Date: 10/30/10 12:05 am Title: Chapter 9
His ice cream ball tilted and splattered on the sidewalk.
Noo! His ice cream!
Eepies, the old man knew.
I shall think of what Bill could have bought. (And how'd he get the money?)
Author's Response: Hehe well I think of it as a deleted scene cause it's not necessary. I guess there are some things that can be easily assumed, like taking some money when you're going out just in case, but here's how it went: Bill announced to his fake parents that he was going out, and obvioulsy they didn't say no cause they don't want to upset him. They learned they should give Bill a weekly allowance (and they get it from the money they steal from their human kills) but since they have no clue how much money exactly human parents give their kids, they give him more than enough. How's that? lol.
Date: 10/30/10 12:03 am Title: Chapter 9
Lord! What was in the bag?!
Author's Response: lol I can't tell. Just wait for next chapter XD
Date: 10/29/10 10:20 pm Title: Chapter 9
WHAT DID HE GET!?!?!?!?
Author's Response: What indeed lol XD
Date: 10/29/10 09:47 pm Title: Chapter 9
I bet they're handcuffs xDD
Author's Response: Really? Why handcuffs? XD
Date: 10/29/10 09:44 pm Title: Chapter 8
Gah hahahahahahaha Sorry but for some reason I find this funny! Demon!Bill teasing Tom.
Date: 10/29/10 08:53 pm Title: Chapter 9
Great chapter! Now i'm curious about what's in Bill's bag xD
Author's Response: Thanks! You'll find out next friday hehe XD
Date: 10/27/10 10:30 am Title: Chapter 8
Lmao I think I actually like the demon, not gonna lie xD
More soon? *_*
Author's Response: :D Too soon to make a judgment. Wait till you see what he does lol I'm posting next chapter on friday.
Date: 10/27/10 09:24 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh my GOD, this is going to be an awesome story *__*
Author's Response: Hi!! XD Thanks! Hope you enjoy it.
Date: 10/25/10 03:34 am Title: Chapter 8
wow, this story is so weird!!!!!! i love it so much, i love all the darkness and demons and everything. keep up the perfect work, this story is amazing.
Author's Response: Thank you! XD I keep in mind the readers as I write cause I want to keep them interested and entertained heh :)
Date: 10/24/10 09:21 pm Title: Chapter 8
this story is turning into one of my favorite by far! i love it! i get thrilled when i see you have updated! good demon, bad demon! i dont care! i'd do 'em both! haha! i love this!! wonderful update!
Author's Response: ^__^ thanks so much for your nice review! I'm really glad you like it and hope you like what's coming too :D
Date: 10/24/10 11:51 am Title: Chapter 8
Oh, dear.....
Author's Response: XD
Date: 10/24/10 03:00 am Title: Chapter 8
Wow. More delicious conflict!
I would change one word, though: He pulled Tom from his uniform and struck him.
I'd change 'from' to 'by'. Otherwise it sounds like the demon pulled Tom *out* of his uniform XD
And "son of a bitch" indeed. Grr
Author's Response: XD lol k fixing. More demon mischief coming up lol.
Date: 10/24/10 01:05 am Title: Chapter 8
love it :D
Author's Response: Thanks! :D
Date: 10/23/10 07:00 pm Title: Chapter 8
I started reading this today and I am already. I love how it's very original, very interesting, not to mention very well-written. I can't even fathom how the story is going to unravel, there is so much mystery, so many loose ends and so many possibilities. Why was demon Bill able to cross over and able to fashion human Bill? I think this is the key to the story. I don't think Demom Bill is completely evil. I think that he simply enjoys pulling pranks on people; I love how he played Bill and Tom in this chapter. I keep wondering about the fate of the two Bills, but I remember a warning about demon story endings. I have no clue what that means but I can't wait to see how you spin this. Update soon, please?
