Date: 07/05/11 06:04 pm Title: Chapter 18: The First Date
OHHMMYYYGGOODDD!!!
Author's Response: Yesss :D Thanks for the review ^^
Date: 07/05/11 05:39 pm Title: Chapter 18: The First Date
AWSOME CHAPTER!!!!!!!!
CANT WAIT FOR MORE :)
PLEASE UPDATE SOON :)
Author's Response: Thank youuuu ^^
Date: 07/05/11 01:23 am Title: Chapter 17: Friends
Awh :) Cant wait for the next chapter :D
Author's Response: Thanks ^^ I have updated, hope you'll like it :)
Date: 07/01/11 06:34 pm Title: Chapter 17: Friends
Aw, that was nice of Bill..
Author's Response: He's such a nice guy, indeed ^^
Thanks for the review :)
Date: 07/01/11 06:27 pm Title: Chapter 17: Friends
Yay ! I read this first thing in the morning hahs :)
Author's Response: Haha, thanks so much :)
Date: 07/01/11 05:49 pm Title: Chapter 17: Friends
AWSOME CHAPTER :)
KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK :)
UPDATE SOON PLEASE :)
Author's Response: Thank youuuu ^^ And, I have updated :D Enjoy ;)
Date: 06/30/11 02:46 pm Title: Chapter 16: Déjà vu
Oh my this was exquisite, that finale was so perfect, I'm often meticulous about the perfect closing and yours defines just that. I'm in lost of words, so many things to boast in regards of this chapter is overwhelming lol Just know I absolutely love it, though I hate my laspse of betrayal as I forgot all about Bill and embraced this romance between Yesenia and Tom, but I like how the chapter's finale is a great reminder that there is no fairytale here, is very relaistic and I love the realism of yoru fiction. Awesome, so awesome.
I can barely, and I mean barely, wait for a new chapter, the suspense will eat away at me haha Great Work!
Author's Response: Thank you ^^ It is indeed not a fairytale when nobody gets hurt and always rainbows and kittens XD I always try to keep the realism, I think that's the most important basic of my story :)
I think I have developed a serious addiction to your reviews lol. Everytime I see that you have reviewed, I was like 'yay' :D
And the new chapter is already up, I hope you'll like it, too ^__^
Date: 06/30/11 02:40 pm Title: Chapter 15: Accusation, Confusion
Oh, that moment between Bill and Yesenia was very formidable, you managed to capture the essence of a sentiment beyond the screen and that is so exquisite in literature. I genuinely felt terrible for Bill and torn for Yesenia, immaculate work. Love it, love it. Bravo!
Author's Response: Thank you, thank you ^^
As for the response for the last chapter, I mean: It always goes straight to my heart XD
Date: 06/30/11 02:36 pm Title: Chapter 14: Rain
And the silent romance continues, I'm so loving it. I adore how devious it can go about predictions, I have no idea what to expect and I love that, it shows how great a writer you are, predictability is so tedious and I'm glad there is never a dull moment in your writing, it takes a good author to achieve that and you do so every time. Keep up the amazing work.
Author's Response: I'm delighted that you think that way :) I love how you call it silent romance, I think it fits ;D
Thank you very much for writing such amazing, heartwarming reviews for me. I always goes straight to my heart ^^
Date: 06/30/11 02:33 pm Title: Chapter 13: The Change
Well that was an stragely sweet moment between Tom and Yesenia, how I love unconventional subtlety, you are absolutely immaculate. It is such a joy to read each and every of your chapters to find a refreshing kind of development. Outstanding writing.
Author's Response: That was unconventional, indeed ;D It's because their relationship is a bit unusual since the beginning XD lol.
Thank you very much, your review always brings a huge grin on my face ^__^
Date: 06/30/11 01:09 pm Title: Chapter 12: Apple or Strawberry?
Oh I'm terribly sorry for neglecting writing a review as I always like to dedicate my time to tell you just how much I'm loving your story, much like I loved this chapter...the characters are just so damn dynamic, is so addictive reading your work. Great Job!
Author's Response: It's okay ^^ I'm so glad that you're back and still liking my story :)
Thank you very much ^^
Date: 06/29/11 11:26 pm Title: Chapter 16: Déjà vu
Oh my gawd :) cant wait for an update lol
Author's Response: Oh, my God, thank you for the review lol.
The update is here, hope you'll like it ^^
Date: 06/29/11 02:27 pm Title: Chapter 16: Déjà vu
whoa. this is a good fu*king stoty !!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you very much ^^ Glad you like it ;D
Date: 06/29/11 11:48 am Title: Chapter 16: Déjà vu
Yey for the update! I must say I'm at the edge of my seat, so many possibilities for future chapters. Can't wait for the next chapters!!! :)
Author's Response: Yay, thank you ^^
The new chapter is up :) Hope you'll like it ^^
Date: 06/28/11 08:14 pm Title: Chapter 16: Déjà vu
so jealous of her..i wish something like that would happen to me in real life..
Author's Response: It would be nice, wouldn't it? ;D Thanks for the review ^^
Date: 06/28/11 03:58 pm Title: Chapter 1: Paradise
Dun dun dun! What a position to be in! Love it
Author's Response: Thank you ^^
Date: 06/28/11 03:36 pm Title: Chapter 16: Déjà vu
FANTASTIK :)
CANT WAIT FOR MORE :)
PLEASE UPDATE SOON :)
Author's Response: Thank you ^^ And I have updated :) Hope you'll like it as well.
Date: 06/28/11 05:45 am Title: Chapter 15: Accusation, Confusion
damn that cliffhanger.. :)
and I really feel bad for bill..
hope you can update soon!
Author's Response: Sorry about that XD
Thanks for the review and I have updated :D Hope you'll like it :)
Date: 06/27/11 04:04 am Title: Chapter 15: Accusation, Confusion
omg awwwh poor bill D': cant wait for an updaye, i love this :3
Author's Response: Yeah, Bill is such a nice guy -__-
Thanks and I have updated ^^
Date: 06/27/11 02:45 am Title: Chapter 15: Accusation, Confusion
wahhhhh.... she LOVES tom....
Author's Response: You think so? :D
We'll see ;)