Date: 10/06/10 05:14 pm Title: Chapter 11
I love your story, and can't wait for the next chapter. You are a very talented writer. If it would be possible, Maybe you could check out my stories and maybe review?? Thanks and I do really love this story. :)
Author's Response: That's nice of you to say. Thanks for reading/reviewing :-)
I just looked at one of your stories. Tom stabbed Bill o_O ?!? I can't handle that sort of fic. I'm sorry!
Date: 10/06/10 05:01 pm Title: Chapter 11
Dickweed!
hahahahaha i loved that! thats offically in my dictionary!
uh, this was very good!
those are hard! hahaha but ide have to say 5! thatd be funny!
Author's Response: XD I wonder where the expression comes from?
I'm glad you're liking it so far! Thanks for reading/reviewing :-)
5 would be hilarious, I agree :-Drn
Date: 10/06/10 04:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
i'm with you on that episode. imagine how many hits it'll get on youtube....
Author's Response: It would get about a 1,000 just from me watching it over and over, lol!
Date: 10/06/10 01:57 pm Title: Chapter 11
Delightful. They're really focused on each other, discovering all the fun they can have with one another. Lovely update.
Author's Response: "discovering all the fun" is such a classy way to put it, lol! Thanks for reading/reviewing :-)
Date: 10/06/10 03:35 am Title: Chapter 11
i loved this darling~ i'm praying that it has more steamy moments and possibly smut. hot, sexy, steam-filled smut....
Author's Response: there will be more, ahem, steamy moments (-.-) thanks for reading/reviewing!
Date: 10/06/10 03:02 am Title: Chapter 11
This was a great chapter. Super hot. You write so well, I don't want this story to ever end. So my vote is of course for 13 chapters. And then the sequel could be like 20 or 21? =) keep up the great work!
Author's Response: LOL! I'm glad you're enjoying it. There won't be a sequel :D Thanks for reading/reviewing!
Date: 10/06/10 12:52 am Title: Chapter 11
FUCKIN LOVE YOU.
Author's Response: that made me LOL irl XD thanks for reading/reviewing
Date: 10/06/10 12:25 am Title: Chapter 11
He was laying in a bed in someone else's house, half-naked, waiting for his twin brother to come back and finger him. He had officially lost his mind.
I giggled. And I loved it when Bill deleted Tom's number from Wolfie's phone!
Also, damn this was hot! *_*
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it :D I'm also glad it was hot. In general, I write what I want to read, but it's hard for me to tell if my own smutty scenes "work". Thanks for reading/reviewing!
Date: 10/05/10 08:39 pm Title: Chapter 11
I would pick a Bill/Tom fight with Adult Kaulitzes, Because I think of Bill as more confident/maasculine(can you believe it?) now than when they were teenagers, so in my mind he could pose more of a challenge in a physical fight. It could be a physical fight, right? With angry sex at the end:)
Author's Response: See, I think Bill is probably freakishly strong when he's mad, LMAO! I could see him being a lot more ruthless than Tom when it comes to doing physical harm, too. I think Tom would always hold back a bit out of fear of hurting Bill, whereas Bill would just go apeshit, LOL! Angry sex at the end is a must, of course XD
Date: 10/05/10 07:42 pm Title: Chapter 11
i would want to see the baby k's fight.
Author's Response: me too! sooo cute *_*
Date: 10/05/10 06:45 pm Title: Chapter 11
yay! influence *fist pump* ooh, liked it :)
hmm, which fight would i pay to see, god, id love to see them all, right? but i think...yah id really like to see the austria one, and also id really like to see an adultkaulitz fight :3
Author's Response: Argh! I should hit you with a frying pan for putting the idea in my head XD I'm having a lot of fun writing this fic, but I thought it would only be 10 chapters and it just keeps getting longer and longer...lol. I'll be sad when I'm done, though...
I would totally pay to see any of them.. but an Adult Kaulitz fight would be funny. Maybe fighting over how to decorate their new (alleged) LA home ^_^
Date: 10/05/10 06:14 pm Title: Chapter 11
5 omg!
Loved this
Author's Response: :D thanks for reading/reviewing
Date: 10/05/10 05:13 pm Title: Chapter 11
i loved this it so awesome. personally, i'd like to see Older Teenage Kaulitz fight or Adult Kaulitz fight. and Grumpy Old Men Kaulitz fight would just be a blast XD
and i agree, the one where they trashed the hotel room would be classic. but yeah, i love the story, can't wait for more!!!!!
Author's Response: I'm glad you're liking it so far! I'm still hoping for a THTV episode that's a montage of twin fights...lmao! I know that is VERY unlikely, but a girl can dream XD thanks for reading/reviewing!
Date: 10/05/10 03:34 pm Title: Chapter 11
hmmm..i liked to see them fight at like age 17 or 18.tht wud be great to see bill fight tom with the lions mane.great story btw.u know everytime u update i go crazy...shh..
