Date: 10/16/10 01:28 am Title: Chapter 7
Whoa!
Author's Response: XD
Date: 10/15/10 10:28 pm Title: Chapter 7
Wow this is so interesting. More soon plz?
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you think so. I want the story to also have some background substance so I find that I have to write explanatory chapters now and then hehe. I hope it gets more interesting as it goes on. :D
Date: 10/15/10 09:07 pm Title: Chapter 7
Badass demon!!! XD
Author's Response: Yeah, but just wait! There's more LOL XD
Date: 10/09/10 02:26 am Title: Chapter 6
Oooh, I love this Bill. He's erotically dangerous and he knows it ;) It's strange how he even bothers to become the demon is he doesn't like it, but perhaps he lures the underdogs/demons out so he can destroy them. But I still have to remember that he lets them feed from him, so... *g* maybe, he creates these demons when he feeds them. I'm not sure why he would produce more demons when he gladly kills them violently, too. Hm... I may sound like I have a clue but I'm just guessing *s* I do love his statement to Tom, that the poor hunter is in love with Bill - he sure is unwilling to kill him - and the demon knows it. He's safe in his case because he knows Tom will not be able to kill him... but will he when Bill is human and not able to do his demon stuff? Lucky Bill, because that's the time when Tom is least interested in killing him (now, at least) Exciting all of it :D Oh., and one last thing, if Bill is a Higher Demon, how come he accepts his 'parents'... anyway good update *Maria
Author's Response: Hi!! In next chapter I'll explain what's going on with the host and a little bit about why he draws the others, but I'm not saying everything. XD I like how you really catch on specially about Tom! Like you're reading between lines and I'm glad I am getting the message across. :)
Date: 10/09/10 01:39 am Title: Chapter 6
(reply) I know! You can say "crazy braggart". That indicates both egotistic and talkative.
Author's Response: Ok!! Gonna change it :D Thanks!
Date: 10/08/10 11:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
Boy demon bill sure is a feisty something isn't he? Sounds like to me the whole time they were talking demon bill has been fucking him with his eyes already!LOL
Author's Response: Heheh! Tom feels like the Demon can read him if he looks into his eyes. And yeah, he's not called Demon for nothing. XD
Date: 10/08/10 11:26 pm Title: Chapter 6
WOOO! Im so excited. *bounces*
Author's Response: :D Yay!
Date: 10/08/10 10:18 pm Title: Chapter 6
Hehe, the only thing I would change is Tom calling the demon a "windbag". Only really old people use that insult. I'm sorry, at the moment I can't think of a more modern insult with the same meaning... Maybe 'egomaniac' or 'narcissist'. Lol! Or maybe simpler and more ambiguous ones like 'bastard' and 'jerk'.
Anyway, again fascinating to the core :)
Author's Response: Ahh, thanks for the tip. I wanted something that says he talks a lot and is smug at the same time. Blabbermouth and chatterbox just didn't sound good lol. Any other ideas?? :D
Date: 10/08/10 10:06 pm Title: Chapter 6
Hello there :) A demon who likes to sleep... Interesting. So it's aware of what he's doing but what is that exactly? I'm confused but still have a theory. I can't wait to reas more. A few more answers would be great.
Author's Response: Hi!! :D I think you'll have all those answers in chapter 6.
Date: 10/08/10 09:51 pm Title: Chapter 6
Awesome. Tom's finally getting answers. I'm even more curious now about how the relationship will play out between the "3" of them. I love it! Thanx for the update & can hardly wait til ur next post.
Author's Response: More answers in next chapter. But I won't say everything, some stuff I'll leave for much later. :D I'm having lots of fun writing 2 charaters in one for Bill :D
Date: 10/08/10 09:42 pm Title: Chapter 6
Gah! Why?!?!? This is just getting me even more confused... perhaps now I know how Tom feels -_-'
Author's Response: This is nothing lol! But I'll try and not confuse you so much when the personalities change.
Date: 10/05/10 12:46 am Title: Chapter 5
Now the mystery has been solved!! So Bill is really a demon with a human personality... interesting... keep posting!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks. Late response lol I already posted next part :D
Date: 10/02/10 12:49 pm Title: Chapter 5
*g* You like to blow peoples minds, don't you? ;) It's an awesome idea with the alternate personality. So Bill is a vessel in himself for a human. To get a breather and be able to function in a human world. It totally makes sense. But it's still deeply fascinating all the sweet stuff he craves, and what he is to the other demons.Obviously they liek the candy he gives them when he's back to being a demon and when Bill snaps out of his human 'visit' he realises he's in danger. When he returns to his alternate personality he has no clue what he did ... Can't wait for more :) *Maria
Author's Response: lol you noticed? hehe I love the reader's reactions and that I can keep the shock factor. But gosh girl, you're gonna spoil all the fun for me! haha. I'm glad you're liking it and more that you tell me. There are more secrets to be told but I hope you never guess until the end :P. I suppose I can say a little about the sweet stuff. The way sugar works on Bill, it's kinda like the effect of those happiness enhancing drugs, so they really boost his mood. Luckily, Tom found out about this quick enough. :D
Date: 10/02/10 01:51 am Title: Chapter 5
Oh no Tom! Poor Bill. That is the craziest thing I have ever heard. So Bill is a demon then. :( It's kinda funny though. A demon possesed by a human. Still... what's with his parents though? There is so much more to this story than I thought! YAY!!!
Author's Response: Hi!!! There's a reason for everything, but don't worry I'll explain it as the story goes on. :D
Date: 10/01/10 11:40 pm Title: Chapter 5
OMFBK!!!!
Author's Response: Hmmm is that Oh my..f***ing....Bill Kaulitz? lol I've no idea haha
Date: 10/01/10 11:11 pm Title: Chapter 5
AWWW! *feels sorry for split!demon!Bill*
Author's Response: I know!! :D Poor Bill!
Date: 10/01/10 10:55 pm Title: Chapter 5
O.O ..Omg
(lol, that's all I can say right now)
Author's Response: I'm guessing by the reactions that nobody guessed lol XD
Date: 10/01/10 10:27 pm Title: Chapter 5
Whoa
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whoa.
Author's Response: XD Didn't expect it?
Date: 10/01/10 10:23 pm Title: Chapter 5
Holy crap! This is nuts! But in a good way =) I love it!
Author's Response: Thank you! :D Could become even more nuts lol
Date: 09/27/10 04:14 am Title: Chapter 4
Wow good story!!! Post more soon!
Author's Response: Thank you! I will :)