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Reviewer: Mllsblls Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/13/26 01:12 pm Title: Chapter 12

Haha I loved that tom got jealous when William seductively touched Georgs waist before he snatched his weapon ;)

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Date: 02/12/26 10:56 am Title: Chapter 28

I swear that I will pay you real money to continue writing TH / Toll fics

Reviewer: Mllsblls Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/12/26 10:55 am Title: Chapter 28

DAMN this story was awesome man… you were before your time ;) You know with many thing being quite alike the now very popular movie “K pop demon slayers” although of course this is SO much better and hotter and more dark and intelligent and just magnificent ;) I love your work truly truly

Reviewer: Mllsblls Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/12/26 08:08 am Title: Chapter 23

Mmm SO hot! I bet Tom cherished this moment very intensely but I still sort of prefer William I think. Or I like parts of both Bills, it was very naughty and spot on with the twc theme about Bill feeling like they’re brothers but enjoying sex with Tom iiih hot! But I also got an insane idea ; are they sort of twins somehow? That would be very sexy as I and many always love true Twc Toll, but I guess they aren’t :)

Reviewer: Mllsblls Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/12/26 07:13 am Title: Chapter 22

And the smexy scenes just keep on coming ;) would of liked to have more details on the sex with the leather pants though but it’s okey we got a hot blow scene (a) and I’m also happily surprised because other fics I’ve read from you there has been like only 2 sex scenes but this one has lots and they’re amazing, but ofc the theme is demons and lots of sex is very fitting to this story ;) But the plot is also very diverse and rewarding in many aspects, you’re a great writer and should write more toll nowadays too darling :*

Reviewer: Mllsblls Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/12/26 06:22 am Title: Chapter 19

It’s very interesting that Tom also feels like he’s splitting his personality cause of Bills 2 sides and how he shifts his acts and moods and ways with them

Reviewer: Mllsblls Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/12/26 06:20 am Title: Chapter 19

This is sooo good, and it’s a lot of great smut in this story wow wow wow *smirk*

Reviewer: Mllsblls Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/10/26 09:50 pm Title: Chapter 16

. Tom gasped and grunted. William increased his rhythm, clenching his muscles, riding Tom’s cock like an expert. Tom’s eyes rolled into his head as he began drowning in ecstasy. His hands clawed at William’s thighs, his gut muscles contracted. He moaned deliriously.

Reviewer: Mllsblls Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/10/26 08:53 pm Title: Chapter 16

Wow that was sexy, you write smut exceptionally well.. the “eyes rolling back into his head, hands clawing at Williams thighs as his stomach tightened in delirious pleasure” or what you wrote was really hot, and that they used juiciness from the sweets as lube omg hahah *drools a bit*

Reviewer: Mllsblls Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/10/26 08:33 pm Title: Chapter 15

Damn this is getting interesting ^^ you really like to give Tom a hard time huh (pun intented) ahaha! The handcuffed blowjob was delicious ugh, the details nggghhh.. but it was really traumatizing and embarrassing that it switched to Bill when he shot his load Omg ahahahah!! But this is so so interesting ^^ I hope that William and Bill can somehow merge so there’s the good sides of both of them in the same person so to speak, or I don’t even know but I hope it has a happy ending somehow and that Tom gets to be with the one of the Bills he’s in love with in the end and that’s in love with him ^^

Reviewer: Mllsblls Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/10/26 08:17 pm Title: Chapter 14

Poor Tom but also 🫦🔥😂

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Date: 02/10/26 07:48 pm Title: Chapter 12

Dang the battle part was freaking awesome! I loved it, and I laughed out loud in bafflement at the part when Bill healed Tom by suggestively licking his back ahahahah! And the others awkward reactions x) William is so much fun, poor in love / infatuated Tomi ahaha

Reviewer: Mllsblls Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/10/26 07:12 pm Title: Chapter 10

