Date: 09/25/10 10:28 pm Title: Chapter 6
Dayummm........ I like that way to shotgun. Sounds sexy a shitload :P
I want smut... and I'm possitively glad the rating's increasing with each chapter. Imma head over to the next one now :D
Author's Response: Yeah, it's pretty sexy if it's with the person you're dating - or would like to date ^_^rnrnlol! There's smut ahead XD
Date: 09/25/10 10:09 pm Title: Chapter 5
LMAO ok ok I'll review for Georg's privates' sake. God knows what's in there when he just turns his dirty boxers over and re-uses them :X
Awww they snuggled together... I wanna see Bill "interacting" with a girl, perhaps Tom looses it and does something? :D
Author's Response: Georg's privates are grateful, I'm sure XD Some Bill-and-a-girl "interaction" comes later... just a bit!
Date: 09/25/10 09:42 pm Title: Chapter 4
Those two will end up chopping each other's birds xD
Awww that's what I call a real love-hate relationship right there! Sooner or later they'll realize how much of a pair of dummies they're being!
Author's Response: "chopping each other's birds" - I've never heard that expression before! What does it mean/where does it come from?
Date: 09/25/10 09:22 pm Title: Chapter 3
This is interesting... so they're only cute when they're drunk or something? lol
Interesting, I like it a tad too much to stop reading :P
Author's Response: they have their moments of sweetness, just lost amidst a ton of stupid bickering, lol. yeah, Tom's defenses are down when he's drunk and he can't resist some cuddle time... and Bill is just like, "Yay, Tom's being nice!" and is happy to get along :-D
Date: 09/25/10 08:12 pm Title: Chapter 2
Geez... this doesn't look good, at all.
Tom's such an ASS! This is so good, it's keeping me all jumpy and anxious for more :D
Author's Response: Haha, yeah, Tom is sort of an ass. But who isn't an ass when they're 13 - especially to their siblings XD
Date: 09/25/10 08:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
AHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!
Love it :D
I love their interaction, and I'm so happy you got featured. Love the novelness of this!
Author's Response: Thank you, I was very (pleasantly) surprised to be featured! I'm glad you like it so far :-)
Date: 09/25/10 06:20 pm Title: Chapter 9
Such a sweet chapter. And well done for getting your story featured.
Author's Response: Thank you very much :-D I was super shocked by it, lol. Thanks for reading/reviewing as well!
Date: 09/25/10 04:15 pm Title: Chapter 8
I can'r make up my mind which camp I belong to. When you write B/T I want more of that, but when you write Bill and Eric, I want that!
And I love he Lost Boys and Interview with the vampire!
I would love to witness an epic and ridiculous fight between the twins at the age they are now.
Author's Response: Sounds like you're Team Why-Can't-Bill-Have-Both? lol
I love both of those movies, too!
I WOULD PAY GOOD MONEY TO WITNESS AN EPIC TWIN FIGHT NOW. or one of them at any age, really. I think it would be so hilarious and nuts! Hilarious because of course they love each other and are going to make up in 10 minutes and pretend like it never happened... and nuts because the way they describe their fights make them sound crazy as hell 6_6
I wish I could find a way to bribe the THTV crew to secretly tape one and leak it on youtube, lmao!
Date: 09/25/10 03:35 pm Title: Chapter 9
Oooh congratulations on the feature! I think this is the happiest I've been about a feaurured fic ^__^ Aw I can't tell you how happy this makes me!
Author's Response: LOL! When I got this review, I literally said out loud, "Wait...WHAT?!" I didn't know I'd been featured! WOW. That is so awesome *_* Thank you for the support!
Date: 09/25/10 03:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
ooh i already love this. nuff said
Author's Response: glad to hear it! thanks for reading/reviewing!
Date: 09/25/10 03:31 pm Title: Chapter 3
*saves Jumbie* *Supergirl pose*
This was a great chapter, sweetness! It's nice when Bill and Tom are so cute with eachother. I have a suspiscion why Tom is so angsty and stand-offish...
Author's Response: what are your suspicions? do tell (^w^) thanks for reading/reviewing! glad you like it so far :-)
Date: 09/25/10 05:03 am Title: Chapter 9
Nawww!!! How cute!!! *wierd girl who thinks everything is pretty even if most times it's not*
Added this story to my favorites! Pwetty pwetty Bill... x3
Author's Response: lol, I think (almost) everything is pretty, too XD I'm glad you're enjoying it. Thanks for reading/reviewing!
