imagine Tom actually thinking this way? very fantastic job, you are a fanfiction guru!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks! I wonder that too, sometimes, he says things we tend to not hear, sometimes I wonder if were are more in to it than we know?
Date: 09/08/10 08:46 am Title: The book
there should definatly be a sequealI would really like to see how tom pulls through this. the storys awsome!!!
Author's Response: Thanks! don't know about a sequeall, but I will soon (as soon as my beta reader have time to help me) have another story up that I hope you will like!
Date: 09/08/10 07:36 am Title: At last
That was...so sweet.
Like, I read this because of the summary, because the last thing on Tom's fear list was just so precious. And once I started reading, I couldn't stop. It was so amazing. Your wording was beautiful and the emotions were so raw and painful that I swear my heart was breaking as I read them. I've never seen a Tom/Georg brotherly friendship so strong, and this is...well, it's pretty much stunning.
Thank you so much for writing this. ♥
Author's Response: Thank you so very much for your review! I find it hard to write in English, so I'm so glad than some one both like it and read it in the way I hoped it is writen (hope you understand what I mean.) Thank you for reading it!
Date: 09/07/10 05:23 pm Title: Secrets
Is Tom already dead?
And how in the world did he cope with all that pain and lonliness :( It's like he already gave up.
Author's Response: No, he isn't, his at the intensive care ward, but are doing better, it's why Georg will bring him some of his things.rnAnd I think so too, I guss you have to to cope with it.
Date: 09/07/10 08:52 am Title: Secrets
I feel for tom, every word makes my stomache lurch. You are really doing a good job and making us feel the emotion. update soon!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you think so, it's hard to write feelings in english, I think.rnAnd I'm glad you like this one too!rnThe next chapter will be posted now.
Date: 09/06/10 08:19 pm Title: The book
Hmm... Interesting. K = Tom's hidden lover?
3 heart attacks...
saved memories...
afraid of Bill's death.
o_0
Wow.
Amazing.
I LOVE IT.
CONTINUE.
Author's Response: Thanks! K as Tom's lover? Hm, well, you will find out soon, the next chapter will be up tomorrow!