Date: 09/06/10 12:43 am Title: Chapter 2
I honestly don't like the boys fighting, but you've made it so damn interesting I can't wait for more! This is wonderful.
Author's Response: I'm actually completely intrigued by the boys fighting, lol! I would kill for some footage of one of their fights where they end up trashing a room. It's hard to imagine Tom doing that to Bill, although it's not too hard to imagine Bill doing it to Tom, lol! They're just so secretive about what causes their fights, so I'd love to know what they fight about and what they say... I can't imagine anyone ever making me so mad that I'd hit them with a frying pan or throw a chair at them! Thanks for reading/reviewing :)
Date: 09/06/10 12:05 am Title: Chapter 2
I love this story but every time I read it I want to smack Tom in the face for how he treats Bill. Love it
Author's Response: I want to smack him, too! But siblings can treat each other pretty horribly at times... it doesn't mean they don't love each other :-D thanks for reading/reviewing
Date: 09/05/10 11:43 pm Title: Chapter 2
:D
Author's Response: lol :D
Date: 09/05/10 10:14 pm Title: Chapter 2
i love it please update now!!!!!:D
Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it. I'll update soon. Thanks for reading/reviewing :)
Date: 09/05/10 02:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
This seems really promising! I look forward to finding out what Tom's problem is. In addition to wanting Bill all for himself, I mean. *g*
Bill being devastated! :( Poor Bill! You write really effectively. And your Bill sounds thirteen. I hope things will get better for him soon!
Author's Response: thanks very much for the thoughtful review. I'm glad you're enjoying it so far :-)
Date: 09/05/10 01:08 pm Title: Chapter 1
OMg I LOOOVVVVVEEE IT
Author's Response: lol :-) thanks for reading/reviewing
Date: 09/05/10 03:27 am Title: Chapter 1
super cute so far :)
Author's Response: thanks for reading/reviewing :-)
Date: 09/05/10 12:00 am Title: Chapter 1
I'm liking this! Well, not their distance, which is really rare to read about. I love stories with teenie-twins.
Author's Response: Their distance is sort of heartbreaking for me to imagine. This is set near the end of the year-long feud because I'm more interested in writing about how it ended than a year of fighting - especially since their fights can get pretty hectic 6_6 Thanks for reading/reviewing :)
Date: 09/04/10 11:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
ohhhhhhhhhhhh i love it alreadyy :D
Author's Response: thank you :D
Date: 09/04/10 11:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
I almost couldn't believe that quote when I read it months ago. For some reason, it's really hard for me to see the twins not getting along for an extended period of time. Of course, that's probably b/c I don't know them personally, and I had no clue of who they were back then, haha. /rambling
Anyway, this looks like a very promising story! =] I'll be looking forward to chapter 2!
Author's Response: I found that quote really interesting because it's so odd to imagine, yeah. But on the other hand, being thirteen is such a weird age. There are several factors I think led to their rift, which I want to explore in my fic (along with some made up twincesty issues that are just for fun). Thanks for reading/responding. I'm working on the next update :)
Date: 09/04/10 11:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
:)
I can't wait to read more
Author's Response: thanks for reading/responding :)