Date: 09/23/10 11:22 pm Title: Chapter 9
Honeymoon phase is definitely important, I'm glad you included it! I enjoyed reading about the twins kinda discovering each other, sweet and sexy chapter!
Author's Response: I figured the we deserved some happy twin time after all the fussing and fighting (^-^) Thanks for reading/reviewing!
Date: 09/23/10 09:18 pm Title: Chapter 9
:O
Last chapter? next chapter????
Noooooooo!
XD
Author's Response: D: I'm pretty intimidated by hoping to end it well and stay true to the original plans. Plus, I'm going to miss the little, fighting 13 yr old twins, lol. Thanks for reading/reviewing!
Date: 09/23/10 09:08 pm Title: Chapter 9
My English is very bad, but I have to say I like your story.
I await your prompt update.
Author's Response: Your English looks good to me! Thanks for reading/reviewing :-)
Date: 09/23/10 08:15 pm Title: Chapter 9
Wow again another well written chapter. And I don't want Tom to lose his Teddy!
Author's Response: Thanks :-) and don't worry-- if he loses it, Bill will find it for him again ^_^
Date: 09/23/10 07:54 pm Title: Chapter 9
LOL, loved the honeymoon period! Hee, Billi is a naughty, power-hungry boy, isn't he? *giggles* But it seems he's as putty on his brother's hands as Tom is in his. ;) Loving this so very much!
Author's Response: EXACTLY!! LOL ;-) I'm glad you enjoyed it! thanks for reading/reviewing!
Date: 09/23/10 07:51 pm Title: Chapter 9
Bill cracked me up in this chapter. He's a manipulative little horn dog!
Author's Response: lol, that's him! Thanks for reading/reviewing :-)
Date: 09/23/10 07:39 pm Title: Chapter 9
*___________*
If this is filler, then I love filler! I'll be sad to see this end, but it is really, really amazing. Reminds me of classic twin fic, and I miss that!
Author's Response: Yay! You're so sweet :-D I haven't been involved in the fandom long enough to know what comprises "classic twin fic", but I'm glad you're enjoying it. I wonder if it's that AUs are more popular now? Thanks for reading/reviewing!
Date: 09/23/10 07:36 pm Title: Chapter 9
wow 0.o
i must admit, i'm terribly saddened by the chance of the next chapter being the last. this has been pne of my fav stories.
i really liked this chapter, though i think it was a little fast how Bill gained control, but obviously, i can live with that *wink*
good luck then on the rest of the journey! can't wait to see what you come up with. take your time. genius takes molding..lol
Author's Response: Lol, was it too fast? Bill figured out pretty quickly how to use his appeal to his own advantage ;-) but Tom takes back control when he wants it :-D Thanks for the well-wishes-- I'm gonna need them (-.-) I hope the final chapter doesn't disappoint you! Thanks for reading/reviewing!
Date: 09/23/10 07:26 pm Title: Chapter 9
aw aw aw! I was so so happy to see this updated :D i love how quickly you update.this is one of those fics i'm constantly thinking about, whoops! Phew, and well, this chapter WAS important, i think. The physical dynamics of Bill and Tom are never something not worth including. Aw man, i really do adore this fic! It's incredible, i will say it again, i love your style of writing. It makes everything work so well, just everything is perfect about this :) the pace of this fic is awesome as well, i have loved watching it develop and progress throughout, even when Tom was a bitch to Bill.
I'm really excited for the next chapter :D can't believe it's so nearly over though. i'll definitely be wishing for more from you. Aw i lovee this, ever such a lot xxxo
Author's Response: I'm always self-conscious when I write porny stuff, because almost nothing's worse than bad porn, so thanks for the kind words! The next part might take longer, because it'll be so complicated... but I'm really gonna try not to keep it under a week :-)
Date: 09/22/10 03:12 pm Title: Chapter 8
*team tom all the way x3* SO SORRY FOR NOT READING/REVIEWING 3 CHAPS IN A ROW O.O I had no time, as in, I'm doing a higher level of education that requires all my time o.o and I haven't had any sleep since last Friday ¬¬ I loved it!!!! Can't wait for more!!!!!
xx Chi ^^
Author's Response: I can certainly understand being busy, but it's always good to hear from you (n_n) Good luck with school! I hope you can get some rest soon (-.-') Thanks for reading/reviewing! I'll work on the next chapter tonight :-D
Date: 09/22/10 01:41 pm Title: Chapter 8
I fucking love this story!!! Keep going keep going!!
