Date: 06/06/11 06:56 pm Title: Chapter 4: Boys and Girls
lol i liked the hairspray part too :) but awhhh daniel? O_o uh-oh xD
Author's Response: Haha, I think hairspray is a dear thing to Bill XD
Daniel is... you'll see ;D
Date: 06/06/11 06:38 pm Title: Chapter 3: Zimmer 316
Lol, officially addicted to this story :3
Author's Response: lol, thanks so much for the reviews ^^ I'm happy you like it :)
Date: 06/06/11 06:17 pm Title: Chapter 2: Bill's Fixation and The Same Old Tom
Yesenia and Bill would be so cute together :3
Author's Response: I agree, but the story still has so much things to be unfolded ;)
Date: 06/06/11 05:40 pm Title: Chapter 1: Paradise
Omigawsh, the hello kitty clock is effing adorable! :3
-i love this chapter
Author's Response: Thank you ^^ I love the clock, too :D
Date: 06/03/11 04:23 am Title: Chapter 11: Do, Don't, Won't
Yet another immaculate chapter, clashing with such an unexpected twist was just fastastic, never saw the revelations approacing...brilliant work.
I must compliment your ability to keep your drama internal, I find outsider drama to be lazy drama and I'm glad that you invest time in having your central characters be the direct source of conflict rather than inject a random character in the midst to cause exciment, as I said..I find that lazy. You however demostrate you are very capable of taking on the psychology of in-depth dilemma while using just a few sprinkles of outside interference to spark a more ardent flame, and you are doing a marvelous job are it. Bravo!
Can't wait to read on, please update soon...I fear I'll develop anxiety in the absence of fresh words ;)
Author's Response: Your comment always make me lost for word, yet make me smile like a fool ;) It shows how unbelievably wonderful they are ^^
I also don't like just throwing recurring characters to make drama - I believe it won't make realistic drama. Sometimes it can work, but not every time. Thank you again ^^
I have updated. It's not long but I hope you'll like it ^^
Date: 06/01/11 09:35 am Title: Chapter 11: Do, Don't, Won't
Love this story!!plz update as soon as you can:)
Author's Response: Thank you ^^
A new chapter is up. I hope you like it :)
Date: 06/01/11 06:58 am Title: Chapter 11: Do, Don't, Won't
this story is getting better and better and better......:)
Author's Response: Thank you very much for the nice review ^^
Date: 06/01/11 02:32 am Title: Chapter 11: Do, Don't, Won't
Keep up the good work ! :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much ^^
Date: 06/01/11 01:45 am Title: Chapter 11: Do, Don't, Won't
wow..... my jaw drop.. nice twist..
Author's Response: Thank you ;D
Date: 05/31/11 11:26 pm Title: Chapter 11: Do, Don't, Won't
whoa. holy shit says it all ;)
Author's Response: It does, indeed XD
Thanks for reviewing ^^
Date: 05/30/11 11:37 pm Title: Chapter 10: If You Don't Know By Now
i love this story. i hope you keep up with it
Author's Response: Thank you very much ^^ I will keep up with it, no worries :)
Date: 05/26/11 11:30 pm Title: Chapter 10: If You Don't Know By Now
Oh my baleful Tom addition, you contribute to it so exquisitely . I love love love this chapter, the dubious sexual tension between Tom and Yesenia is deliciously tantalizing...I'm telling you is totally addictive to me, I adore that closing scene.
Also the contrast between Tom and Bill is so pristine and defined it provides the story with a configuration of diverse scenarios mixed in one. With these two characters I get a taste of both heaven and hell, perversity and purity, a fairytale and a twisted saga...your ability to present this in such a harmonious way is splendid.
I'm most certainly developing a serious addiction to your story, please please provide me with a new dose soon :)
Author's Response: To be honest, when I create the plot in the first place, I didn't think about it that deep; about Bill and Tom's contrast characters. I just followed my instinct about how to develop their characters. You pointed things that I never thought before. You're simply a brilliant reviewer ^^
The new chapter will be up very soon. I hope you'll like it :)
Date: 05/26/11 11:01 pm Title: Chapter 9: Dating Now and Then
Do I percieve an intimate kind of tension between these two? Or is it just a rather fascinating facet of acrimony? I love how many deductions I can extract from one conversation,so many ideals to be comtemplated is impossible to predict what's to follow or decipher a definite dilemma. Your dynnamic ways make for a playful kind of mystery promesing no dull moments, simply brilliant.
You are doing an immaculate job I tell you! The plot flows with an incredible consistency and oh la la I'm so intrigued by it I can't keep my eyes off the screen.
Thank you so much for dedicating this chapter to me, I'm truly honored.
Author's Response: Your reviews always make me lost for words, and it's for a good reason :)
I'm impressed that you look at it in a new way that nobody has seen it before. It's truly amazing ^^ I'm so happy that someone like you like my story :) You deserve the dedication, no doubt about it :) Thank you for your wonderful reviews, they always make my day ^^
Date: 05/26/11 09:33 pm Title: Chapter 10: If You Don't Know By Now
yey! a new chapter (^^,)..
