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Reviewer: 1204skateboarding Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/30/13 10:53 am Title: Chapter 17

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!

Reviewer: Tokio4life Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/07/12 07:51 am Title: Chapter 17

yeah, he better be going away for a loooong time.. can't believe that shit happened to him during whitnesprotection! :O shouldn't be possible..

 

good story, poor tomi! and i liked the second ending better, kind of gave me more closure tot eh whole thing :)

Reviewer: Tokio4life Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/07/12 06:55 am Title: Chapter 9

so, i just randomly seached for tom/samy fics and came across this one :P i'm really liking it so far, but just have a bit of a commnt to the birth part.. 

an induced birth is not the same as a caesarean, induced labours don't nesisarilly take any less time than normal (i had a natural labour and was done within 7 hours and a friend of mine had an induced labour and spent a full day with contractions..) and if tom had a caesarean, he's not going to just be walking over with the baby in his arms like that..

sorry, i know that's kind of mean and that you probably wrote this ages ago.. i just kind of had to write that..

 

oh, they also dont give you an epidural without asking you first, not everyone wants one..

Reviewer: natalla Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/06/11 11:37 pm Title: Chapter 17

I loved that cute

Reviewer: natalla Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/06/11 11:12 pm Title: Chapter 9

I mourn that beautiful T___T XDDD

Reviewer: Ewa Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/09/11 10:00 pm Title: Und rede fein, Wer ficken will, Muss freundlich sein/ And speak well, Whoever wants to fuck, Must be friendly

anal sex without any preparation and lube? Tom would be in a lot of pain! man can't just put in into another, they would harm their partner very badly X.x

Reviewer: MissAnna Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/23/10 07:42 pm Title: Chapter 17

I prefer this one because B paid for his crime and Tom didn't turn into a Loose Lucy :D

Reviewer: Nora Morales Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/23/10 07:07 pm Title: Chapter 17

This ending was really awesome!

Reviewer: cowbellmilk Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/23/10 04:56 pm Title: Chapter 17

I like both..... But I will say I like this more... Thanks

Reviewer: SapphireVampire Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/16/10 11:15 am Title: Warmes Wasser/Warm water

Ugh. Bushido. |shakes fist| You desperate sick S.O.B.! How dare you hurt Tom! -_-' You dunno how hard it was for me to read the rape scene. But I did it, and now I want to see Bushido diiiiieeee, or at least go to jail for that. The line “Little girl, I need help. Please go get your mommy.” was just...ohmygosh, breathtaking. So cute, but so helpless. I'm kinda sad that I found your story AFTER it finished, and I had seen it around but never got to read it until now :/ But I shall continue reading!! ^^v

Author's Response: thank you. This is on of my beloved stories

Reviewer: GiraffeJumper2008 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/01/10 12:38 am Title: Chapter 16

Awwww...

Reviewer: cowbellmilk Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/30/10 08:50 pm Title: Chapter 16

will he ever tell Sammy Anis raped him

Reviewer: MissAnna Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/30/10 07:09 pm Title: Chapter 16

He still didn't tell him the whole truth >.

Reviewer: kittyskull Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/24/10 08:05 pm Title: Chapter 15

Oh my gosh...Anis is such a bitch. Poor Tomi is in so much pain and Samy is clueless to what's going on. I cannot wait till the next chapter.

Reviewer: toms muso girl Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/24/10 07:52 pm Title: Chapter 15

I think Tom run's with Lulu leave a note for Samy telling him everything, or Samy get's drunk and hit's Tom.

Reviewer: cowbellmilk Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/24/10 06:40 pm Title: Chapter 15

love it and very sad at the same time ... Oh Tom should ve just told samy what is going on

Reviewer: MissAnna Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/24/10 05:55 pm Title: Chapter 15

Oh my gosh he actually said come finish I have a flight to catch >.<
Anis has no shame!!
And how in the world can Samy want to leave with Grace, technically she ain't his.

Reviewer: tomigirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/24/10 05:47 pm Title: Chapter 15

Wow, can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: gabby2102010 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/24/10 05:34 pm Title: Chapter 15

OMG please write thenext chapter soon the suspence is killin me!!

Reviewer: Sarah22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/24/10 03:03 pm Title: Warmes Wasser/Warm water

Ok I´m curious how you want to fix than!

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