Author's Response: lion's mane vs dreadlocks would lead to epic hair-pulling XD Thanks for reading/reviewing! I'm glad you go crazy ^_^
Date: 10/05/10 02:59 pm Title: Chapter 11
I'd choose a baby fight, cos they're cute cute like tom eating Bill's ear or hitting him with some toy *_*
I liked the chapter, the bill-wolfie scene and of course the sex, is so UNDER AGE, I mean ahah love it
Author's Response: OMFG, SO CUTE *_* I would be the worst babysitter, because I'd just sit there going "OMG CUUUUUTE" instead of breaking up the fight, lol. I had fun writing the Bill/Wolfie scene, glad you liked it. Don't make me feel bad about the underage sex o_O I already feel pervy enough! thanks for reading/reviewing
Date: 10/05/10 01:39 pm Title: Chapter 11
I'd love to see a fight between them, no matter the era. And I have to agree with kireinayorudakara, it'd be very cute if 'thirteen' has 13 chapters. :D
Loved the chapter, loved that Bill got even, even if Tom really didn't care about Wolfie any longer. Loved that we got a very plausible explanation regarding the origin of their fighting and why Tom was acting so aloof with Bill before. Never mind that it was too hot to read that last scene. *fans self* I'll be looking forward to more!
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. Bill got even, of course! He would never let an opportunity like that pass him by XD
The rift will be explored a little more in the next chapter. Of course, Star Search/Tom feeling abandoned was a major factor, but there were other elements. As it usually goes in life, it's not that cut and dry. Thanks for reading/reviewing!
Date: 10/05/10 12:51 pm Title: Chapter 11
I love long chapters ! I’m so glad Bill didn’t betrayed the Twin Code ! It’s very cute how he didn’t wanna sell Tom :)
Lol! Tom’s logic about how they’re not gay cause their twins and it’s not gross cause they’re not brothers makes absolutely no sense, I love it !
I’m so glad they get to talk and clear some things up! Poor Tom was feeling abandoned... I completely forgive him for acting like a jerk, you really explained his side well, good job with that! The end of the chapter was really hot!
As for the survey, that’s such a hard choice! I would probably go for Baby twins, just cause it would be adorable! But I must say that the trashed Hotel room and the frying pan thing would be awesome to see too!
It would be cool indeed if this fic as 13 chapters ! I can’t wait for the next one, sorry for the long review, I just have so much to say on this fic, which is a good thing I guess, it proves it’s a very interesting story :D
Author's Response: No need to apologize for the long review - I love long reviews! It's great to see a reader really coming along on the journey with me :D
Tom's logic was inspired by the twins constantly insisting in interviews that they're "not like regular brothers" because "twins are magical" and they're "one person in two bodies" XD
I'm glad you forgive Tom! He was just hurt :-( and also possessive/protective/a little 13 yr old asshole, lol!
Baby twins fighting would be THE END OF ME. I could not handle the cuteness overload *_*
Thank you for reading/reviewing. I'll work on the next chapter soon.
Date: 10/05/10 12:45 pm Title: Chapter 11
Ah, boys. Remember, Communication is key! They are so silly. I'm glad Bill and Erich made up. I hate being in Erich's situation. No one deserves that.
As for footage of a twin fight. I would pay real good munny if someone had filmed the infamous frying pan fight! I would like to see them have a knockdown drag out fight as adults, and then watch them get all guilty for hurting each other. And I say Old Man Kaulitz Twin fight would be funny as hell. Hmm, there was a recent episode of Rob Dyrdek's Fantasy factory where Rob and his cousin Drama dressed up in old man clothes and had professional prosthetics applied to their faces so they could pass themselves off as 80 year old men. I still maintain that Tokio Hotel should produce a reality tv show. I bet it would be like the Fantasy Factory... insane and hilarious.
Author's Response: A knockdown drag out followed by guilt, OMG YES! Amazing!
Tokio Hotel on a reality show... I don't think would be that great, honestly. I think Bill would refuse to do anything that required a lot of physical effort or that messed up his hair :-( and I think Tom would bitch at Bill for being a girl, but secretly not want to do it, either. He'd just want to drive cool vehicles and not get his sneakers dirty XD Georg seems pretty particular about his hair, as well. Gustav would probably not want to do anything he found embarrassing. I love THTV, though. Just seeing them live their lives is insane and hilarious enough for me :D!!
Thanks for reading/reviewing!
Date: 10/05/10 10:00 am Title: Chapter 11
I say number 3! But than again it would be interesting to see number 5 as well! 0_0
Author's Response: I'd be interested in any of them. It's hard for me to picture them as old men, but it would be hilarious to see it! :D
Date: 10/05/10 09:41 am Title: Chapter 11
Frickin fantastic... I´m so... I dunno... And, about the fight thing... I think I´d like Baby Kaulitz and Young Teenage Kaulitz most... Cause they´re so cute in that age! Later they become more... I dunno, beautiful, and hot of course!! Well... Bill is more beautiful than hot, and Tom is more hot than beautiful.
Author's Response: I agree, they were super cute when they were little! I also agree with the hot/beautiful thing. Bill is more beautiful than hot and Tom is more hot than beautiful... but sometimes Tom's face is so pretty, I'm like o_o?! It's like I forget, sometimes, that he's just as pretty as Bill. Thanks for reading/reviewing!