Date: 11/22/10 02:10 am Title: Chapter 12
Wifey! another amazing update!! I love your fight scenes! I can picture them clearly in my head! You write them very well! Do you base you fight scenes off books/movies or does it just come to you?? Anyways- you're awesome! And its 1 am my time! so I need to go to bed! But i saw you updated AND i had to read! yay! *billa claps*
Author's Response: Hi
Date: 11/22/10 12:00 am Title: Chapter 1
I like William, he's my favorite character. Don't askw hy, he just is. =P
He's mysterious but open at the same time.
Author's Response: I'm glad you like him. He is lots of fun to write :)
Date: 11/21/10 11:42 pm Title: Chapter 12
Very telling that William would bother to save Tom... *strokes beard* But perhaps he only wanted to preserve one of his few sources of entertainment.
Author's Response: *strokes beard* lmao XD I had this interaction planned since the beginning. What would happen if Tom was confronted with two opposite beings within the same body, and what if he found them both alluring in their own way?? And then I had to add the sci-fi,fantasy factor cause I just looove that. You can do anything! :D
Date: 11/21/10 11:23 pm Title: Chapter 12
ok, i'm startin to like william.... far more than i should, probably..... lol
Author's Response: lol it's okay, don't feel bad. He is the protagonist in this story lol
Date: 11/21/10 10:47 pm Title: Chapter 12
I love this story, so so so so much!
Author's Response: Thank you!! I'm always glad to read these kind of reviews :D
Date: 11/18/10 01:02 am Title: Chapter 11
Such a conflict. It's fascinating, because when Bill is the demon I sense he wants Tom to be there because the boy amuses him.
But as Bill... Well, Tom would never have done to Bill what he did to the Demon. At the same time, it's strange how Tom switches, too. He's sort of two people in the game as well. He's one kind of Tom with the Demon and another with Bill. Maybe the Demon finds that attractive. Hmmm... does the Demon want Tom near Bill as a friend or lover, or is he trying to make Bill hate him by giving Bill that shock? oh, this is getting confusing because the Demon is Bill but still...
I believe the Demon prefers to be Bill, but he should want the whole package. If he wants to experience love - he should be more careful what he puts Bill (and Tom) through :) He knows Tom has become attracted to Bill so it's easy to take it from there because Bill has no particular preferences.
Hehe. Alright. That's what I thought. *Maria
Author's Response: Yeah, you noticed Tom switches too!! XD Tom doesn't want to hurt Bill in anyway, which explains his behaviour in a lot of ways. The dynamic between Bill/William will change too because of Tom! Tom will have trouble lol Poor Tom!! I'm so evil to him. XD
Date: 11/15/10 06:21 pm Title: Chapter 11
yay! When I saw you updated I did a little booty dance! yay for your Demon updates!! I am soooo happy you are nominated! Congrats! I am proud of you! You deserve it!! THIS story is amazing beyong words!
Author's Response: :D thank you!!! Makes me real happy you like this one so much. I keep re-reading my stuff and I think I watch too much tv and anime lol. Idk I think I tend to write more like screenplay XD
Date: 11/15/10 01:19 pm Title: Chapter 11
God that was a good chapter! But I feel sad for Tom and for Bill even thou he actually is a demon acting as a human.
Author's Response: Thanks! :) The human personality (Bill) has no idea he's really a demon, just thinks he's weird or sick.
Date: 11/14/10 05:45 am Title: Chapter 11
Great chapter!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Date: 11/13/10 11:39 pm Title: Chapter 11
AWWW :(
Author's Response: :/ And that's just a little part. XD
Date: 11/13/10 08:44 pm Title: Chapter 11
Biiiiill just accept you liked it and fuck agaaaaain :D
Author's Response: Hehehehe, yeah he has to admit he enjoyed it for a while there. lol I think that made the scene even more naughty. XD
Date: 11/13/10 07:53 pm Title: Chapter 11
that was the most intresting sex scene i've eve read. and i hate that Tom is really going nowhere with this, except backwards. i hope he finds some type of answer. but i love it as usual!!
Author's Response: Thanks you! :) I feel so awkward wriging sex. I don't want to be repetitive and to make it sound hot and realistic is so difficult. But I simply can't write a TH fic without the slashy parts XD
Date: 11/13/10 07:15 pm Title: Chapter 11
Wow. That definitely wasn't the reaction I'd anticipated. It was better, in a sense ;) Tom's really regretting giving in to 'William' now ._.
Author's Response: lol yeah everyone thought he'd freak out, he did, but more in a reserved way XD Tom is regretting it, yeah, but because of Bill. You'll see what I mean. :D
Date: 11/13/10 07:00 pm Title: Chapter 11
Bill getting it from Tom turned out less embarrassing for me to read than I thought lmao. I'm so glad he didn't freak out as badly as I thought he would. Fantastic chapter, of course =) Can't wait til u post more!
Author's Response: XD Yeah I know, but the scene was never intended as non-con. The demon sort of knew it would be too late for Bill to back out :)
Date: 11/13/10 04:33 pm Title: Chapter 11
:( Poor, poor Bill. At least it was Tom and not someone endlessly worse.
Bill's initial response totally floored me, though.
Author's Response: Thanks. I know it seemed something more dramatic would happen, but that's how I saw this human Bill reacting, since his personality is contrary to the demon's, so he's not all that prone to having fits. lol
Date: 11/08/10 03:27 pm Title: Chapter 10
OH MEIN GOTT!!!!!!!!!
LOL God I feel sorry for Tom but I can't help but laugh! xD
Author's Response: lol yeah I like writing Tom in evil situations :P
Date: 11/06/10 11:33 pm Title: Chapter 1
*shifty eyes...* Okay...fine. If you say so...
Date: 11/06/10 10:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
Yes, a TSOA is a Tragic State of Affairs, which is what I smell heading my way....(that cliffie you left me hanging on!)
Author's Response: XD That was the idea, but in a good way :)
Date: 11/06/10 12:17 pm Title: Chapter 10
oooh! A+ on this chapter! this is damn good! handcuffs! *snort* Poor Bill. To wake up with Tom in your ass. Such a shame! bwahahah!
Author's Response: lol Thank you! ^_^ I think that's the most omgwtf moment I've ever written lol
Date: 11/06/10 11:36 am Title: Chapter 10
Wow. You'd think Tom would be expecting that. Then again, I'm sure he couldn't resist 'William's' charms. Especially when he had Bill in mind the entire time ;)
Bill's gonna freak =/
Author's Response: Yeah, he should have been expecting that!! But he couldn't fight it heh!! XD I mean seriously, with someone as beautiful as Bill?? You just gotta take the chance! lol