Date: 09/18/10 05:20 am Title: Chapter 7
11111111111!!! :DDD
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Date: 09/17/10 05:04 pm Title: Chapter 7
TEAM TOM!D:
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Date: 09/17/10 04:58 am Title: Chapter 7
oh. em. gee. 0.o
wow. The Tom in the room on the Bill part? i'm stuck. that was...intense. and apparently now he's flakey again. lol
hmmm, i'm kind of Team Why-Can't-Bill-Have-Both? But i'm still Team Tom all the way! Tom wins all. Erich is awesome but...no.
naughty Bill, surprising people. what. will. happen. next?
Author's Response: Well, as I mentioned in the poll, the main pairing of the fic is Tom/Bill, so that won't change ^_^ The "Teams" are just to help me decide on an aspect of the next chapter. I'll elaborate in the story notes at the end of it. What will happen next... well, when it's 13 year old twins in the middle of a year-long feud... you can already guess that there's some bumps in the road ahead! Thanks for reading/reviewing :-D
Date: 09/17/10 04:11 am Title: Chapter 7
(1) Team Tom! All the way! I haven't got the impression that Bill actually wants to have Erich.
This is so well written – the characterisation is just amazing. I love how fumbling they are, and especially Bill is adorably clueless. He doesn't seem to get that Erich is interested in him, and then throws up on the bed... he doesn't get what Johanna wants with him, and then ends up shocking Erich even though he wasn't that into kissing Johanna in the first place. It both amuses me and makes me feel a bit sorry for him. I hope he figures out what he wants to do and how to do it!
Someone else said it well: this chapter (maybe also the whole story) is about Tom taking his sexual frustration out on Bill! Oh, Tom. And oh, Bill. They make me shake my head and laugh and want to hug them at the same time! I hope Tom and Bill find a way to communicate and express their feelings (and I'd like to know how Bill feels in the first place: there's not much introspection in this chapter, and maybe not in Bill's head altogether, if he just doesn't want to think about it) and come to some sort of an understanding before long!
A marvellously humorous and drama-filled story. *g*
Author's Response: Thank you for your kind words and encouragement. Your reviews are always so thoughtful.
Bill (in this fic) is pretty oblivious. He's both sexually naive and sexually curious. He loves attention, but he doesn't necessarily think about the feelings or motives of the person giving it to him. Not in an inconsiderate way, but he's just sort of self-centered ^w^. He only really thinks about himself and his twin. I took inspiration for that characterization from that old interview where Georg said "Bill is the most self-centered person I know!" and Tom said, "He's not that bad when it's someone he loves." and Georg said, "Yeah, but the only people he loves is himself and you!" LMAO. I've always adored that quote, especially b/c Georg went on to say that despite Bill's self-centeredness, he is so adorable that you can't help but love him ^_^ (I'm paraphrasing)rn
Bill will be sorting out his feelings, sexual and emotional, for the remainder of the fic. It's gonna take a bit more to make him really sit back and come to terms with what's going on between him and Tom. They're thirteen, of course, so it won't come about as easily as it might if they were older and more mature... but the year-long feud will come to an end :-D
Date: 09/17/10 03:09 am Title: Chapter 7
Team Tom!!
Loved the bit between the twins!
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Date: 09/17/10 12:11 am Title: Chapter 7
I just finished all the chapter's and I love this story! It doesnt matter to me who pair's up-I like either/or. I think it will be a really good story either way...
Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it. Thanks for the encouragement. I appreciate it :-)
Date: 09/16/10 09:58 pm Title: Chapter 7
team Tom ALL. THE. WAY. (although honestly, Erich is a pretty sweet guy, but he just can't compete w/ a Kaultiz) ;)
Author's Response: There are few men on Earth who could compete with a Kaulitz :-D Thanks for reading/reviewing!
Date: 09/16/10 07:15 pm Title: Chapter 7
Team Tom, absolutely. Cause this is the order of the world! :P
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Date: 09/16/10 06:58 pm Title: Chapter 7
(1) TEAM TOM!!!
This whole chapter should be named "Tom's sexual frustration, as taken out upon Bill." Dirty boy ;D
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Date: 09/16/10 06:28 pm Title: Chapter 7
(2) Team Erich!!!