Date: 09/25/10 04:59 am Title: Chapter 9
This is such a great story. Very classic younger twins and so well written. I'm so glad this was recommended to me and I very much look forward to more! :)
Author's Response: Thank you for the kind words, and for reading/reviewing! It makes me all (•^o^•) to hear that someone recommended my little story to a friend
Date: 09/25/10 04:45 am Title: Chapter 9
I'm sad there is only going to be one more chapter left. Are you going to write a sequel, because this has been great!
Author's Response: The further I study the story outline, the more I wonder if I can fit it all into one more chapter (=_=) so it might be 2 more, but idk yet. No sequel is planned. Thanks for reading/reviewing :-)
Date: 09/24/10 08:49 pm Title: Chapter 9
Somehow I'm not surprised that Bill would use sexual favors to get his way.
Author's Response: Lol, I wouldn't put it past him! He seems like a very resourceful lad XD
Date: 09/24/10 04:49 pm Title: Chapter 9
Definitely not a filler chapter! We need to know what kind of ideas Tom has, after all. *g*
I loved it! The dialogue with their grandparents is hilarious! I worried a bit that Bill would get too power-crazy but it seems Tom can handle him. *g* I love how you write them, for example Tom saying that he'll never see Bill's face again -- it's absolutely wonderful, I love the humour and how he's teasing Bill and trying to make him smile at the same time. ♥
The next chapter sounds exciting! Don't hesitate to break it into smaller pieces if it feels intimidating, though. And don't hesitate to explore the electricity that Bill feels with Tom a little more, either. ;)
Author's Response: I thought about breaking the rest into two shorter chapters, but I think one long chapter would flow better. Idk, I'll see how it goes when I write it. Bill and Tom will definitely make some more electricity ;-) thanks for reading/reviewing!rn
Date: 09/24/10 12:40 pm Title: Chapter 8
A great chapter! When I saw the author's notes, the quote about the frying pans, I actually turned back because I'm a wimp and I was scared to read it, hee. But now I decided to read it anyway, and I'm glad I did! The fight was terrible, admittedly -- you write it so well, very effectively, I felt so bad for them when I read that and when Bill started to cry I expected Tom to go and comfort him sweetly, and he didn't, the bastard! *g* I was appalled! But the last scene more than made up for it: I love it, I love it so much. Bill's butterflies and how Tom knows what Bill means from a single word! And especially that kissing feels so good when it's the two of them. I love how overwhelmed Bill is. :) And Tom too, probably.
Only two chapters to go? I'm intrigued how the story ends! Looking forward to more! I'm so relieved that the twins get along better now (most of the time). :)
Author's Response: LOL, you are so cute! Sorry, but I just find it adorable that you were scared of the frying pan fight! (^w^) rn
yes, it would've been nice if Tom had sweetly comforted little Bill, but I don't think any brother will comfort the other after he's just been attacked with a frying pan, lol! rn
I'm glad to say that ch. 9 is angst-free, so you can have some respite from the violence in ch. 8, lol!! Thanks for reading/reviewing :-)
Date: 09/24/10 07:57 am Title: Chapter 9
Noooo! Not the last chapter! I don't want it to be over! :(
Author's Response: Well, the story is about their feud, so once the feud is resolved, there is no more story D: I'm glad you're enjoying it so far, though! Thanks for reading/reviewing :-)
Date: 09/24/10 05:36 am Title: Chapter 9
Haha, I just love Bill! Love the way he "uses" his brother (and I can't help but think that the real Bill is a bit like that x))
And I really enjoyed this chapter, I think it's great to see the progression in their relationship (:
And good luck with the final chapter! :D
Author's Response: Ha! I would LOVE to see the real Bill bossing Tom around, pulling the "little brother" card to get Tom do stuff for him XD Thanks for reading/reviewing! I'm glad you liked it
Date: 09/24/10 12:47 am Title: Chapter 9
ohhhhh over so soon? oh well, it was defenitly great! and this chapter was soooo sweet! i don't think it was a filler chap, I love the way Tom seduce his little brother and how Bill succumbs to it... it's really heart melting.
I hope to read the final chap soon (even if i feel a little sad that it's over but i think you'll write something more soon, i'm not right?)
see ya!
Author's Response: The fic is about their feud, so once it ends, the story must end, too (^-^) I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter. I will start working on the final chapter soon. Thank you for the encouragement :-)