Date: 09/20/10 06:56 pm Title: Chapter 8
:O!!!! YAY Bill and Tom kissed!! :DD
Erich can now be thrown to the side.
Joke joke XD
Author's Response: LOL! Thanks for reading/reviewing :-)rn
Date: 09/20/10 06:36 pm Title: Chapter 8
Only two more?! Oh no this has all gone far too quickly! I LOVE this fic, like really love it! Your characterisation is incredible, all your characers are likable but have enough depth to make you not always love them *cough* Tom. But of course, we all love him really, especially Bill ;)
I honestly can't tell you how amazing your writing is. That last little bit from when they first kissed to when Tom ran in the bathroom to hug him, guuuuuh! I don't know, it just made me feel all fuzzy and, squirmy? Perhaps xD But it was all good feelings.
And wow, those finishing lines o___O Their realising together it seems, even if Tom perhaps got there before Bill. This is the most precious fics I've read in such a long while. I'm sure I'll be coming back to re-read many a time. Seriously, this deserves to go far!
I'm REALLY looking forward to chapter 9, really really really :D I don't know HOW to say how talented you are, because you're indeed VERY talented. Thanks for the update, take care ^__^
Author's Response: Thank you for your generous comments about my characterizations. Real people aren't perfect, and I feel like faults make people more loveable and a thousand times more interesting. It's very sweet of you to say you'll re-read this. I'm glad you're enjoying it!
Date: 09/20/10 06:08 pm Title: Chapter 8
this story just gets better and better! I feel a little thrill every time I see an update :) One thing I love the most about it is that you let boys be boys, it's not a common thing on this forum... So awesome job :)
Author's Response: I'm really happy to hear that! I think I know what you mean about boys being boys. Sometimes people write them too sweet and darling. These are teenage twin brothers, afterall-- it's not gonna be all hugs and kisses. I find it more interesting to try to portray them realistically than to write about idealized versions of them.
Date: 09/20/10 06:04 pm Title: Chapter 7
Okay, did it! Yep :) Favourited you as an author AND this fic. I don't know why I favourite as little as I do, but guess it just means this is even more special than most :)
I guess I'm too late, but I am SO Team Tom all the way! I do like Erich a lot, but more as a side pair, or not, I don't mind. I'm such a Bill/Tom girl, I'm always gonna go for team Tom all the way xD
Things are getting more and more exciting! Tom's obviously struggling with something Bill is obvlious too, atm it seems. And NOW Johanna is joining the party! I feel so funny about all this now, because I don't want Erich to be upset, but then ultimately I want Tom to make his move on Bill. So why should I care what Erich thinks? But then I dooooo! I like Erich xD But I like Tom more. And Bill even more. Johanna makes things interesting but I'm definitely not on her team in anyway.
Wow so a lot of bath and forthing there, apologies! Basically, I like Erich, but LOVE Tom.
Ah gawd I'm so happy I get to read chapter 8. An advanced thanks for posting. I'll read ASAP. Oh and of course you may post the banner in chapter 9! You can use it whenever, wherever you want, or not at all ^_^
Author's Response: Thanks for all the support :-D You're very sweet. Johanna's only redeeming quality is that she's a Bill fan xD I'm a Bill/Tom girl, too! I hate the thought of the twins picking an outsider over each other :-s I want them to find love and be happy, of course, but to always put each other first :-Prnrn
Date: 09/20/10 05:47 pm Title: Chapter 8
The end of this chapter is just so cuuuuuute *_* And even though I'm team Erich and I'm really that he kissed Bill and all that, the kiss between Bill and Tom just made me melt :')
Author's Response: Yay!! I'm glad the Tom/Bill won you over ^_^ Thanks for reading/reviewing!
Date: 09/20/10 05:42 pm Title: Chapter 8
I always find it sad when the twins hurt each other but I admit this frying pan story is kinda funny, cool that you included it! The ending of this chap was so cute and intimate, I like how Bill is all amazed by how good it feels to be kissing Tomi !
Can't wait to read more :)
Author's Response: Yeah, I have always thought that was the craziest thing ever... beating someone with a frying pan, lol! I can't imagine doing that to someone 6_6 I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter; thanks for reading/reviewing!
Date: 09/20/10 05:34 pm Title: Chapter 8
They are lucky they stopped at frying pans. If I had a twin, I'm sure that one of us would have been dead by now. And then the ghost of said twin would have returned to take the life of the living one... and the loving would continue into the hereafter! So kudos for our boys for showing self-restraint!
Author's Response: LMAO!!!!!!!! Oh my god, you're awesome. Thanks for reading/reviewing xD
Date: 09/20/10 05:14 pm Title: Chapter 8
OMG *total flail* sooo happy to see you just posted chapter 8 :D I'll read after I've read chapter 7 though... *skulks off*
Author's Response: yup, just got it done :D hope you like it!
Date: 09/20/10 05:12 pm Title: Chapter 6
THIS IS SO ONE OF MY FAVOURITE FICS EVER ATM :D Just a quickie, thanks for all your responses, I love author responses just as much as getting my own reviews haha xD
Wow, seriously. It's been SO long since I've enjoyed reading something as much as I have this. I mean, honestly I love this site and spend waaaay too much time, and enjoy everything I read, but this fic really has such a charm that means I can't stop thinking about it. It's your writing, obviously ;) I'm still really liking Erich which is always a plus, and I love the little interactions between Bill and Tom. Twin interaction is the best kind, duh. Poor Erich at the end of this chapter though xD AND OHMYGOSH who is the explicit sexual content between?! I was assuming before I read this it would be Bill and Tom, but now I'm no longer sure. Well, only one way to find out!
