Date: 10/23/10 07:24 pm Title: Chapter 13
I've seen the commercial xD And all the other parts of their lives you've referenced throughout this fic. I loved the scene you included when Bill got the little pebble stuck beneath his skin, poor guy xD
Phew, I can't believe this is over! I have LOVED this fic, so so much! It's quickly became an all time favourite and I'm sure it will remain so. I honestly cannot flaw this, wow. It's just, everything, everything about this fic is perfect. As well as reading it for the sheer enjoyment, I'm BURSTING with admiration for your writing. I'm pretty much in awe of it, it's extremely PERFECT ^__^
Do you think you'll be writing anything else in the future? I'd love to see more, so much more :D I can't get enough of your writing! I think I'm going to have to read your Brian/Justin fanfiction too, another beautiful couple :) woot!
Thank you SO much for sharing this with us, it has definitely been nothing but a delight to read! Take care, always ^___^
Author's Response: I can't believe it's over, either! and I can't believe how long it turned out - almost 40,000 words! I have a few plot ideas, but I don't know if/when I'll write more TH fic. I put a lot of time/effort into writing, so right now I'm sort of still recovering from finishing this one, lol.
I LOVE Brian/Justin! They're my favorite same-sex TV couple ever. If you want to read it, all my fic is listed in the memories of my LJ, under "QAFics".
You've been so kind and supportive, thank you. I appreciate it :-)
Date: 10/23/10 05:52 pm Title: Chapter 13
It was a really lovely ending and I'm so happy that Erich didn't end up all alone :')
And I loved that you wrote about the little anecdote of the pool and the little stone underneath Bill's skin :')
Thank you for this story :)
Author's Response: I thought the Erich supporters deserved a happy ending of their own ;-) I'm glad you liked the ending. Thanks for all the support :-)
Date: 10/23/10 03:56 pm Title: Chapter 13
Awwww, this was the perfect ending to a wonderful story. Realistic and classic twins to the end. Really loved this! *huggles you* Congrats on finishing it! Loved that you could include that little bit about the black little stone here and of course, let us see how much better the twins were getting along, without stopping being brothers who fight and then make up a little while later. :D
I agree about the commercial, it's awesome!
Author's Response: I'm glad the ending was satisfying for you. I put a lot of effort into it. I love that black pebble story! I'm so curious about it. I want Bill to show us it on THTV! Thanks for the congratulations, and for reading/reviewing :-)
I read that there will be more commercials starring Alice/Bill -- can't wait!
Date: 10/23/10 03:49 pm Title: Chapter 13
wow, this story was so freaking good. i almost cried at the end, cause it's over now!!!!! but yes, i loved every single chapter, just too much. all the ups and downs and fights and smutty scenes were so good. and them listening to their completed album made me turn it on and listen to it =) thank you for writing this story. i love it.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your kind comments. It's weird to me that it's over, too! lol I'm relieved but a little sad because I had such fun writing it. I'm glad you had fun reading it :D
Date: 10/23/10 03:05 pm Title: Chapter 13
Was a terrific story. Thanks for sharing :)
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading/reviewing :-)
Date: 10/23/10 03:02 pm Title: Chapter 13
The ending was perfect in my opinion! I really enjoyed this! Welcome to THF and I love your work! xx
Author's Response: I'm so glad to hear that the ending was satisfying for you. I worked hard on it! Thanks for the support :D
Date: 10/23/10 02:53 pm Title: Chapter 13
This ended great. :D I really enjoyed all of it.
The commercial is really funny XD
Author's Response: I'm glad the ending didn't disappoint you. Thanks for reading/reviewing :-)
I love the commercial... all this talking about it makes me wanna watch it again XD
Date: 10/23/10 02:12 pm Title: Chapter 13
This is a great chapter! I love that Andreas is so thrilled that the twins are hanging out together again, even though it seems that his position is worse for it... but of course he knows that the twins belong together. *g* And I like all the realistic details, like Bill using his shirt "as a protective barrier," not wanting to touch Andreas' underwear! You nail that kind of details. It's a joy to read.