Author's Response: Thank you for the nice review! I'm glad you gave this story a shot and that you liked it :D And bravo at pointing out the crossing over :) I have already thought of the ending, and I hope everyone likes it. :D
Date: 10/23/10 05:53 pm Title: Chapter 8
Gah! I fuckin' love this xD Fantastic chapter. I can hardly wait for more =)
Author's Response: Thank you!! XD
Date: 10/23/10 04:43 pm Title: Chapter 8
He's not making it easy on Bill to stay oblivious, is he!!!? It was terrific how he played both Tom and Bill, too, switching the way he did, manipulating like the bastard higher demon he is.
It was interesting the way the Demon sat watching what he had orchestrated. He obviously enjoyed watching Tom, and wrestling with him afterwards must have given him a major kick. Only when Tom had him against the wall, he did his demon thing and brought Bill forth. He's a real master at making Bill a 'real' person. In my opinion Bill is a real person, like a twin locked inside that the demon only let out occasionally. I wonder when Bill will take over completely, because he may be able to control the Demon at some point because it's a much nicer place to stay in and not the other way around. It'll mean Bill will have to be aware of his ability but he can make some positive use of it instead of what the bad bad Demon does.
Lots of wishful thinking from my part :D I love the protective strike Tom has going here. He's attracted... oh, yes he is *g*
As always a very nice update *Maria
Author's Response: Glad you liked this chapter. Again your insight is getting ahead!! XD. And yeah, the demon only wants to have fun! :D
Date: 10/21/10 02:36 pm Title: Chapter 7
I adore the Demon here. He's really cocky, and patient as he explains what he knows and what he wants to to hear. He's also protective of Bill because he needs his other persona more than he needs Tom (he doesn't need Tom) and more than he needs to be himself. It's fascinating how he doesn't want Bill to know or else he cannot keep the persona sane, and he needs a sane Bill not to get insane from being the Demon I suppose. Tom is falling for Bill, but the Demon is fascinating, too. Tom must tread careful not to reveal too much for Bill ho is not to know. And Bill doesn't have to know. It's quite enough that the Demon does. Then there's the thing about Tom having to kill him... Obviously he cannot kill the Demon. It's an impossible task because he's doomed to fail his assignment. I have tons of these questions :) so I look forward to what happens next. I fear for Tom's heart, because he's the only one who can get really hurt now. Great chapter. The Demon is alluring, sexy, and deliciously dangerous *winks* Maria
Author's Response: Hi! I love your reviews!! I'm so shocked how you KNOW the characters so well XD Makes me happy how you can tell what I want to express even if I'm a little vague about it. But you make the actions and dialogue speak for themselves. You're really good! :D I hope you like how I handle poor Tom dealing with that Demon lol
Date: 10/18/10 11:03 pm Title: Chapter 7
I"m sorry that I didn't get to review before but we didn't have internet for a few days. So the demon developed a split personality because he was pulled into this world against his will... hummm interesting. The demon wants to die but it hurts Bill, so if Tom likes Bill how will he save Bill and get the demon back to his plane or keep him asleep so that Bill can live out his life? I really like this idea and I can't wait to find out how all of this will work out and what TOm will do.
Author's Response: Hi! I'm glad you have your internet back! When my internet is out I go nuts D: Tom will in fact search for a way to do that :) There's only one thing that can be done, but it's not up to Tom hehe. I can't tell much about it or I'll spoil it, but I hope I get to surprise you by the end XD
Date: 10/17/10 08:25 pm Title: Chapter 7
Fascinating :D
I wish I could give you an in-depth analysis of the characters at this point, but I'm not smart enough XD So 'fascinating' it is.
Author's Response: I like that word, actually XD I really like to know what you think if you analyze the characters. I'm really surprised how readers can perceive stuff about my characters before I write them down. :D Thanks for reviewing.
Date: 10/16/10 08:10 am Title: Chapter 7
OHHHHH!
Author's Response: ;D Finally makes some sense? lol. There are more secrets to be told still.