Date: 07/19/14 04:27 am Title: Chapter 28
Ahhhhhhh I love love love this story!! Best story ever!! XD
Author's Response: :D Thank you!!! Glad you liked it.
Date: 07/09/14 12:16 am Title: Chapter 28
Finally after 2 years, I decided to read this story xD, mostly because I started to read FOE and liked sooooo much that I told myself to read your other stories. I was not disapointed at all ;), I read this in one shot...well two because I had to sleep >.< but seriously I could not stop reading!
To be honest I liked william more than Bill from the very beginning haha
I also liked the fact that the ending didn't involve a big "oh The world is saved and let's go back to our current life" but instead a new world in which, I guess, weren't any leeches hunt? It is such a great and unexpected ending, I just love it :D
Oh and I let out a tear, in the scene where Bill supposly returns to his world, just a single tear...*looks guilty*
This story did not feel like a 80 000 something words story, everything went so fast while I was reading, it's definitely one of my favorite of all time, damn you converted me sci-fi stuff xD I use to hate it!
Now if you will excuse me, I see that you have other stories that I haven't read out there :D
Author's Response: lol thank you!! I'm so glad you decided to read this story and the other ones. Hope you enjoy them too. Wow, it's been years since my first story here haha. :D
Date: 06/16/14 01:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
AMAZING!!!!!
Author's Response: :D Thank you!
Date: 02/09/14 12:33 am Title: Chapter 28
I LOVED this story the first time I read it, so I'm thrilled it was featured, should have been a long time ago! It's on my list to re-read. I actually think about this story often, so I'm looking forward to another round. And I saw that you mentioned working on another story - I cannot even tell you how much I'm looking forward to it! well-written slash is so hard to find, and it seems a lot of the slash/twincest writers have sort of abandoned this site. Hope to see more from you soon!
Author's Response: Hi! Thank you!! I'm really happy to see it featured too! It's been so long ago since I wrote it that I decided to read it again, and it felt was like it was written by someone else because I had forgotten so many things I wrote! So I had fun haha. I'm almost done with my new story. It's been a while since I wrote it, but I promised myself I'd finish it first before I started posting. :)
Date: 01/31/14 10:33 am Title: Chapter 1
I REALLY LOVE IT!! I just can't stop reading.. finished it in one day! I hope you'll make a sequel ^_^ hahahaha.
Author's Response: Thanks!!! Oh, I don't think I'm good at sequels lol! But I'll be posting a new story (hope I don't take too long) and I hope it's as entertaining as this one. :)
Date: 01/30/14 11:46 pm Title: Chapter 28
This story was beautiful. I enjoyed it immensely. Thank you so much for writing it. It was breathtakingly amazing. The world you created, the characters you made, the plot, it was all wonderful.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm really happy that you enjoyed it :)
Date: 01/28/14 08:16 pm Title: Chapter 1
aw cool! I haven't read a new TH fic in years. I'll check it out :)
Author's Response: lol I know! It's been so long since I started writing this one, and so much has happened, but as long as you have fun while reading it :D
Date: 01/28/14 01:48 am Title: Chapter 1
yayyy :D I nominated you :D :D because you're one of my favorite authors in this fandom and I love your fics! Congratulations!!
Author's Response: I had a feeling you did! Thanks so much!! I'm writing a new story, btw. I'm still at the last chapters. I'll start posting once I finish and hope you enjoy :D
Date: 01/27/14 12:13 pm Title: Chapter 28
Congrats on being featured! I love this story! It is amazing.
Author's Response: Thanks! :D I'm still grinning since yesterday when I found out. lol
Date: 05/15/13 04:30 pm Title: Chapter 1
Excuse me asking about it in this story (which is definitely one of my favourites, Demon reminds me a bit The Chronicles of Narnia and I love it), but are you planning to write something new for THF? This site is lacking of good slash stories recently...
Author's Response: Hi!! Yes, I'm in the writing process of another story which is being betaed at the same time. It's going a bit slow cause I've been real lazy among other distractions lol. It's halfway written but I'm trying to finish it before I start posting chapters so that I can update frequently :D Glado you liked Demon. Hope you like the new one too. ^__^
Date: 04/10/13 02:23 am Title: Chapter 28
What an amazing story! Loved it!
The plot is very intricate and unfolds so nicely.
I love the alternative universe that you created and the eventual transition to our univerise.
I love Tom, William and Bill! Gustav and George are also cool.
Brilliant story!
Author's Response: Thank you!! ^__^ I'm very glad that you liked and enjoyed reading :D Thanks for telling me.
Date: 05/31/12 01:41 am Title: Chapter 28
(reply) Sure, I'd really like to beta for you :) I'm almost unparalleled when it comes to grammar and spelling, which people sometimes find annoying XD
Author's Response: Thanks!! Yeah that's exactly why I'm asking you. I remember you correcting my grammar on my stories. You noticed things that not everyone notices and I really appreaciate that. Of course, it's better if you find out the error and correct it before you post, cause sometimes bad grammar can spoil the scene for me, you know? Like a turn off lol! And I really need to be corrected, my English grammar is not that good, I admit. I think in Spanish sometimes and it just doesn't translate very well in English so I worry that sometimes readers don't get what I wanted to say. I need the beta to tell me what would sound better or more appropiate, I don't mind if I have to change a whole sentence or paragraph. Don't be scared to tell me, I promise I won't bite.:D Anyway, I hope I don't make you wait too long. I want to finish this story before I start posting, so I don't make readers wait for months lol. :D
Date: 05/30/12 04:24 pm Title: Chapter 28
My God... I just reread this for old time's sake and (*sniffle*) it is just so amazing! :'D
Truly, I would love to have this and Nexus bound in physical copies. That would be awesome :)
Are you making progress on your future writing?
