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Reviewer: Ladite Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/04/10 01:52 pm Title: Chapter 14

Can't wait for more! And now I really mean it. This time I have no idea what will happen. And I love it! Thank you.

xx

Author's Response: Thank you for the review!! I hope you keep enjoying it :D

Reviewer: Daissa Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/04/10 01:43 pm Title: Chapter 14

*writhes*

Ugh, well if he DID change back to Bill, maybe he'd see that Tom was hand-cuffed, and make the assumption he wasn't the instigator.

And I have no idea what William is talking about in the last line XD

Author's Response: Yeah, that's something William didn't think of lol.rnrnHe's just being cynical. Since they were back to being friends, but he doesn't think he will this time XD

Reviewer: mrsjennakaulitz Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/01/10 01:38 pm Title: Chapter 13

lovely!! it looks like Tom is finally getting somewhere here! can't wait for the next chapter!!

Author's Response: Thanks! Things will get a little complicated for Tom XD

Reviewer: Daissa Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/29/10 11:49 am Title: Chapter 13

Aww, don't worry Bill, I don't hate you for being straight (or thinking so ;)).

Psh, even if they don't have a relationship I still frickin love this story :D

Author's Response: Thank you! It seems Tom picked the wrong personality to fall for lol

Reviewer: luvcat Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/29/10 12:11 am Title: Chapter 13

I want to dance like an idiot cause I'm feel happy today xD, ur chapter is one of the reasons that cause my good mood hehe

Author's Response: awwww :3 thanks. I'm glad :)

Reviewer: Annalas Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/28/10 10:41 pm Title: Chapter 13

KISS! :D *loves this chapter* ^^

Author's Response: Thank you!! :D

Reviewer: brandilew84 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/28/10 08:19 pm Title: Chapter 13

Woohoo! Tom and Bill kisses! Even tho Bill doesn't want them, I do! hah! Wonderful chapter as always!! Does the Slayer work on husbands? Just for future reference? *in the killing mood* So happy you updated! Thank you for the shout out!!



Author's Response: XD Glad you liked it!! I want each chapter to entertain. Hmm, unless you want to clean the mess right after, I don't recommend the Slayer lol Better something cleaner like poison, or better yet, have him watch Sense and Sensibility, then it'll be torture before silent death and you won't leave trace. Perfect crime XD

Reviewer: TragicStateofAffairs Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/28/10 08:01 pm Title: Chapter 13

Aww, bless Tom's heart...

Author's Response: Poor Tom, I tend to crush his heart in my stories :/

Reviewer: prozac Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/28/10 07:00 pm Title: Chapter 13

oooh poor Tom, i have hated Bill from the very beggining now i hate hi more xD...!

when are we gonna see william again? he´s sexy as fuck xD

Author's Response: lol Well, Bill is the polar opposite of William, after all. I think you'll like the next two chapters XD

Reviewer: TomsParkingOnly Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/28/10 06:13 pm Title: Chapter 13

Now i'm curious about the key...every chapter has something in it to hold my interest & I love it =) I'm happy that Bill has forgiven Tom but i'm sad that he doesn't feel the same as Tom...or does he? xD Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Bill sees Tom as a friend. Even if he's not aware of it, he acts like he thinks he should. :) But let's see what happens XD

Reviewer: Maria Dane-Edwards Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/28/10 05:08 pm Title: Chapter 13

Damn :) But they got very far this time, Tom and Bill.

Bill obviously wouldn't know what to do with Tom's feelings. He's never been in love, never felt lust and it will take sometime in Tom's sweet company to begin to respond to the kindness and love Tom has for him.
I truly wish that the demon will allow himself that pleasure because he created Bill for that purpose. To feel.

I hope the Elders will lave it alone in acknowledge that the demon can't be killed so why bother? Also the interesting facts of why To is left alive. This can be used against Tom for darker purposes than just the demand to have the creature killed, so Tom has a lot to his person by now.
Always an interesting update :)
*Maria

Author's Response: Hi! Thanks. I'm giving Tom a hard time, aren't I? lol William has plans for Bill, but also for Tom XD

Reviewer: Ladite Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/28/10 04:37 pm Title: Chapter 13

When I think about what Bill said in this chapter and what your answer was to my last review, I feel like I have ants in my pants now when I'm waiting for more ;)

Maybe Bill will start to like Tom or maybe Tom will warm up to William or... Update soon, please! ;)

xx

Author's Response: Thanks. Tom's going to have a little dilemma :D

Reviewer: TwinSwords1991 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/28/10 04:03 pm Title: Chapter 13

hmph.... we'll see how long that lasts, won't we.... lol

Author's Response: hehe who knows...XD

Reviewer: TomsParkingOnly Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/25/10 02:59 pm Title: Chapter 12

I love how William came to the rescue. I'm wishing that Tom being in trouble was what set William off xD The thought of him actually feeling something for Tom excites me hehe =) Fantastic chapter! Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Thank you!! I guess it'll get more exciting then XD

Reviewer: kireinayorudakara Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/23/10 02:24 am Title: Chapter 1

ooh! interesante

Author's Response: Thanks :D

Reviewer: mrsjennakaulitz Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/22/10 08:07 pm Title: Chapter 1

oh, yes, i see it now.*facepalms* youre still awesome.

Author's Response: XD Thanks

Reviewer: Ladite Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/22/10 02:26 pm Title: Chapter 12

I'm really really interested to know what'll happen between Tom and Bill and William. Very nice story!

xx

Author's Response: Thank you! I have some more interesting scenes with Tom/Bill/William XD

Reviewer: mrsjennakaulitz Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/22/10 09:02 am Title: Chapter 12

oh gosh, what did the demon say to Tom??? you always end up leaving us hanging in one way or another......but i love it, as usual.

Author's Response: Thank you!! I did put it, almost at the very end. It's in italics :D

Reviewer: ChunyGurl Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/22/10 03:05 am Title: Chapter 12

Interesting... I wonder whats gonna happen now in the future!

Author's Response: More surprises :D

Reviewer: luvcat Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/22/10 02:32 am Title: Chapter 12

I like it!

Author's Response: Thank you!!

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