Author's Response: Glad to hear it! Thanks for reading/reviewing :-D
Date: 09/22/10 03:17 am Title: Chapter 8
I hope there are more than two chapters left! or at least a sequel. This chapter was great, i really loved it. You covered all the emotions so well. thanks so much, keep up the great work!
Author's Response: According to my outline of events for this story, I think it'll be wrapped up in 2 more chapters. Possibly 3, depending on how it goes... but definitely not more than that. It's a story about the end of their year-long feud, so after the feud ends, there's nothing more to write about, lol! I'm glad you're liking it so far! Thanks for reading/reviewing :-D
Date: 09/22/10 02:40 am Title: Chapter 8
can i just once again express how very much i love this story? i can? lovely..
i can't help but gush about how this is written. it's all calm but intense. for some reason i feel like even though the twins continue to fight(violently, no less) it still manages to feel, idk, safe? i haven't figured out why. i like how the Erich scene was played out too. even though i felt it was kind of awkward for them to make out so long, but that could just be in my head. i like that it was just simple. undecipherable. kinda gave away little of Bill's feelings, but not in a fail kind of way.
gosh, i should really shut up now. but anyways, can't wait for more! kthanxbai
Author's Response: "Safe"... hmm, Idk why? Maybe because you know that deep down, the twins love each other? I didn't really want Erich to get to make out with Bill for so long (=_=) (because I'm such a Tom/Bill fan) but I thought about it and... 2 hormonal teenagers, alone in a house, no one to interrupt them... I remember being in my early teens and just kissing my boyfriends for HOURS on end because my parents were at work and there was no one to stop us, lol. Don't shut up! I love hearing your thoughts! It keeps me on my "A" game ^_^
Date: 09/21/10 09:07 am Title: Chapter 8
Hey!
I really like your fic! And no, I didn't like Erich, for me he's just an side character XD
Author's Response: I can totally understand that feeling! Thanks for reading/reviewing :-)
Date: 09/21/10 03:57 am Title: Chapter 8
This is just fantastic, a really different take on the twin's relationship. There's loads of fics that follow a similar idea (you know, how the twins got together when they were younger) but yours is very unique, perfectly boyish for their age, and touching as well.
All eight chapters hit the spot! I look forward to reading the rest. Oh! And your author's notes are adorable. :)
Author's Response: That's very kind of you :-) Your support means a lot to me, considering that you're one of my favorite TH authors (and that I'm very new to writing in this fandom). Thanks for reading/reviewing... and for running the site! ^_^
Date: 09/20/10 11:24 pm Title: Chapter 8
What a delicious chapter! I'm that the kisses with Eric were better than with Johanna, but I'm even happier that the ones he shared with Tom were the best of them all. :) Loved the fight, hee, that worked great!
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it :-) Thanks for reading/reviewing!
Date: 09/20/10 08:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love how you write the twins interactions. I find myself both feeling annoyed by, and feeling sorry for Tom. And Bill... poor Bill is so adorably clueless. This feels so believable.
I can't wait to see where you take us next. I have my ticket ready!
Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it and that it seems believable. Thanks for reading/reviewing!rn
Date: 09/20/10 08:09 pm Title: Chapter 8
The Bill/Erich thing wasn't bad. It was written realistically enough to make it fine. OH! I love to hear about that fight too. Did they ever say what actually caused it?
Author's Response: I'm glad it wasn't too bad. No, they never said what caused the fight! They always say they don't remember what caused all their big fights :-( which sucks because I'm so curious. I wanna know what someone could do that would make a person mad enough to hit them with a frying pan, lol! I REALLY wanna know what caused that fight in Austria where they trashed the hotel room throwing furniture at each other. They say they don't remember, but Gustav was there for the beginning of it (before they kicked him out, lol) and I bet he remembers! I wish a reporter would get him alone and ask him! Thanks for reading/reviewing!
Date: 09/20/10 07:28 pm Title: Chapter 8
Loving this turn in their relationship, it's so... natural the way you wrote it. Even though there is/was some fighting and drama, the two of them close, finally, brings this peaceful feeling that is so heart warming. Bill with anyone else just doesn't compare, imo.
Author's Response: I'm very relieved that it seemed natural! Bill with anyone else is just wrong, lol. Thanks for reading/reviewing!
Date: 09/20/10 06:57 pm Title: Chapter 8
Again amazing story and I've also loved the tale of Tom and Bill fighting with frying pans. And happy that Erick at least got to kiss Bill!!
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reading/reviewing :-)