Date: 09/29/10 09:21 am Title: Chapter 10
Woooah another stir-up D:
Poor Erich, too. He doesn't exactly deserve it, though it's for provoking Tom's jealousy xD
I love how Tom is turning into a sweeter twin.
I hope your new chapter will be up soon (:
Author's Response: Tom probably would've gotten away with it, if it weren't for the fact that the twins are out of town so much, so Andreas is hanging out with other kids in the neighborhood (including Erich). Tom is being nice, yeah - the feud is coming to an end :-D I'll work on the next chapter tomorrow. Thanks for reading/reviewing!
Date: 09/29/10 09:15 am Title: Chapter 10
Ooooh, I sense some angst coming! Bad Tomi for doing that to Erich, even if he was jealous. And he hasn't broken up with Wolfie? Uh-oh. I can't wait to see how Bill is going to get even for this, because I have no doubt he will. Fantastic chapter! Loving this so much and congrats on being featured!
Author's Response: Thank you very much! lol, Bill is definitely going to "handle the situation", but it might not be as bad as you're expecting :-)
Date: 09/29/10 07:22 am Title: Chapter 10
Congrats for getting a blue ribbon :)))
O_O Tom....A really jealous brother.
Author's Response: Thank you! Yeah, Tom is a maniac when it comes to his little brother 6_6
Date: 09/29/10 04:55 am Title: Chapter 10
I love that they're not famous yet! It's so absurd to read about it, hee. "Oh, I'm in a band," Bill can say, and he's actually going to be super famous! And not just have a hobby like so many others. So of course I loved them imagining a thousand fans! "Unbelievable," hee!
I love Tom touching Bill so that Bill will comfort him so much. ._. That he does it by touching Bill; that Bill understands right away even though Tom doesn't say anything; that Bill sings to Tom; that Tom claims to hate Bill's singing, and yet it also soothes him... it's such a lovely moment! And I love the humorous remark that the Gs aren't into it. *g*
The bathroom scene is so lovely! I especially like how they haven't changed at all -- at first Tom blows Bill in the bathroom, and next they're talking to Georg and they seem exactly like they were before. I really like your dialogue and how young and boyish they sound.
I was hoping everything would turn out all right now, but Bill being so upset about Tom sending that text to Erich and planning to apologise makes me think there will be a few complications along the way... I'm both amused and kind of frustrated! But it's good. I like how realistically teenaged they are.
Tom's shy, flirty smile! While Bill is mad at him! And then Bill is jealous because Tom might still be seeing Wolfie. You sure know how to torture us! I just want them to be happy and cuddly and harmonious but I guess I'll have to wait at least one more chapter for that. ;)
Author's Response: Your reviews are always so in depth, which is a treat for any writer. Thank you :-)
There's a few more bumps in the road, yes, but it might not be as bad as you're expecting. And rest assured that this story will end happily. I can't stand an unhappy ending in a twincest fic (u_u) it's blasphemous!
Date: 09/29/10 04:43 am Title: Chapter 10
Be a turd all you want, two more chapters is great! And oh no! I expect a huge twin meltdown coming. :O I love this fic dearly, as you know, and you very much deserved the feature. :)
Author's Response: Thanks, that's nice of you to say :-) I keep thinking I can be succinct and finish this off, but then I end up wanting to hang out with Devilish backstage and make Tom blow Bill in their apartment bathroom (•_•)
Date: 09/29/10 03:50 am Title: Chapter 9
*reading. Hot. Porn. Hot. Click next* Wait. Where's the next button? Where's the next chapter? *dies*
I just found this story, and I didn't want to be a lurker, so I thought i'd express my sadness that there isn't a next chapter. OR actually, a finish to that really hot scene right there. *has to go read other porn to satisfy porn craving*
Author's Response: Actually, I'm about to post the next chapter right now :-) It's not that porny, though :-( well, it's a little porny. Thanks for reading/reviewing!
Date: 09/28/10 04:15 pm Title: Chapter 9
Marvellous story. I love Bill's pov here, telling us about that difficult time in their young lives that suddenly became unexpectedly passionate :)
It's beautiful how Tom decides that Bill is his and no other fool in love is going to steal away his twin, not even a friend - now former :)
I love Bill in this period. In spite of his determination to make it in the big music business he's still so utterly cute and childish. Tom is pretty adorablem too, so I'm in love with this story :) *Maria
Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it so far :-) Thank you for your thoughtful review!
Date: 09/28/10 01:21 pm Title: Chapter 9
this story is amazingly good. it's well told and the plot is very interesting to read and easy to follow. i like all of the detail you put into their relationship, and their little nicknames are so cute. i love love love this, please write more soon!!!
oh, and even if you make it three more chapters, it'll still rock. XD
Author's Response: That's very kind of you to say! I'm writing more right now. I've come down with an awful cold, but I'm at my computer with a big cup of tea, doing my best (=_=) Thanks for reading/reviewing!