Bloody brilliant and HOT idea for the frustration and attraction and anger being cumulated and also for Tom and Bill to end up in a situation that is already too far gone in pleasure to stop and therefor quickly begin a heated / passionate relationship quickly eheheh ;)

Reviewer: liulibai Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/29/24 11:18 pm Title: Chapter 1

I am a Chinese fan who came a bit late. Discovering this website is the happiest thing for me in recent years. Reading this story is undoubtedly a pleasure! Thank you for your storya281;
I want to say that before this, I had always used collecting as a comment. I had already gone through this story and collected it for the first two months. Now, I plan to leave a comment to express my love for your amazing William and Bill. I want to say that you are truly an amazing writer.

Author's Response: Hello again! Thank you so much! I really appreciate your comment. I知 so happy to know this story still brings joy after so many years! I知 truly happy to know you liked it!

Reviewer: Eldog333 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/12/24 10:18 am Title: Chapter 28

I could not put this down once I started it! I loved this story from start to finish. I will admit I did not expect everything to go the way it did. At first I kind of disliked ‘William’ but I found myself honestly rooting for Tom to love him over Bill in the end. The reality switch was such a clever and enjoyable ending. I really really loved this story so much. I’m rambling because I can’t even think of how to say how much I enjoyed it lol. Another thing the scene at the end where William becomes aware/ his true self cracked me up when he still didn’t care to ‘end the world. I’m not sure how I hadn’t read this one yet! I will be sure to check out your profile for other stories!

Author's Response: Wow thank you so much for your comment. I知 really happy to know the story was enjoyable. I had fun writing it and always hope people have fun reading it.🙂rn

Reviewer: Nightshaded Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/12/23 06:37 pm Title: Chapter 1

I have left a review on some other fics of yours, but wanted to say that I enjoyed this one too! Again this was SUPER original and DemonBill was highly amusing! HumanBill was kind of a pain in the ass but I can't be too hard on him, considering.... lol. I like how Tom began to really warm up to DemonBill and how genuine DemonBill was, spite being all demon-y. I'm also glad for the happy ending!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I really appreciate it. :). I dont know if the banners are still up for the stories, but they were beautifully made and depicted the characters as I imagined them when I wrote the story. Bill痴 dark androgynous look inspired me a lot hehe

Reviewer: AmyJean76 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/29/22 02:04 am Title: Chapter 1

I read this a couple weeks ago and OH BOY do I wish I could go back and read it again and feel all those emotions for the first time again! I literally stayed up all night (having to work the next day) and finished it at 8:30 am before work. I have ZERO regrets. The twists and turns and "oh god what are we gonna do?!" just mind blowing. I loveeee this world and this story. IMO the ending was absolutely perfect and I regret not reviewing every chapter individually as I was reading, but I couldn't stop myself from clicking "next." Love it!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I知 really happy to know you enjoyed it. =D

Reviewer: Angeleyes Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/03/20 05:15 am Title: Chapter 1

That was a great story. I liked it very much and I could hardly stop reading. In every free minute I had my reader in my hand because I wanted to know how things are going with Bill / William and Tom and whether love has a chance.
And I have to say that it was a great ending ... even if the world Tom knew before has gone. What comes after that is really much better. So he has something from Bill and something from William with him. Really very worth reading and I highly recommend reading it to everyone.

Author's Response: Thank you! . I知 really happy to know you enjoyed it. It reminds me of the good times while writing it. Thanks again for letting me know what you thought of the story 😀

Reviewer: Tshirtsquad1990 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/02/17 03:04 am Title: Chapter 28

Amazing! could not stop reading, this is by far one of my faves on this site.

Author's Response: Thank you!! It makes me really happy to know that you enjoy this story. :D

Reviewer: Invaded79 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/20/17 10:13 am Title: Chapter 28

OMG,I am lost in words for that!!! I AM IN TOTAL BLISS

Author's Response: hehe Thank you!!! I'm so glad you enjoyed it! :D

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