Reviews For Telekinesis
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Reviewer: IzzyKaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/14/10 06:57 pm Title: Finale

JUSTIN BIEBER. LOL. Oh man Jared, this was awesome. :) The whole thing.

Author's Response: XD THANKS :D

Reviewer: IceWolf15 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/14/10 02:02 am Title: "I am your father."

I like this much better. MUCH better!
And I see that Izzy got Raiju to make you a sexy hexy banner. It makes the story MUCH easier to see!

*waits for next chapter*

Author's Response: Why thank you :) And yeah, I like the banner too ^^

Reviewer: emmylurvesth Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/13/10 08:34 pm Title: "I am your father."

lol, star wars moment . . .i giggles xD

Author's Response: XD

Reviewer: emmylurvesth Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/13/10 08:22 pm Title: Flying V

lol, when iread flying v, i had dirty thoughts xD

lol, tom reminds me of this character i made up in middles shool, but it was called super nerd, and basically it just protected people from wedgies and stuff xD

anywhore, i cant wait to see tom in action

Reviewer: emmylurvesth Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/13/10 08:18 pm Title: The Fight

yay, tomi kicks ass :DDD

Reviewer: IzzyKaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/13/10 06:51 pm Title: "I am your father."

JOST JOST JOST. YES. LOL, this is so funny!! :D It really is. XD

Author's Response: NEXT CHAPTER WILL BE EVEN FUNNIER :D

Reviewer: tokiohotel_love4ever Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/13/10 04:24 pm Title: "I am your father."

O.o that was unexpected can't wait it's really cool :D

Reviewer: tokiohotel_love4ever Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/08/10 03:30 pm Title: A New Frontman/Gustav Strikes Back

WOw O.o awesome :D can't wait :D

Reviewer: tokiohotel_love4ever Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/08/10 03:50 am Title: Strings

Wow awesome can't wait :D it's reallt cool :)

Reviewer: IceWolf15 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/08/10 01:04 am Title: Strings

Okay, I said I'd read and review, so I'm keeping my promise now.

Right. So the story idea is really, really good, it's original. HOWEVER, (this is where you start hating me) I think your style needs to be a bit more flowy, so it all comes together naturally, instead of sounding abrupt. I know it sounds like bullshit, but I think that it always helps.

Yeah, that's it ^_^ Hope to see chapter 4 up soon!
-Ice

Author's Response: I always appreciate critique ^-^ I'm new to fiction, so any advice is helpful XD Thanks!

Reviewer: IzzyKaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/07/10 09:48 am Title: Flying V

YES YES YES YES YES OH GOD JARED YOU ARE A FUCKING GENIUS.

Author's Response: AWW! THANKS IZZY :3

Reviewer: tokiohotel_love4ever Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/07/10 04:42 am Title: Flying V

OMG it's .... awesome :D can't wait :D

Reviewer: Rockstar101 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/05/10 05:54 pm Title: The Fight

Guess who the fuck is tracking this!!! THAT'S RIGHT. ME. I love this. LOOOL

Author's Response: Lol thanks

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