Bill and Tom's interaction is so lovely. Sexual and otherwise, hee. He cracks me up when he says that they'll have a huge party when they turn eighteen "even if it's a school night!" Oh Bill. I'm so glad he didn't have to go to school for much longer after that! I like all the hints concerning their future, for example Bill imaging five hundred thousand fans. :D Oh, and Tom is the smartest, best big brother ever. Of course they shouldn't go to school on their birthday!
Tom rimming Bill is so hot *_* and I love the description of all of their exploration and how it develops. The sex is so hot, especially Bill craving for a "rougher treatment." *fans self* I love how Bill is paralysed and gulping for breath. You write them so well!
Aww, the ending is so sweet! I love Bill not being able to imagine his life without Tom, and Tom saying he'd be nowhere without Bill. ♥ They're so sweet and lovely together! Even though they bicker, too. *g* This ending -- and this whole story -- made me very happy! Thank you!
I don't demand a sequel, but would you mind telling me what happened to the pebble in Bill's hand? Did it really happen? I haven't heard of it.
And the commercial is pure gold. :D
Author's Response: I have a bit of a rimming fetish when it comes to two guys together (*_*) I'm glad the finale didn't disappoint you!
The pebble story is based on true events, lol! Tom wrote about it in his blog last year. I edited the story notes to include the actual excerpt, if you want to read it :-) I'm really curious about the exact placement of the pebble. I want Bill to show us on video XD
That commercial made my day! Couldn't have asked for better. Plus, now we know why Bill was in LA without Tom recently - he was filming it! Although I'm not entirely convinced that Tom wasn't with him, house-hunting. But that's just my theory based on no actual facts :D
With every chapter, I looked forward to hearing your thoughts. You were a great source of encouragement and insight. Thank you for your support.
Date: 10/23/10 01:28 pm Title: Chapter 13
What an awesome story. Thanks for writing this. We can never have too many great stories about angsty, horny teenage twins!
Author's Response: I'm glad you think so. It was my pleasure. Thank you for the support :-)
Date: 10/23/10 11:49 am Title: Chapter 13
This was perfect, really, I couldn't wish for a better ending for this fic. It was sweet and just full of twin love, I loved it. You're really good at writing sexy scenes, it's just so intimate and hot, good job with that !
This fic was truly amazing, the plot was really good and your writing style is awesome. Thank you so much for sharing this story with us. It's always cool to discover a new author, I'm looking forward to read more stories from you cause you're really talented! Thanks again for this great journey, it's was so much fun to follow.
I LOVE the commercial too! Omg, it's just hilarious! Makes me wanna see Bill act more too!
Author's Response: Aw, I'm so glad the ending lived up to your expectations. I'm always nervous about writing sexy scenes (because nothing is worse than bad porn!), so that's nice to hear.
Thank you very much for being such a loyal reviewer and supporter from my very first TH fic and throughout this entire series. I really feel like you came on this journey with me and that I couldn't have done it without you and the other people who took the time to encourage me and share your perspective :-)
Date: 10/23/10 11:31 am Title: Chapter 13
I loved this story, so sad to see it over D: And yes, I saw the commercial and died happy. That was hilariously awesome :)
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading/reviewing :-) That commercial was so amazing, seriously. I watched it like three times in a row, just cracking up!
Date: 10/23/10 11:09 am Title: Chapter 13
aww I love this story! you're amazing!
Author's Response: That's very nice of you to say :-) Thanks for reading/reviewing.
Date: 10/23/10 11:07 am Title: Chapter 13
*Cryes* Aww, so sweet! I dunno if i have said this before, but u write so realistic! I mean, it all makes sense! I donīt believe in twincest, i think itīs cute, but i donīt believe in it... But u make it so real!! I kinda didnīt want to read this chapter, cuz i didnt want the story to end... but i couldnīt NOT read it!
Author's Response: I'm very happy to hear that it seems realistic to you. I feel the same way about twincest: it's harmless and fun to fantasize, but it's just that: fantasies! All things must come to an end :D but thanks for reading and reviewing! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 10/23/10 10:16 am Title: Chapter 12
This is so lovely! I really like the dialogue, for example the scene with the Gs at the beginning, you write them all so well and so realistically.
