Date: 10/31/10 03:01 am Title: Chapter 3
NOOOO! NOT THE JUMBIES!!!
THINK OF THE CHILDREN WOMAN!!!lovin it so far!
Author's Response: LOL! thanks :-)
Date: 10/26/10 06:17 pm Title: Chapter 13
awww!! this was really awsome!! can't really say anything else 'cause my brain won't work, I'm too tired XD but awsome story, i loved this!!
Author's Response: Cool, thank you :-) and thanks for reading/reviewing!
Date: 10/26/10 02:40 pm Title: Chapter 13
OMG, you wrote 13 yr old twins having rampant sex!! IT WAS SO AWESOME!!!
I havn't read a story this good in a very very long time. This fic really reminded me of the "classic" twincest fics where you can really understand WHY the twins developed this type of relationship, and I LOVE that.
Their interactions and actions felt very real, especially their dialogue (that was one of my fav parts) which gave them distinct personalities and your twins felt human, and flawed. You portrayed their emotions so well, directly and indiractly. Like, the way they kind of play eachother and Tom always covertly manuevers Bill away from possible other relationships is awesome, it creates depth in the story.
OMG, and the sex!! Seriously!!!! *fans self* You write it just the way I like it... little twins who are exploring with eachother and pushing eachothers boundaries, and are so needy of one another. So sexy.
You're plot was fab too. You played with your characters, and the OFC/OMC's you introduced were there with purpose but unobstructive. There are many times when I'm reading fics and I have no idea WHY the OFC/OMC is included and they feel fake and you start hating them and it ruins the story, but your characters were very natural. They flowed with the story and were great background. You gave everyone multi-dimensional personalities and lives which made everything feel very real, and unfortunately that's a rare thing.
The unique thing for me about this fic was really how well you encompassed what the twins (and the G's) must have been going thru in their lives at that time: band practice, band apt, Jost & co., publicity, making the album, school, commuting, living with their parents (I LOVED your Simone!! so well done.), their friends, their loves, their free time, their drug habits, their partying, getting rides from their parents, etc... all of it. It's VERY well rounded. You portrayed 13 yr olds that are obviously very dedicated and headstrong and ambitious, but also the fact that they really are 13, and their view on the world.
I dunno what else much to say cuz this fic was amazing. I was glued to my laptop reading this. In fact, I knew before I started reading this that it was going to be great, which is why i delayed reading this fic until you'd finished posting it, lol, and I was so right: AMAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAZING. One of my new favs. :)
Author's Response: I know what you mean about OFC/OMCs, and about waiting until a fic is done. I do that too sometimes. I try not to make readers wait too long for an update because I know how much it kills me to wait, lol. Thank you for your kind and in-depth review. I'm glad that you enjoyed it :-)
Date: 10/26/10 12:16 am Title: Chapter 13
This was hot and precious! You wove all the real stuff we know with what I for sure wish was real so well.
Author's Response: Thank you :-) and thanks for reading/reviewing!
Date: 10/25/10 02:14 am Title: Chapter 1
i think the reason he looks better in person is because it's more unbelievable. its downright ridiculous! and yess, i loved that for that reason too, scar? what? where? lol bill, concentrates for a second, there! *points* lollll xD can't wait for more from you :)
Author's Response: I love the way Tom just lets Bill poke at his face, too. It's so trusting (n_n) especially since the twins say they hate when people touch their faces. As for more from me... I have a few plot ideas, but no idea if/when I'll write them. I'm just enjoying being done with this fic and taking a rest. But thank you, that's very nice of you to say :-)
Date: 10/25/10 12:26 am Title: Chapter 13
I loved this fanfic and sad to see that its finally over! Althought you did ended at chapter 13!!! So yay for you on that and on your random sidenote if it wasn't for you menationing that I would never have found out about Bill Kaulitz meeting with THE Alice Cooper!!!! :O So thank you for that as well. Take care with much love CG
Author's Response: OH, I'm happy you got to see the commercial!! I love it! Bill was super cute in it and Alice was so funny.
I'm glad you enjoyed the fic. Thank you for the support :-)
Date: 10/24/10 08:32 pm Title: Chapter 13
Wow this was so great! I really like to read stories like this, though I usually prefer the twins to be a little older. (I just think 16/17 year old Bill is so sexy :O haha) but yeah... this was really well written and was a pleasure to read!
