Date: 11/06/10 10:26 am Title: Chapter 10
Oh, he's truly evil. Is he interested in sex with Tom for Tom's sake? Does he have sex at all when he can't feel anything emotionally as well as physically? His lewd behaviour might just be a show just for Tom; a trick to pull out when he benefits from it. So it must be for Tom's sake... oh, wow, were those feelings Mr Demon? *g* It's pure panic now if Demon decides to turn on Bill and drop him into the middle of having sex. Of course, then Demon would be able to feel it, but would he really put Bill through the emotionally distress of being raped?
Tom is practically whining when he cannot kiss Demon so is Tom intoxicated by the sweets Bill consumes, too?
Hmm.... This is truly exciting my dear :) and I love how you take us to this seriously hot part of the relationship those tow despuet all have. There was no way Tom could stop himself when the Demon allowed him to have him/heavuily goaded but that’s all it took. Tom was turned on anyway and given the final push he couldn’t resist even if a gun was put to his neck. It was glorious until the demon added to the ‘game’. I can’t wait! I MUST BUT IT’S HARD!
Author's Response: Again, I'm impressed. You don't miss a thing!! Makes me so happy!! Thank you! Hopefully all answers to every observation you make will be revealed later on. :D
Date: 11/06/10 08:47 am Title: Chapter 10
Oh no! Looking forward to next update!!
Author's Response: :D thanks
Date: 11/06/10 08:46 am Title: Chapter 10
OH MY GOD!!!!! OH MY GOD, OH MY GOD!!!!!
oh the next chapter's gonna be awesome!!! what the hell is going on here?????? i love it, but gosh, THE CLIFFIES!!!!!!!! OH MY GOD!!!! *passes out from excitement and anticipation over this incredibly good story*
Author's Response: Was this cliffie evil or what? lol I'm so glad everyone is waiting to see what happens, but of course I knew when I was writing this chapter lol. Thanks so much! I'm glad you're enjoying it! :D
Date: 11/06/10 01:49 am Title: Chapter 10
:O Oh no! This is a TSOA. I call it.
Author's Response: :D TSOA??? What is it? your nick? XD lol excuse my ignorance
Date: 11/06/10 01:12 am Title: Chapter 10
omg!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: XD
Date: 11/05/10 11:53 pm Title: Chapter 10
oh shit............ oh, oh oh oh oh oh shiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiit.......... demons are bad things to mess with tomi, haven't we learned our lesson yet???????
Author's Response: Yeah!! Like my beta reader said: he totally walked right into that little trick at the end.rnHe should've known. Tsk XD
Date: 11/05/10 11:19 pm Title: Chapter 10
O NO! I don't know if I can read the next chapter (but of course I will). Bill will freak out if the demon brings him out. Omgosh! I'm scared. Lmao!
Author's Response: Heheh!! I'm being evil to both Tom and Bill, but I'm not that evil..I think lol XD
Date: 11/05/10 11:11 pm Title: Chapter 10
CALLED IT!
And on that note...I TOTALLY expected the demon to do that xD Jackass. On the other hand...better than being feed off of? >.>
Author's Response: Dang, girl! lol you're spoling my fun! XD
Date: 11/05/10 10:16 pm Title: Chapter 10
William did that on purpose. He's so evil.
Author's Response: He is!! So much fun to write XD
Date: 11/05/10 10:09 pm Title: Chapter 10
Oh my god... O.O
I expect screaming. Please don't do a time skip?
Author's Response: Hehe no, no time skip XD I wouldn't do that! (I actually had to google that cause I had no idea what that was lol)
Date: 11/05/10 09:58 pm Title: Chapter 10
the fuck...! why?? why?? why did you leave it there!? damnit!!! arggggg
poor bill, he's gonna get a very big surprise (besides Tom's cock of course xD)
Author's Response: lol sorry!! I had to leave it there cause if not, then where's the fun for me? XD
Date: 11/02/10 02:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
i know what you mean. reading them is torture, but writing them is the best!! XD
Date: 11/01/10 04:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
oh, god....all these cliffies.....i'll keep reading though, this story is amazing!!
Author's Response: Thank you! XD Cliffies are fun, as long as I'm writing them lol
Date: 11/01/10 03:55 pm Title: Chapter 9
oh, boy..... NO, TWINNY, BAD THOUGHS ARE NO ALLOWED!!!!!!! or are they.... XD great job, more soon, bitte!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: My user name is blame my dirty mind lol of course I have naughty, dirty thoughts, all the time XD Hey, my rl sis calls me twinnie. Are you my twin sis?? :D lol
Date: 10/31/10 11:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
Because if they're handcuffs, Bill can stop himself from leaving at night by shackling himself to the bed. Oh, and you can get them in a sex shop xD
Author's Response: Heheh!! We'll see if you're right about that in next chapter :D
Date: 10/31/10 01:17 pm Title: Chapter 9
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sex shop?...omg...i foresee greatness!
Author's Response: hehe I hope I can oblige to expectations :D
Date: 10/30/10 04:46 pm Title: Chapter 9
Feels Tom's flush, too *g* It's too exciting what Bill bought if it can make Tom flush.
I like this couple so much. Both when Bill is a demon and when he's just Bill because you get two very attractive guys who both can drive Tom crazy *g* Secretly, they're working together to make Tom their plaything to torment and string along and...
*cough* You know... the Demon is very sexual in the way he handles himself. Assuming Demons have a sex life... somehow, I'm very curious how Bill handles this part of his humanity. Does he fall love and with what gender? Is he capable of understanding the chemistry that works for humans to fall in love and feel lust?
I hope that general person has no clue what to do with immortal demons because it's a given that the Demon can't be killed... unless you cut off its head. *shudders* No don't let him get any ideas lol!
Loved the update - as usual! *Maria
Author's Response: I like to make poor Tom suffer in all my stories. I don't know, he kinda asks for it, and it's real fun XD Oh, and he's the Demon plaything alright! You'll see what I mean XD. Very interesting observations you make. I'd explain, but I think you'll find out more about those questions in next chapter. And as usual there will be more things explained as the story goes on :D
Date: 10/30/10 04:16 pm Title: Chapter 9
oh gosh, what's in the bag???????? i can't believe you left us hanging like that!!!!!!! WHAT IS IN THE BAG?????? x_x
Author's Response: oh gosh, if you think this cliffie was bad you're gonna kill me for next chapter lol
Date: 10/30/10 01:55 am Title: Chapter 9
I'm officially hooked on this story
Author's Response: =D yay, makes me so glad to know. Thank you.
Date: 10/30/10 12:46 am Title: Chapter 9
what's in Bill bag? :D
Author's Response: XD dun dun dun...