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Reviewer: fyredancer Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/20/11 12:04 pm Title: Chapter 7

TEAM TOM HUD

Author's Response: I am Team Tom, too! always (;~;)

Reviewer: fyredancer Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/20/11 11:29 am Title: Chapter 6

OH MY GODDDDDDDDDD

Author's Response: you rang? (n_n)y

Reviewer: fyredancer Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/19/11 08:27 pm Title: Chapter 5

WHEN DOING MY WEEKLY SHOPPING I BLAME YOU FOR MY ADDICTION TO FAGE YOGURT

Author's Response: I regret nothing. wot r ur fave flavors????????? I love honey (especially w/a banana to make it a meal!), cherry and peach best. strawberry is good, too.

Reviewer: fyredancer Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/19/11 08:15 pm Title: Chapter 4

ONCE, WHEN WE WERE IN CALIFORNIA HANGING OUT, KISH AND I TALKED ABOUT YOU. IDR WHAT WE SAID. PROBABLY TWIN-RELATED.

Author's Response: probably shit-talking. why am I not surprised (;_;) cyberbullies

Reviewer: fyredancer Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/19/11 08:12 pm Title: Chapter 3

YUP. OPERATING A MOTOR VEHICLE AND REVIEWING MY FIC ON YOUR PHONE AT THE SAME TIME. LIKE A BOSS.

Author's Response: no hud ;_; I'm telling Oprah on you

Reviewer: fyredancer Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/19/11 08:10 pm Title: Chapter 2

THAT TOM, SUCH A FUCKING COCKBLOCK EVEN AT THIS TENDER AGE

Author's Response: this made me lol irl

Reviewer: fyredancer Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/19/11 07:53 pm Title: Chapter 1

Okay I plan on leaving you thirteen worthless reviews. The first is a story. It is the story of how I found this story. I had seen the banner many times, but confused it with a different het story by the same title, thinking somehow it was part of that series. Shush, I know that makes no sense. But EmilyExorsist said no, go read it, this is classic young twins. Which I love! So next time I saw this banner cruising around the recents page, I checked the most recently posted chapter. I test-read stuff, not at the beginning but wherever the story is up to, on the theory this will better inform me whether I'll like the story or not. And this fic was REALLY REALLY GOOD! So I kept reading, then liked it so much I went back and read it from the beginning. Hahaha. It's a stupid story, but that's how I found this fic. And I STILL haven't read most of Cupid's Chokehold (someone else's fic, duh) so you know I really like this.

Author's Response: what are you even saying.. you read stories from the middle to the end, then go back to read the beginning??? wot r u, a serial killer????

Reviewer: MiseryRebel Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/12/11 08:45 pm Title: Chapter 13

 I really, really, really enjoyed this fic.
 I pouted for hours whenever I had to stop reading because I had to go to bed or do my homework :P lol And I 'whooped!' for joy everytime I got back on the computer to read it.

 You're an extremely amazing author, I applaud you^^

 ... I have a feeling I'm going to be reading this one over a lot! Haha!

 Again, fantastic job xD
 Much love♥



Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading/reviewing and for the encouragement :)

Reviewer: MiseryRebel Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/10/11 10:51 pm Title: Chapter 8

 Mmm, this HAS to be one of the best fics on the entire INTERNET xD
 No joke Hun. This is amazing :D



Author's Response: thank you, doll. Very kind of you to say :)

Reviewer: Arii Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/26/11 10:32 pm Title: Chapter 13

This is such a great story. I love it!

Author's Response: Cool :) thanks for reading/reviewing!

Reviewer: puddin Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/13/11 09:20 am Title: Chapter 13

Awesome fic! Keep up the writing you are an amazing author!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! Thank you for reviewing every chapter; very awesome of you<3

Reviewer: puddin Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/12/11 11:04 pm Title: Chapter 12

Two halves of the same hole. ;)

Author's Response: exactly ;)

Reviewer: puddin Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/12/11 05:25 am Title: Chapter 1

Ok. You've got that 13 year old psychology figured out. You are so right! I almost forgot how 13/14 year olds think.

Author's Response: lol! Yeah, I don't imagine that 13/14 year old Bill was very ~thoughtful and empathetic~ toward 'outsiders'. Hell, even 21 year old Bill is always ragged on by Tom and the Gs for being "egoistisch" XD

Reviewer: puddin Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/12/11 05:12 am Title: Chapter 11

I just want to see them make up. ;P

Author's Response: aw<3 that's true. I'd love to see that<3

Reviewer: puddin Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/12/11 04:30 am Title: Chapter 10

Tom is in BIG trouble now! That was a really low and selfish thing for him to do. How can he lie to Bill and be so deceitful? I see a big blow-out brewing.

Author's Response: Tom's a believer that "all's fair in love and war" XD He's willing to do all kinds of stuff to keep his "little brother safe"

Reviewer: puddin Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/12/11 04:09 am Title: Chapter 9

I can totally see Tom being the sexual aggrressor and Bill being the demanding control freak. Thanks for capturing it so vividly. Love it!

Author's Response: Haha, it's a bit of a kink of mine, twc-wise. Glad you approve XD

Reviewer: puddin Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/11/11 10:13 pm Title: Chapter 8

I think the Bill/Erich was a good move. It sets up the intensity that triggers the frying pan incident. It was hard to buy that Bill didn't understand why Erich was upset. It was obvious to the rest of us that he was chasing Bill the whole time. I guess denial was hard at work there. Maybe Bill doesn't realize how cute and sexy he is - yet. Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Bill at this age in this fic is pretty oblivious/self-centered. He only really thinks about himself and Tom and the band. He's also never had a boy crush on him (or many people crush on him, really, which is why he's not very sensitive to Joanna, either). He knows that Erich thinks he's cute, but he doesn't spend enough time thinking about Erich's feelings to wonder if Erich has a real crush on him or not. Yeah, he definitely doesn't realize how cute he is yet XD Thanks for your reviews :)

Reviewer: puddin Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/11/11 09:42 pm Title: Chapter 7

I know you have already written the next chapter but if I had the choice I would vote for #3.

Author's Response: I guess it ended up being #3, a little bit :D

Reviewer: puddin Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/11/11 09:19 pm Title: Chapter 6

Gross! But I knew he was about to barf. Been there, done that so many, many moons ago.

Author's Response: me too! Nothing like being old enough to know better but too young to care :D

Reviewer: puddin Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/11/11 09:17 am Title: Chapter 4

This chapter was sooo cute and funny and frustrating! "I'll show you mine if you show me yours." Sweet! "Bloody Penis Pants" LOL XD A Tom K original! Poor Bill, so unfair! Tom gets to go out but Bill doesn't? If I was Simone I would make sure that both my little angels got to play with their friends. ;)

Author's Response: lol, you'd be a great mom for twins :D Thanks for reading/reviewing!

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