Author's Response: The particular plot for this fic required them to be 13, but I was pretty conflicted about writing sex scenes due to their age. I had to remind myself that teens have sex at that age all the time, that I read plenty of fics at them at that age, etc., so I shouldn't be so uptight about writing it... Obviously, I got over it XD I'm glad you enjoyed the fic. Thanks for reading/reviewing :-)
Date: 10/24/10 07:19 pm Title: Chapter 13
yesss that commercial was the best! and his acting was quite respectable, i think :) (god he's so effing photogenic! the camera just makes love to him)
anywho, i just loved this! super super cute ending, and it's perfect just the way it is :) no sequel needed. it was so cute to see them freaking out about the CD, i can only imagine what that must have felt like :3 ooh, i missed that rock story, so thanks for letting us know! so cute~ ohhh i'd like to see the fight when tom got the scar on his cheek, too...anyway, i really really liked this. i thought you did a really good job keeping them in a proper tweenage mindset, not too mature. :)
Author's Response: He is incredibly photogenic! When people say he looks even better in person, I believe it but I'm like, "HOW IS THAT POSSIBLE!?" lol
The thing I love about the scar on Tom's cheek is when the reporter asked about it, the G's and TOM had no idea that he even had one, but Bill knew and had to show Tom where it was, lol! I guess when you spend that much time staring at someone else's face, you have it memorized XD
I'm glad you thought the mindsets were appropriate for their age; characterizations are very important to me while writing. Thank you for your support :-)
Date: 10/24/10 03:43 pm Title: Chapter 11
Older teenage kaulitz fight *Q*
Though it would end up very very pretty
...and covered in mud or some kind of sticky dessert...
Author's Response: lol, I would definitely watch that hidden camera footage XD
Date: 10/24/10 03:22 pm Title: Chapter 8
I don't blame you! I'm strictly Bill/Tom too! Imagining ANYTHING else sometimes makes me sick :( blehh
I was going to make one super-duper review once I finished the whole story, but I had to give my two cents on this issue hahaha
Author's Response: I can take it in a story if Bill or Tom are dating someone else, as long as they don't really *love* that person because the one they really love is their twin (u_u) lol. But I skip parts where they have sex with other people and it ruins the story for me if they fall in love with someone else or can't pick who they love more. I read this Bill/Tom/OFC once where the OFC was Tom's gf but Bill had a threesome with them kinda and Tom liked the girl more... I was like WTF NEVERRRRRRRR (=_=) lol
Date: 10/24/10 03:22 pm Title: Chapter 13
hahahaha i looved the pebble story!! heheh
there just to adroable! sucks this is like the final chapter D: nooooo! no..no sequel!!!!??
hhahaha bill looks sooo different! but sexy, i couldntt stop watching it over and over!
Author's Response: No plans for a sequel, sorry :-(
Bill looks REALLY different in the advert photos for that campaign!! His arms looks super hairy 6_6
Thanks for reading/reviewing :-)
Date: 10/24/10 10:10 am Title: Chapter 13
Best, most realistic story I've read in a long time on this site. This was wonderful.
Author's Response: That's very kind of you to say. I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thank you for reading/reviewing :-)
Date: 10/24/10 05:36 am Title: Chapter 13
This was such a wonderful ending! The chapter was so sweet and very naughty, and written so well. I'm so glad you started posting here and I look forward to more from you. :)
Author's Response: I'm glad that you enjoyed it. It was indeed very naughty! I worried a bit that it was *too* naughty... but then I got over it XD Thank you for the encouragement :-)
Date: 10/24/10 01:12 am Title: Chapter 13
Thanks for the great story, I look forward to reading more from you. =)
Author's Response: Thank you for all the support :-)
Date: 10/24/10 12:23 am Title: Chapter 13
Thank you for a great story, adore the ending! That commercial is classic and I can deff see Bill acting someday.
Author's Response: It was my pleasure; I'm glad the ending didn't disappoint you. I really want to see Bill in a movie within the next few years -- of course, a movie with both twins would be even better! Thanks for reading/reviewing :-)
Date: 10/24/10 12:08 am Title: Chapter 3
nein no jumbies stuck in rafters! no worries brauni will rescue him! lol I like this so far!
Author's Response: lol, everybody say "thank you, Brauni!" lol
I'm glad you like it so far. Thanks for reading/reviewing :-)
Date: 10/24/10 12:01 am Title: Chapter 12
A all time fav interview of theirs! I cannot imagine them without that incredible connection. This story is so very interesting to me...now I must catch up...
Author's Response: Me, too - I love that interview! Their connection is amazing. It makes me jealous that I don't have a soulmate twin :-( Thanks for reading/reviewing
Date: 10/23/10 11:44 pm Title: Chapter 13
Awesome story! I loved every second of it! :)
Author's Response: Glad to hear it. Thanks for reading/reviewing :-)
Date: 10/23/10 10:51 pm Title: Chapter 13
What a wonderful ending! I adored the entire fic, especially all of the little references to real life events. A perfect little twins story, we definitely need more of them on the site! *hugs self*
Author's Response: I put a lot of time/effort into trying to end it well, so I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for the support :-)
Date: 10/23/10 09:06 pm Title: Chapter 13
i adored this to every extent~
Author's Response: I'm glad to hear it. Thanks for reading/reviewing :-)