Date: 09/28/10 05:24 am Title: Chapter 9
Don't apologise for there being two more chapters! The more chapters, the better. And anyway, I like the honeymoon period - I don't want to go and deal with Erich and Wolfie...can't we just pretend they're not there? Please? Pretty please? ^.^
Author's Response: Well, I was apologizing because I was like "Next chapter is the last one!" and then took it back. Haha... pretending Erich and Wolfie don't exist would certainly make my job easier! I could finish in just one more chapter :-D but I have to create at least some resolution to those storylines before I can feel like the fic is done. Thanks for reading/reviewing :-)
Date: 09/28/10 04:35 am Title: Chapter 7
Oh, definitely team Tom! =] I love how you write Tom in this; even though he's only 10 minutes older, he seems so much more mature than Bill. I don't know, but it's just really well written. This is also the first Tokio Hotel fiction I've read, and you have definitely gotten me interested in reading more!
Author's Response: I definitely view Tom as the more "worldly" twin and Bill as the more naive one. Your first TH fic! Welcome to THF! There's tons of great fic here, so you're in luck! Of course, I would recommend everything in my "Favorites" section as must-reads ;-) Authors like cynical_terror, undrockroll and Haylz are a good place to start, too. Thanks for reading/reviewing :-)
Date: 09/28/10 01:04 am Title: Chapter 9
Bill better get the fluffy pillow! lol i loved it! it's awesome...it's weird how they didn't have a "but we're brothers" chat, but it's still good.
-Merna
Author's Response: The boys will discuss what's happening between them in the final chapter, but honestly (I haven't written it yet but) I don't foresee much angst on their part about the morality of their relatinship. I don't view the twins as people who are overly concerned with morality or the rules of society. I think they'd be more on the side of thinking it's no one else's business what they do and that they're not hurting anyone. Of course, we all have our opinions of what the twins "are really like" and I could be totally wrong ;-) If they were older, I'd have them more concerned about the implications of their incestual relationship, but at 13, I don't think most teens really care about anything except getting what they want. Thank you for sharing your thoughts! I'm glad you're enjoying it so far :-)
Date: 09/27/10 10:10 pm Title: Chapter 9
I love this story! So much detail and I can't wait for more!
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it so far! I'm working on the next chapter right now and hope to have it up in a day or two. Thanks for reading/reviewing :-)rn
Date: 09/27/10 06:45 pm Title: Chapter 9
Poor Teddy.
What a lovely story, I'm kind of sad it's almost over. I do love the way you write Bill and Tom's characters; it's light and absolutely delightful.
I'd never read/heard the interview you got the prompt from, but it did shocked me, too. Oh, and it was absolutely fit for plot development.
I do have to say I really enjoy your end notes. They are always fun to read. I'm gonna miss those too, when this story is finished.
Well, thanks for sharing! This was a lot of fun to read.
See ya.
Author's Response: If you still haven't read the interview, you should google it! It's so adorable! I always worry that my end notes will seem obnoxious, like I am just babbling about myself and the story and no one cares 6_6 so that's very sweet of you to like them! Thanks for reading/reviewing :-)
Date: 09/27/10 06:06 pm Title: Chapter 9
i just caught up.
and i have to say woaaaah!
from the fighting to the lving!
whiplash!
amazing though!
Author's Response: I hope it didn't seem too abrupt! thanks for reading/reviewing :-)
Date: 09/27/10 11:00 am Title: Chapter 9
Just caught up with this story, thanks to the feature (congratulations, btw!) and I adore it. I love how you've worked in things we know about their lives (like the frying pan fight). It makes the whole story seem so realistic.
Author's Response: Thanks, I was really surprised to be featured! I'm glad you like it so far. The canon in this fandom is fun that I couldn't resist throwing some stuff like the frying pan fight in XD thanks for reading/reviewing!
Date: 09/27/10 01:57 am Title: Chapter 9
OMG! I LOVE IT! YOU HAVE TO MAKE ANOTHER CHAPTER! it really is an awesome story. Danke for writing it!
Author's Response: You're welcome, of course :-D Thanks for reading/reviewing! I'm glad you like it so far. I'll work on the next chapter tomorrow.
Date: 09/27/10 01:31 am Title: Chapter 7
im so team Tom! i mean come on they ARE soul mates. and wow such a great story! i love it!
Author's Response: I feel the same way about Team Tom XD
I'm glad you're liking it so far! Thanks for reading/reviewing :-)
Date: 09/26/10 09:58 pm Title: Chapter 9
i love this story please continue!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: I will definitely continue. I'll work on the next chapter tomorrow. Thanks for reading/reviewing :-)
Date: 09/26/10 09:02 pm Title: Chapter 3
Well, then, I guess I better review! Can't have Jumbie in the rafters. The twins are quite detailed, and cute. Good job!
Author's Response: I'm sure Jumbie appreciates it - and so do I :-) Thanks
Date: 09/26/10 09:02 pm Title: Chapter 9
I am beyond happy that your story was featured. I read all the chapters so far in one day and it really helped me through my horrible mood. Younger Bill and Tomi sweetness makes my violent temper turn to sappy mush...*hugs*
BTW I'm happy that you'll be 'explaining' stuffs in the next few chapters because I think I know why Tom is so offended by Bill and Erich's thing. Jealous Tom is so sweet ^^
Author's Response: Thanks, I was very shocked (and very happy, of course!) to be featured.
I'm really glad to hear that this could help lighten your mood! Hope everything's ok?
I love jealous Tom, lol. I love jealous Bill, too, actually XD Thanks for reading/reviewing :-)