Author's Response: Hi! :D thank you! Whenever I get emails about reviews to my fics it makes me happy. My next story is going slowly, but because I find myself hardly in the mood to write. It seems everything now ruins my inspiration. :/ I'm spending more time reading books. But I won't stop writing. Thanks for asking though cause it really helps to put me in the mood lol. I'll try and hurry up. Maybe when I'm done you'd like to beta my story? :)
Date: 05/19/12 10:49 am Title: Chapter 28
Comprendo :D Well, I sort of suggest Bill being uninteresting because he’s fake alter ego, but what it has to do with inability to love? Those who can’t love are always dull? :) The wicked darkside, a.k.a. William outweights a bit – he is just insensitive... but interesting. I’d be content with him if I was Tom:)
Being soul-mates is truly romantic thing, yeah. So, if your Bill had multiple personality, Tom would love them all? Joking))
Author's Response: Yeah, those who don't love are empty shells :P Without the wicked side, personalities can be dull and boring. Heheh. Anyway, the feeble, annoying Bill in this fic didn't get much love from readers lol, but William saves the day, I think. Hmm...if Bill had multiple personality, I think Tom would specially love the one who's a girl hah! My character Tom loves my character Bill despite anything, I guess. But I think he also does in rl, idk but I figure the rl Bill can be pretty annoying...so yeah Tom loves everything about Bill. :)
Date: 05/17/12 08:27 am Title: Chapter 28
Got me 1,5 days to read whole story. Not a record, but pretty fast anyway)) Fascinating, exciting, interesting, great and other suitable adjectives)) Usually “demon-demon hunter” stories contain lots of blood, violence, tortures etc described in detail. Glad that ‘Demon’ doesn’t, coz I hate this dark stuff))
Guess, I’m not Sherlock since all this mystery around Bill’s personality left me absolutely clueless and was very surprised when it was revealed. The end… awesome! Love ‘travelling to alternate universe’ thing (as much as time travel) so special thanks for that)) Never expect heroes to end up in our world (ooops, spoilers, sorry).
Still (probably, author will kick me for that:)) I don’t understand Tom’s great affection and even love for Bill. For me he seems rather uncharismatic, plain and inexpressive character with dim personality (yeah, definitely kick). Um, may be, it was a bit rude… just IMHO.
Thank you, author, for VERY good time.
Author's Response: Hi, lol glad you like it. And you are right in your analysis. Bill is supposed to be like that because of his innability to love, since he's not really human. I think that would be the blah personality if he didn't have the wicked darkside, a.k.a. William. But both personalities together are what makes him unique. The kind, dependant side, and the mischevious, dominant side. Tom loves Bill because he feels attached to him since he is his soul-mate. No matter which world, Tom will always be attracted to Bill, get it? lol :)
Date: 04/27/12 01:02 am Title: Chapter 28
Oh My Goodness... I loved this story it was written so well! I love the whole concept and I was like mentally cursing my computer when Tom was shot xD I'm crazy I know, but wonderful story! I just wish William would have popped up in the end, but it is good Bill and Tom are together. As brothers, I understand why Bill says he loves Tom like a brother in the story ;D very good little clue! Great Story!
Author's Response: :D thanks. I'm glad you enjoyed the story. It was easy to write William because I see him as part of Bill's personality. The real Bill has a little of the demon inside of him :D
Date: 11/09/11 11:34 am Title: Chapter 1
Well, we're just a little mutual appreciation society, aren't we? XD I rec your fics out all the time. You're just so creative and I'm thrilled to hear you have something else in the works. I'll wait patiently (-_-) lol
Author's Response: lol thank you! Yeah I also noticed we have certain things in common, heheh. I've penned down the plotline to the story, but it's all a damn mess. Some cue words for scenes I wrote so long ago that when I read them I don't remember what I meant! lol I wish I had a better discipline to write. u__u But I'll get there. Eventually lol.
Date: 11/08/11 10:22 pm Title: Chapter 28
What a fabulous ending! I loved this fic!! This was so fun, action-packed, sexy, clever and original! A new fic from you is always a delight! Looking forward to what you do next! Thanks for posting
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I really appreciate all your nice comments. I'm kinda proud that you like my stories cuz I think you're one of the best authors here. :D I have something else in the works but I don't know when it'll see the light of day cuz there are just too many distractions -__-
Date: 11/03/11 06:05 pm Title: Chapter 28
This was..... It was excellent. Wonderful. Very fun to read. Interesting and well-told. I won't even go into details, because it would be the longest review in history. I loved it and thank you so much for taking the time to do it right, and to finish. I hope you are writing more stories (lots and lots more!)
Author's Response: Hi! Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it :) I am writing something else at the moment but I want to finish it before I post so yeah, again, I might take some time :P Thanks again for the review!
Date: 10/12/11 07:57 pm Title: Chapter 28
*Stands up and clap* Bravo! Bravo! but one question... what happened to 'William'?
Author's Response: Thank you! William is the sexy, flirty, evil part of Bill's personality. He made it possible for both personalities to merge. :)