Really, your writing is FABULOUS! Once I've read this, I've read all your work haha, damn. Do you think you'll be posting more anytime? No pressure, I'm just really curious ^__^
Also, (sorry for longness of review!) I made something for you! I don't excel in this area at all, but I made a banner for this fic :) I'll link you. You don't have to use it! But I had a little fun with it. Et voila: http://twitpic.com/2qeota
Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it! I always respond to reviews - I really do appreciate the support ^_^ Don't apologize for long reviews! Long reviews are GREAT! The best part of posting fanfiction is interacting with the other fans.rnrn
As far as writing something else... maybe! I have a plot idea for another fic, but I'm not even going to think about that until this one is finished. rnrnThat banner is adorable! May I post it in the story notes of ch. 9? I love Tom's short blond dreads <3
Date: 09/20/10 04:42 pm Title: Chapter 7
Erich creeps me out honestly. I thought he was gonna rape Bill. Now what you do is up to you because it's your story and I honestly feel that you should continue with your original plans (whatever they are) Anyway, I'm looking forward to the next chapter! =]
Author's Response: lmao! Aw, Erich wouldn't rape Bill. My original plans had some wiggle room in it, which is why I did the "Teams". It's explained in the story notes for ch. 8... which I'm almost done editing and about to post in a few minutes :-)
Date: 09/20/10 04:20 pm Title: Chapter 6
Classic.
Author's Response: LOL :-)
Date: 09/20/10 03:33 pm Title: Chapter 4
Do you have a brother or sister? You're doing pretty good with how siblings argue lol.
Author's Response: I do, and our fights used to be EPIC, lmao! I'm glad we grew out of that. Thanks for reading/reviewing :-)
Date: 09/20/10 03:01 pm Title: Chapter 2
I like the way you're displaying their relationship.
Author's Response: I'm glad to hear it :-) Thanks for reading/reviewing!
Date: 09/20/10 02:54 pm Title: Chapter 5
ooooh i'm excited to go to Erich's party with you and the guys :D i love how even though the twins are fighting all the time, yet there are still those tender moments between them. Oooh i really can't tell you how much i adore this. Oh dear, the X factor is playing in the background, totally killed the sweet twin vibe xD damn i don't like how quickly i'm reading this, i only have two more chapters to go i think o___O and then i have to WAIT! Haha it's okay though, i'm a patient person :)
Author's Response: I'm editing ch. 8 right now; it'll be up probably by the time you finish the next two chapters. I'm so glad for that! I feel like it's a small way to repay you for your kind reviews :-D
Date: 09/20/10 02:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
I like it so far and I'm excited to read about something like this.
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it so far :-) Thanks for reading/reviewing!
Date: 09/20/10 01:54 pm Title: Chapter 4
weeeee this is fabulous :D I'm loving the journey so far, such a fabulously yummy treat to read. Your writing is, i shall say again, such a delight to read! You make everything seem like it's really happening, and it's all believable. Kinda seems exactly what they used to be like when they were 13. I LOVE this, and i'm sure that's a sentiment i will be repeating :)
Author's Response: Yay! You're seriously awesome for leaving reviews for every chapter. Thank you ^_^
Date: 09/20/10 09:29 am Title: Chapter 3
aw i can't tell you how much i love this already! I haven't been so attached to a fic in a while. It's an absolute delight to read and really, your way of writing is just so lovely :) i can tell when i've caught up with this fic that this will be something i'll really look forward to updates :D ah and the end to this was adorable, i hope Tom's coming round to certain things. as much as i want Bill and Tom to be together, i actually really liked Erich xD he wasn't some sleaze wanting to get into Bill's pants, he seemed sweet. Well, so far at least! Aw this really is quite lovely :)
Author's Response: I've been surprised by how much support Erich has gotten! I never really intended for that to happen. He is nice, though, lol. He's totally not a sleaze. Thanks for reading/reviewing :-)
Date: 09/20/10 06:29 am Title: Chapter 2
aw twins :( Tom's such a dick! But the best kind, 'cause he's Tom and really theye love each other in an exclusively brotherly way... or not haha. This is JUST the kind of fic i love, it's been a while since i've read some first time twins that's completely whisked me up as yours has now. It's really refreshing, so well written, aw just aw i love this! :) i'm so excited to find out how this is gonna develop!
Author's Response: Tom is a total dick, lol. But yeah, exactly, they can be dicks to each other because they love each other more than anything ^_^ Thank you for your kind words!
Date: 09/20/10 06:12 am Title: Chapter 1
oh i'm so taken by your writing already :) after reading your one-shot i wasn't gonna leave your page in a hurry and man am i glad i didn't. You have such a charming way with words, i can picture everything so clearly and i just love your chatacterisations already :D this is lovely so far, i'm excited to see what's to come!
Author's Response: You're so kind! Thank you for the support
Date: 09/19/10 09:54 pm Title: Chapter 7
I love stories about the twins when they're teenagers and stumbling through the world. Your story is so awesome!
And I am totally option 3 Team Why Can't Bill Have Both?
Author's Response: Your vote has been counted -right on time :-) I'm working on the next chapter right now! I'm glad you're enjoying it so far. Thanks for reading and reviewing!