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Reviewer: puddin Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/10/11 10:23 pm Title: Chapter 3

Oooooh! A cuddle fest with Bill and Tom. Wish I was the Jumbie in the rafters so I could watch up close and personal like!

Author's Response: LOL @ spying Jumbie XD Thanks for reading/reviewing :)

Reviewer: puddin Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/10/11 10:08 pm Title: Chapter 2

Love the angst and tension between them. I'm excited to see how it all unravels.

Author's Response: I'm glad you're liking it so far :) thanks for reading/reviewing!

Reviewer: puddin Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/10/11 10:01 pm Title: Chapter 1

Can't wait to read the rest! The banner of Bill is sooooo cute. I'm dying here.

Author's Response: Aw yay<3 Yes, baby Bill is so cute (6_6) I love that photo of him. Hope you enjoy the fic!

Reviewer: jesseforever69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/15/11 04:11 pm Title: Chapter 13

this is a really good story!!

Author's Response: thanks for reading/reviewing :)

Reviewer: sarenakosuljica Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/08/11 09:17 am Title: Chapter 13

Hello, I loved your story!
Even though twins are quite young in the story, in my head they were constantly around 17 or so. But despite that fact, I still loved the story, and it is one of my favorites! Thanks! ;)

Author's Response: Yeah, they were quite young. Due to the plot, it was necessary for them to be that age, but I totally understand making them older in your head. I'm glad you enjoyed it :-) Thanks for reading/reviewing.

Reviewer: yellow-hello Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/06/11 11:08 am Title: Chapter 13

Mwahahhaa, this was so damn cute. :3 I like, almost weeped how fucking adorable teens they were. :3 SMUTTYSMUTWASAPPRECIATEDMHMH. 



Author's Response: lol! I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for reading/reviewing :)

Reviewer: ophelia_seven Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/05/11 01:47 pm Title: Chapter 13

I've been meaning to read this for ages now, but only just got around to it this morning. I really am a little ashamed that it's taken me this long. But it was so good. So realistic. It wasn't just like you were writing about real 13 year olds (the language, the situations, etc) it was like you were there writing THESE 13 year olds. With all of the oddball tidbits they've given us, it was pretty much perfect. I loved it. =)

Author's Response: Oh man, I know what you mean. I have several fics that've been on my "to read" list for months. So many fics, so little time...

I'm glad it seemed realistic and that you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading/reviewing :-)

Reviewer: wastedgermanyouth Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/23/11 05:57 pm Title: Chapter 4

ASGjaghaskbg you have their relationship written perfectly. Just perfectly! The way they fight, the words they use and everything. Just completely right :D

Author's Response: I'm glad you think so :D thanks for reading/reviewing!

Reviewer: wastedgermanyouth Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/23/11 05:21 pm Title: Chapter 1

This is excellent. Like, iīve only read one chapter yet but itīs just one of those stories that you can tell instantly is going to be amazing. After reading the first paragraph i already knew this tbh. Just the way itīs introduced and structured. Just very very well done. And the rest of the chapter was also just as impressive. I am very pleased :) And it seems like just the fic iīve been looking for, for a while now. Anyway, i should go and read chapter two now... :D

Author's Response: That's very nice of you to say. I'm glad you like it so far. Thanks for reading/reviewing :)

Reviewer: zkmmm Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/24/11 04:39 am Title: Chapter 1

Hahaha yes! Bill was insane in that clip. I acually have no clue what they were fighting about there lol. I had to rely on the subs as I don't really understand German so yea, no clue why he was screeching like a banshee. And again so this is actually a review, gutted it's over! Loved your story to bits.

