Date: 09/16/10 03:15 pm Title: Chapter 7
I think I am a Team Bill-should-have-Erich-first-to-make-Tom-jealous-and-then-have-Tom. Keep up the great work! Thanks for the update!
Author's Response: Duly noted! Thanks for reading/reviewing and for the encouragement :-)
Date: 09/16/10 03:09 pm Title: Chapter 7
I gotta say I feel more like it should be Bill and Erich but than again its your fanfic!! TEAM ERICH :p
Author's Response: Well, as I said in the poll, this is a Tom/Bill story, but your vote is counting toward the next chapter. I will explain more in the story notes at the end of the next chapter, so you'll see why your vote made a difference despite the main pairing not changing :D Thanks for reading/reviewing!
Date: 09/16/10 02:43 pm Title: Chapter 7
Team Why-Can't-Bill-Have-Both? I don't know, I just wanna see him with both, because I really like Erich, he is so cute and so in love, and I like Tom being jealous.....
Author's Response: Ok, your vote has been counted (it counted twice, since you picked both, lol). Erich is totally smitten with Bill, but who wouldn't be ^_^ I love a jealous Tom, too. Thanks for reading/reviewing :-)
Date: 09/16/10 02:39 pm Title: Chapter 7
Awwww, poor Erich. I like him, but I'm not sure I want him with Bill, really. So, I'll have to beg to be signed into Team Tom. At least it's pretty obvious there won't be a need for Team Johanna, considering Bill's reaction to the kiss. ;)
Loved how frazzled Tom was with what he did, even if Bill didn't really complain about what happened! I'll be looking forward to more. :)
Author's Response: The reason for the "Teams" will be explained in the Story Notes for next chapter, but a Team Johanna wouldn't be useful... and you're right, no one would be on it anyway, lol! Thanks for reading/reviewing :-)
Date: 09/16/10 02:09 pm Title: Chapter 7
Team Tom all the way, no question about that :)
Nice chapter! Can't wait to see how the twins are going to react when they'll see each other again!
Author's Response: ok, your vote has been counted :-) The next chapter will actually pick up a week after "the incident", but it will explain what's been going on in the mean time. (at least, such is the plan... haven't written it yet, but I will work on it tomorrow ^_^). Thanks for reading/reviewing!
Date: 09/16/10 01:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
team tom of course!!
love this story :)
Author's Response: your vote has been counted! Thanks for reading/reviewing :-)
Date: 09/16/10 01:48 pm Title: Chapter 7
Team Erich aaaaaaaaaaall the way and the end of this chapter just broke my heart ;__;
And Tom looks like he's so in love with Bill and so mad at himself for losing control the night before :O
Author's Response: I knew you would be Team Erich ^_^ Thanks for reading/reviewing!
Date: 09/16/10 01:38 pm Title: Chapter 7
Team Tom all the way!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: duly noted! :-)
Date: 09/14/10 11:48 pm Title: Chapter 6
gyah! mixing pot and alcohol is NEVER wise, (let alone doing one or the other lol) even as the 'experiacned' pot head that i used to be i will never mix the two again. poor bill, he's in for one hell of a night.
Author's Response: Mixing large amounts of both is never wise, for me. A lot of alcohol and a little pot just makes me sleepy, and a little alcohol and a lot of pot is fine, but too much of both and I'm totally puking. It's better to keep them separate, in my case (and Bill's in this fic xD)! Thanks for reading/reviewing! Your username is really cute btw
Date: 09/14/10 09:44 pm Title: Chapter 6
oh god.... the dog ate it???.... ewwww
Author's Response: yeah, I know... but dogs do that, lol. Thanks for reading/reviewing
Date: 09/14/10 09:35 pm Title: Chapter 6
ewww Disgusting!!!
:D
Author's Response: lol, yeah it's pretty gross! xD
Date: 09/14/10 06:39 pm Title: Chapter 6
love love love love! Tomi! i can't believe he shotgunned Bill. i didn't even know the fist type was possible(till now). i just really like the way their interaction is written though. it's not like this overwhelming thing i usually see in stories between them. like a flip is just switched. i feel like there's this change but it's become so gradual no one is noticing. or, it could just be me. haha. any who! can not wait for more. wonder what happens with mr. Erich. he's so likable..lol..but i always vote Tomi. so...fail [:
Author's Response: There are a couple of other ways to shotgun besides those, but those are the more intimate ones, so...^_^ I'm glad you're finding it gradual; that's my intention. Thanks for reading/reviewing!
Date: 09/14/10 04:49 pm Title: Chapter 6
Great story so far. I love little bitch Bill and Tom. Definiely tracking it.
Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it. Thanks for reading/reviewing!
Date: 09/14/10 04:38 pm Title: Chapter 6
The dog started eating it. Was that really necessary? XD I was like lol then ewww. It's mostly beer and stuff, the puppy will get high/drunk >.>
Author's Response: It was totally unnecessary - but I have a sick sense of humor xD Thanks for reading/reviewing!
Date: 09/14/10 03:58 pm Title: Chapter 6
omg..hahahahahahhaha that was not fair...but ewwwww hahahahahhaha...
oh and the kiss.amiziing! :DD
Author's Response: lol... glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading/reviewing!
Date: 09/14/10 03:52 pm Title: Chapter 6
lol, poor bill. got in a little over his head. and tom is playing with his head. thanks for the update, keep up the great work!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading/reviewing! I appreciate it
Date: 09/14/10 02:58 pm Title: Chapter 6
XDDDD fucking funny shit man
Author's Response: Thanks for reading/reviewing :-)
Date: 09/14/10 01:18 pm Title: Chapter 6
Ewww! Gross ending! I really like this chapter, Tom is adorable when he wants! I'm excited for the rating change! Can't wait to read more :D
Author's Response: It was gross, I agree xD I have a twisted sense of humor... I just finished writing the next chapter, will edit and post it tomorrow. Thanks for reading/reviewing!
Date: 09/14/10 01:06 pm Title: Chapter 6
Haha, Tom's such a jealous little prick! xD He sure didn't waste any time giving Bill that shotgun ;) That was really smart on his part, lol.
Author's Response: Tom's not as dumb as he looks ;-) Thanks for reading/reviewing!
Date: 09/14/10 12:44 pm Title: Chapter 6
Ewww on that last bit. *shudders* The rest, though, wow! I just love the way you write, it's very realistic and I'm enjoying the manner in which you're telling this story. I'll be looking forward to more. :)
Author's Response: LOL! I agree, it was totally gross xD I'm glad you're enjoying it so far. More should be up tomorrow. Thanks for reading/reviewing!