I was all "ACK NO" when David almost walked in on them, but thankfully he didn't see them! That was so horrible... but I love Tom's reaction, that he laughs and isn't turned off at all. Hee. And I love the sex scenes, all of them! Bill thinking that nothing's gross when they have sex! ♥
The bullying is so awful, especially when I know that it really happened. :( But I enjoy your writing even when I don't like the subject -- the dialogue is so marvellous, again! And it's so gratifying to read about Bill saying he's going to be famous, and the bullies not believing them. HA, you fictional bullies! He'll show you!
I understand both Tom and Bill so well when they fight. And I love that it doesn't end with Bill storming off. Tom implying that he wants to keep Bill safe is so lovely! As is, of course, them knowing how to spend their time before their parents come home. *g*
This is such a great story! I don't know if I'm even able to read the last chapter, knowing there won't be any more. *sad* The promise of porn helps, though. :D And I hope and believe that you'll write more things!
Author's Response: You know, in twincest (especially young twincest) there's often a certain amount of tension for the readers, fearing that the twins will get caught. I wrote the near-miss and David announcing to everyone that the twins weren't in the studio just to get it out of the way, lol. That way, the worry that someone would walk in wasn't in the back of the readers' minds for the whole scene. Also, it was funny to me to imagine Tom not caring and Bill being like "UR NUTS o_O"
The fact that they were really bullied breaks me heart. Poor little fellas, lol. It makes me quite satisfied that the twins are rich superstars now and their former bullies have to hear/read about all their accomplishments ^_^
I'm glad you understand both of their sides in the fights. As the saying goes, "it takes two."
LOL, there is quite a bit of porn in the final chapter. I felt like there might be too much, actually, but whatever! lol Thanks for always leaving such thoughtful reviews!
Date: 10/23/10 09:43 am Title: Chapter 13
I'm sad your fic is finished, it is so brilliant and amazing and wonderful!=) Thank you for sharing=)
Yes Bill with Alice Cooper were fantastic, Bill did a really good job acting, but what I liked best of all was how full of fun and even sarcasm the commercial is=))
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it :-) Thank you for reading/reviewing.
I loved how they poked fun at themselves in the commercial, especially Alice Cooper with the old man fans, lmao!
Date: 10/23/10 09:32 am Title: Chapter 13
thanks for this beautiful tale!
and for the commercial with Alice Cooper, I totally agree...
I think Bill (or the twins) will go for acting one day! they are already modeling and are so at ease in front of the cameras.
Author's Response: You're very welcome. I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for reading/reviewing :-)
They talk a lot about acting one day, but I'm impatient, lol! They should do a remake of The Lost Boys, where Bill is the brother who turns into a vampire and Tom is the one who saves him, lmao!! But Tom probably wouldn't want to play the younger brother XD
Date: 10/23/10 09:18 am Title: Chapter 13
*0* Such a great last chapter!
I love everything about it, especially the characterizations.
Usually people are sad when good fics like this one are over, but I'm happy for you (: You must feel accomplished for writing such a great story!
I won't have to miss this, because it's gonna be in my favorites for me to read again whenever I want, and personally I think that it being completed makes it easier to come back to. I congratulate you for being so successful throughout this story :D
I really hope to see more fics from you soon!
Author's Response: I feel accomplished to have it finished, definitely. But I'll sort of miss writing it... it's bittersweet :D
I'm very flattered that you would re-read it and I'm glad that the final chapter didn't disappoint you. Thank you for the support :-)
Date: 10/23/10 08:05 am Title: Chapter 13
I loved this story
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad to hear it :-)
Date: 10/23/10 07:23 am Title: Chapter 13
I loved the ending, it was absolutely adorable!
I;m sad to see it over, but you did a great job ending it ^^
Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading/reviewing :-)
Date: 10/19/10 09:42 pm Title: Chapter 12
The final chapter? UGH! It's no fair it has to end at all! I love this story, it is AMAZING! I really do love the way you wrote it. And now... Just one more chappie. *Sigh* Danke for writing it though. I wuved it! :)
Author's Response: I'm glad you've enjoyed it so far! Thank you for reading/reviewing! I'm working on the final chapter and I think it's gonna be VERY long 6_6