Author's Response: They were fighting over Bill wanting Tom to take some signed photos/CD (the story changes) to someone right before a show... and Tom is like, "Why should I do it? You're the one who said you'd give it; you do it." and Bill is freaking out because Tom isn't obeying him, basically XD Glad you liked the story. I appreciate your support :)

Reviewer: zkmmm Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/24/11 04:36 am Title: Chapter 13

I am gutted it's over but hey, it did say Thirteen. Awesome story :-)

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for reading/reviewing :)

Reviewer: zkmmm Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/24/11 03:50 am Title: Chapter 11

I'll take all the above apart from the grumpy men fight lol. Though I think that 'Dirty Talk' clip is probably as close as it's gotten to an actual fight between them that got caught on camera. Loved the way Bill reared back when Tom swiped his arm wide though I'm pretty sure Tom wouldn't have hit Bill cos his hand wouldn't have reached Bill even if Bill hadn't moved. But self preservation I guess lol. Ok I'm rambling. Love your fic!

Author's Response: the closest we've come to a physical fight, anyway :D lest we forget the glory of Bill-off-camera screaming like a banshee and cussing out Tom-on-camera from the Zimmer docu. What I love most about Bill rearing back in the 'Dirty Talk' clip is that it mirrors the twins in the 'Devilish docu' footage when they were 13. Bill is talking to the camera and you see Tom's hand reach into frame and swipe at him in the same lazy way, and Bill rears away from it in the same way - without missing a beat in his explanation of their songwriting process XD Thanks for reading/reviewing :)

Reviewer: zkmmm Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/24/11 03:31 am Title: Chapter 10

Your story is killing me (in a good way). I like how you put in real life stuff too. That clip where Tom is tugging and squeezing Bill's arm and then Bill starts singing is one of my favourites of the twins. I'm a little angsted out from other stories but I'll persevere and read the next chapter. All these little misunderstandings drive me crazy but real life is like that so I can't complain.

Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it. I love that twin moment, too! so adorable *_* Thanks for reading/reviewing :)

Reviewer: FoxxyRamen101 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/23/11 11:45 am Title: Chapter 13

I love you!! Your an amazing author! The story was so tense there for a while. Had me on edge. I swear i stayed up till three thirty last night to finish it o.o you can bet ill be reading more or your stories ;)

Author's Response: You're sweet <3 thank you for reading/reviewing. I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

Reviewer: FishPanda Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/23/11 05:38 am Title: Chapter 13

This story was so well written. Adorable and touching and funny and it seemed so real. Loved it!

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it and that it seemed realistic to you. Thanks for reading/reviewing :)

Reviewer: tomsteddybillscandy Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/20/11 11:27 am Title: Chapter 10

"He couldn't even figure out how to be born until he watched me do it first."

OMG THIS. HAHAHAHAHAHA!!! i love that line XD



Author's Response: Lol, glad to hear it. Thanks for reading/reviewing :-)

Reviewer: musique_style Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/12/11 03:39 pm Title: Chapter 13

Ahhh, I loved tihs story! Their interactions, their gradual healing from their disputes... everything! You're such a talented author, and I really look forward to reading more from you! =)

Author's Response: That's very kind of you to say. Thank you for reading/reviewing :)

Reviewer: musique_style Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/12/11 03:10 pm Title: Chapter 12

Can I make a remark about how Joop is the result of the lurkers? XD

Author's Response: haha! I wrote that after the Joop thing had been filmed. But lurkers definitely caused all the Joop flirting XD

Reviewer: musique_style Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/12/11 02:53 pm Title: Chapter 11

Soooo much that I love about this chapter. Every single word, every single action! I'm glad that Bill reconciled with Erich; he was too lovely and likeable to just be dropped/ =)

And oh god, I'd wanna see them fighting over dentures. XD

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked this chapter! It was a really fun one to write. I thought Erich deserved a happy ending of his own ^_^rnrnFighting over dentures would be epic. It's sooo hard for me to picture the twins old, though (>.<)

Reviewer: musique_style Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/12/11 02:39 pm Title: Chapter 10

Ohhh, Tom is in hot water now!

Author's Response: that's what he gets for being sneaky XD

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