Date: 09/25/10 03:53 am Title: Chapter 4
Well even though Bill didn't believe the video he sure is cooperative now.
Hmmm... the huge intake of carbs... could that be what's so alluring about him seeing from the other demons' pov? He gives them a sweet tooth? :)
Tom is really struggling to figure this out, and especially make Bill see. I'm very curious what Bill has discovered from his studies. *Maria
Author's Response: Well, it is a scientific fact that blood sugar levels impact your mood, like becoming less depressed. They put this a lot on television lol. (Insert the cliched girl eating ice-cream or chocolate after being dumped). Anyway, rl Bill does love sweet stuff and candy and I love that about him and the Bill in this story is extra sensitive to sweets. rnYou'll see why the demons are attracted to Bill in later chapters :D
Date: 09/25/10 01:39 am Title: Chapter 4
& I want those answers asap! =) Great chapter, can't wait for more =)
Author's Response: Thank you!! :) I'm posting on friday.
Date: 09/24/10 11:30 pm Title: Chapter 4
If he looks like an angel.... is he? Hm...
Author's Response: Dun dun dun...can't tell. XD
Date: 09/24/10 11:11 pm Title: Chapter 4
Humm... Still wondering :) Tom is more interested then he admits and I think this will turn out much differently then either one think. I'm still unsure of what Bill is but I might have an idea..
Author's Response: You're very perceptive! I'm giving lots of hints so maybe some of you already guessed :)
Date: 09/24/10 10:19 pm Title: Chapter 4
*waits for Tom's answers*
Author's Response: :) Next chapter is just the beginning of all answers.
Date: 09/18/10 02:40 am Title: Chapter 3
Merp! Bill!
Author's Response: XD hee
Date: 09/18/10 01:27 am Title: Chapter 3
The visuals are incredible :) I'm a fan *g* It's still fascinating what Bill is in comparison to the others. He's summoned but has no control of this and can't remember. I think he's summoned by the other demons because he obviously has something they want. Is he a vessel? A queen 'bee' like with insects... lol. He's androgynous so maybe he could be either sex? Love this mystery :D *Maria
Author's Response: XD Thank you! I try to write scenes like watching them lol. You are getting warm with your theories =D Hmm queen bee, that's a good plut bunny there. XD
Date: 09/17/10 11:45 pm Title: Chapter 3
I'd love to see this story as a movie. It's that interesting. Poor Bill doesn't even know what's happening to him. Can hardly wait til ur next post!
Author's Response: Thanks for the nice review!! Up until chapter five things will get more interesting XD
Date: 09/17/10 11:39 pm Title: Chapter 3
Aww poor Bill. He must be half. I'm confused as the what Bill is but I like him. Poor thing though. I think Tom has his work cut out for him and I think there is way way more to this than he thinks. I have not intuition on this yet. I'm just as in the dark as Tom.
It's good to read from you again. I missed it. Love this story so far as well.
Author's Response: Hi! Thank you. I'm glad you like my stories. I try to make them entertaining, like watching a show or something lol. I'm trying to keep it as mysterious as possible but I'm giving lots of hints but perhaps later you'll understand :D
Date: 09/17/10 09:58 pm Title: Chapter 3
Humm...this is shaping up nicely, methinks. :)
Author's Response: Thanks. I hope you like what's coming. :D
Date: 09/17/10 09:58 pm Title: Chapter 3
Lol, I don't count this as confusion wherein I'd stop reading. More like mystery.
Confusion, for me, is when I cannot tell who's talking or what the heck is going on XD
Great!
Author's Response: Oh good! Anyway, things will come clearer in a couple of chapters. Thanks for reading and for the review! :D
Date: 09/12/10 03:00 pm Title: Chapter 2
holy mother of god. this is amazing. i love you and your bad ass story. please continue this hot mess soon!
Author's Response: lol thank you! I do love your review XD I'll be posting soon yes :)
Date: 09/11/10 08:20 pm Title: Chapter 2
Humm interestng. So what is Bill really?
Author's Response: Hi :) Well in this story you won't have to wait too long for explanations, they'll start around chapter five, but I'll try to still keep things mysterious up until the end :)
Date: 09/11/10 04:11 pm Title: Chapter 2
Damn, this is so good =) I'm so curious about what's up with 'the demon'. Plz, more soon?
Author's Response: Thanks! I have lots of chapters already finished, but I don't want to post them too soon because there are some that are still not finished and I don't want to catch up before they're done and make readers wait too long for an update. :D
Date: 09/11/10 03:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
Holy crap this is good! I love it!
Date: 09/11/10 01:36 pm Title: Chapter 2
Oooh, poor Tom, that's gotta hurt
Author's Response: lol that's nothing! As usual Imma make him suffer hehe XD
Date: 09/11/10 08:45 am Title: Chapter 2
Suspenseful and really really exciting. I love all the mysteries you weave. I love there is so many questions to be asked about Bill and that Tom constantly has to change his perception of what he is and what story lies behind. Why there is a charade built up around Bill and why he must come across as humanly as possible. The good grades et all.
Love the weird sexual tension around Bill and why random demons get violently attracted to him. Somehow he must be above them in a way and has something other demons want. Bill cries so it's not a virtue he wants to part with willingly - or maybe he does. Maybe it's just a hunting skill and that's all they want from him. Rip him apart and that's the end.
Can't wait to read what happens next :) Terrific job. *Maria
Author's Response: Thank you! You're good with your interpretations. Maybe you'll figure out what's going on quickly :D
Date: 09/11/10 04:10 am Title: Chapter 2
Lol, I would never, ever guess that english is not your first language. You speak better than some natives.
Author's Response: Thanks. I did learn in a bilingual school since primary and I like to read and watch movies in english, but I still get stuck so much when I try to explain my thoughts. I rely a lot in the wordreference forums to know how certain phrases or slangs are said in english XD
Date: 09/11/10 01:03 am Title: Chapter 2
oooh, oooh! *waits for more*
Author's Response: =D hope you don't make you wait too long.