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. A new chapter is on its way ^^ Keep an eye on that ;)
Date: 05/24/11 09:13 pm Title: Chapter 8: Purple Feeling
Awe, this chapter had me smiling. Bill is so abstractly sweet is hard to not grin.Truth is; I failed to prevent myself from doing so and for that I applaud you, a good story tugs at emotions and your did just that.
I love Yesenia, she is not your typical Mary Sue, she is a very dynamic and realistic character which is so refreshing for me. And Tom,well Tom is Tom lol...even when his participation in this chapter was short-lived it still was very much epic. Outstanding Job!
I can barely wait for an update, please do treat me to one soon :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your amazing comments
They really motivated me and kept me going ^^
You complemented me so much that I'm really flattered ^^
There will be Tom in chapter 9, which is already up ^^ I hope you'll like it :)
Date: 05/24/11 09:02 pm Title: Chapter 7: One Fine Day
Fantastic, absolutely fantastic!
I'm thrilled you updated this story. For months now I've been practically stalking my favorites in hopes to find a new chapter from you.
The wait was definitely worth it, I love this chapter...and well, I think is quite obvious how I feel about a seemingly souless Tom hehe..so even happier to read into his character.
I truly believe you are doing an exquisite job with the development of his character...well, all of your characters really. I have an inclination towards a progressive kind of development rather than dumping a characterization in the first chapter, your way makes for a more intriguing story that no doubt keeps me very much addicted.
Keep up the magnificent work :)
Author's Response: Thank you very much ^^
Your comments are what every author wishes to hear :)
I'm so sorry for the delay, but now my muse seems to be productive ;)
I'm so much into character development and realism, because I'm not so good with description - as you may have noticed :D that's my way to cope with it ^^
Oh, and your words choice are amazing :O
Thanks again for reading and reviewing ^^
Date: 05/24/11 05:29 pm Title: Chapter 8: Purple Feeling
I am so glad you updated! xD
I started reading your story when you posted the last chapter and got truly addicted!
Sorry if I didn't review earlier but better now than never, right, now? xD
Anyway, I think Yessi is such a cool character. She and Bill definitely have something going on... I don't know why though, but I think she's got a soft spot for Tom... x)
I'm so very excited to read more!!! :D
Please update sooon! xD
Author's Response: Aww, thank you very much for your nice comment ^^
It's okay :D I'm glad you like my story
You think so? hehe then you have to read more to find out ;)
I have updated so, hope you'll like it ^^
Date: 02/26/11 10:27 am Title: Chapter 1: Paradise
I totally love this story! xD The setting is perfect, the plot is awesome, and you build the personality of each character really well.
Oh by the way, my name is Yesenia. xD Why did you decide on that name for a main character(not that I'm complaining xD)? It's just that the name is not that common and least with only one 's'.
Anyway hope you update soon!!
Author's Response: Hi, Yesenia *waves excitedly* :D<>I hope you like it not because your name is the same with the main character ;) haha... I'm just kidding XD
I use Yesenia because... I love the name! :D I saw a girl named Yesenia in So you think you can dance. Previously I'm more familiar with Jessenia. But then I think Yesenia is perfect for my character (also the nickname Yessi)- I got the feeling and it just clicked XD
And sure it's not a common name in Denmark, but she is half Spanish-Filipina as well so that's why she got the name :)
I'm so happy there is a Yesenia who like my Yesenia story (I hope that is not confusing XD) it's not something that happened everyday ;)
I'll try to update as soon as I can ^^ Thank you for reading and reviewing :)
Date: 11/26/10 09:33 pm Title: Chapter 6: Stalker
I absolutely adore this story...is fascinating. I love the seeting you've chosen, is different from the usual and I'm loving it. I'm looking foward to reading more of your work, please update soon.
Author's Response: Thank you ^^
the idea about a story in the Maldives popped in my head right away when I wanted to write about TH XD and then the plot came along pretty smoothly ^^
I'll try my best to update, because at the moment I'm busy with some Danish test that I have to take in a month time XD
Thanks again for reading and reviewing ^^
Date: 10/17/10 05:11 pm Title: Chapter 5: Alliance
This was so awesome! I can't wait for more and more and more!! You make this story so realistic, I just wish you updated more often because once I finish reading, I already want to know what's next :D I want to know to what their relationship leads! it's so interesting. I like that Bill already likes her, and Tom not really, but I'm pretty sure he will. And this new guy, he could make twins jealous! Oh gosh, you have to update :D
Author's Response: Hello Gintare ^^
Thank you so much for this wonderful review *heart*
It motivates me to try making a good story :)
I wish I could update sooner too >_< but since I'm a perfectionist, I write very carefully and even after I'm done I read it over and over again to see if there are parts that I must change. And I do often change scenes XD because when I read again, they didn't seem to fit... so I rewrite them. So, yeah... writing is not a short process for me ^^
But I try to update as soon as I can :) So far I need a week to write each chapter - I hope it's not too slow for you and if it is, I apologize XD
And, good observation :D To know where their relationship will go you have to stick with me ;)Daniel indeed will have an important part in the plot - but (hopefully) not in a cliche way :D
I hope I don't bother you with my long ramble XD
Once again, thank you very much for reading/liking/reviewing this story ^__^