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Date: 09/16/10 06:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hello
this is my first comment
I started reading your story yesterday and I was happy that today you posted :)
I'm spanish and I'm learning english and learn a lot reading your story, sometimes I have to use a translator or ask my english friend and when he read the chapter today he was WTF?? O.O haha
I love this Story * __ * sorry for my bad English, I hope you understood me!
I'm team Tom: D
I See you the next chapter!
Author's Response: Your vote has been counted! Your English is very good! Reading fanfiction to learn a new language is awesome. I should try that, lol. Thanks for reading/reviewing!
Date: 09/16/10 05:56 pm Title: Chapter 7
TEAM TOM ALL THE WALL BITCHES
Author's Response: lol, I'm sure Tom would appreciate your enthusiasm. Your vote has been counted :-)
Date: 09/16/10 05:20 pm Title: Chapter 7
I'm actually team erich just because he seems so sweet. I want to be team tom, but no matter how hard i try to like him, he just bullies bill again to make me hate him more. Amazing story. The plot seems very original which is always a good thing and i'm always getting a good old shock. Well done.
Author's Response: I appreciate the encouragement! The twins are going through a rough patch in this fic 6_6 but Tom still loves his baby bro... secretly. Very secretly, lol. Your vote has been counted. Thanks for reading/reviewing!
Date: 09/16/10 05:06 pm Title: Chapter 7
Team Why-Can't-bill-Have-Both! :P
LOL but srsly,I don't know which one to chose...Since I don't really want to see Erich get hurt, like right now.. :DD
Of Course Tom is always N.1 XP
Author's Response: Poor Erich, lol. Bill has been putting him through hell without even realizing it ^w^ Your vote has been counted. Thanks for reading/reviewing :-)
Date: 09/16/10 04:38 pm Title: Chapter 1
i'm loving it dude! awesome:D:D:D:D
I'm with bill-uses-Enrich-to-make-tom-jealous:D
Really good story dude
You know know alot about weed you know.....loljkjk
awesome story keep posting i'll keep reviewing!!!:D:D:D
Author's Response: your vote has been counted! Hm, yeah, I'm a bit well-versed in the party scene. I was 13 once, too, you know ;-) I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far. Thanks for reading/reviewing!
Date: 09/16/10 04:35 pm Title: Chapter 7
Wow, that was naughtier than I expected. Bill took his bro's jizz all over him surprisingly smoothly! :o I have a feeling Erich's just a plot device to awaken Tom's jealousy and that's the role I want him to stay in mostly (sorry), I just love the twins together too much.
Author's Response: No need to apologize! In the story notes at the end of the next chapter, I will explain the role of the "Teams". They're to help me make a decision, but the main pairing of the story (as I disclaimed in the poll) is Tom/Bill. I don't think I could bring myself to write another main pairing ^_^ Although I have had weird urges to write Bill/Elly Jackson fic before 6_6
Date: 09/16/10 04:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
Heey, i really, really like your fanfic! I love the idea writing a fanfic about that topic, when i read the question, i really wanted to read a fanfic about it and here it is :D and i love that you post so frequently ;D
I think i'm definitely team tom, although i wouldnt mind if there'd be some bill/erich action and tom getting jealous, but please not to much! :)
(excuse any grammar mistakes, this isnt my monther tongue^^)
Author's Response: I'm glad to hear that you're enjoying it so far. I try to post frequently because I hate waiting for updates, so I try not to make other people wait on me :-)rn
your vote has been counted!rn
Your English is very good, btw. Thanks for reading/reviewing!
Date: 09/16/10 04:05 pm Title: Chapter 7
I like Erich! Not long-term-relationship like him, but fool-around like him for sure.
Great chapter! Can't wait to see what happens.
Author's Response: Haha, ok. Your vote has been counted. Thanks for reading/reviewing :-)
Date: 09/16/10 04:03 pm Title: Chapter 7
No no! pleas all Team Tom all the way! they're cute! nice chap btw.
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Date: 09/16/10 03:19 pm Title: Chapter 6
Great story, to me Erich is getting annoying and clingy. Anyways, can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Yeah, I hate when someone comes on too strong, too fast. But Bill's an attention whore (and I say that with the utmost love!), so it doesn't really bother him ^_^ even if he doesn't reciprocate the feelings.