Date: 10/10/10 10:37 am Title: Chapter 4: Boys and Girls
I really like your story so far, I like that the plot is going slowly and love your original characters. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank you very much ^^
Not to slowly I hope XD
I was a bit worried that I might get the readers bored with the slow plot ^^ but yeah, to make it kind of realistic I have to do it ^^
So, please bear with me :)
Awww, thank you! I'm glad you like them ^^
I'm working on the next chapter now, so hopefully I will update soon ^^
Date: 10/09/10 10:35 pm Title: Chapter 4: Boys and Girls
More please!!! Asap!!!! A
I adore yes as a character! Very nicely developed. Morensoon! Shanks :)
Author's Response: Awww, thank you! I'm flattered ^^
You mean Yessi? :D
Well... I'm trying to make a developed character which is (hopefully) not a Mary Sue XD lol
I appreciate your review so much, thank you ^^
Date: 09/25/10 10:07 am Title: Chapter 3: Zimmer 316
hmmm, I think deep, deep down she likes both twins hehe
Author's Response: Hehehe, you think so? rnrnWell, she obviously likes Bill (I mean, who wouldn't? ;) But as for Tom... it is more complicated XD She thinks he is annoying, rude and a total womanizer; but, she can't deny that he is hot and gorgeous XD *giggles*rnrnThank you for reviewing ^^
Date: 09/21/10 11:29 pm Title: Chapter 2: Bill's Fixation and The Same Old Tom
I really like it so far! Not confusing at all =]
I can't wait to see what happens between all of the characters.
Author's Response: Thank you! Good that it's not confusing XDrnrnGlad that you like it ^^ I have just updated the new chapter, and more Tom and Yessi interaction going on ;) Hope you'll like it ^^
Date: 09/15/10 06:02 pm Title: Chapter 2: Bill's Fixation and The Same Old Tom
I loved it. Keep up the awesome work (: i cant wait for the daa next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you ^^ I have just updated the next chapter (though don't know when will it be confirmed by the mods ;) I hope you like it ^__^
Date: 09/13/10 05:16 pm Title: Chapter 2: Bill's Fixation and The Same Old Tom
I love it! & can't wait for the next update.
Author's Response: Thank you ^^ I actually had fun writing it :D Though a bit struggled as well XD as I don't want to make Tom too much of a bastard though in some ways he just is XDD rnrnGlad you like it ^^
Date: 09/07/10 02:52 pm Title: Chapter 1: Paradise
I like it. It's a good start
Author's Response: Thank you ^^ Glad you like it :)
Date: 09/06/10 04:03 pm Title: Chapter 1: Paradise
Great first chaptr! I will say that i myself am a bit confused who he MAIN charatcer is. But over all great chapter and totally cute Hello Kitty Clock ^_^
Author's Response: Thank you ^^ Hey, you are my first reviewer here *gives you ice cream*rnrnThe main character is the girl works in the resort, Yesenia. I know I didn't reveal her name until almost 3/4 part of the chapter ;) I did it on purpose though... XD It will be clearer in the upcoming chapters ^^ rnrnI know! That clock is wonderful :D I just couldn't resist to put it in the story XDrnrnGlad you like it ^^
Date: 09/06/10 04:01 pm Title: Chapter 1: Paradise
Great first chaptr! I will say that i myself am a bit confused who he MAIN charatcer is. But over all great chapter and totally cute Hello Kitty Clock ^_^