Date: 12/17/10 11:05 pm Title: Chapter 16
He opened his eyes to see William had vanished.
:O Mysterious!
Was it crazy that during the entire sex scene all I could think about was how Bill will be suspicious finding jelly in his butt. Unless William gets rid of the evidence...
Oh and here Tom glanced at his friends, whom now bared long and chagrined faces
'bared' should be 'bore' That's the proper past tense ;)
William is... jealous of Bill? That's mind-boggling.
Author's Response: William will get rid of the evidence, fortunately for Tom lol.rnrnoops. Fixed it! Thanks so much XDrnrnWilliam doesn't know what to think of Bill. Now he wants the attention to himself, so he is jealous. :)
Date: 12/17/10 10:02 pm Title: Chapter 16
Wow! That's all I can say at the moment....wow! Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: :D yay
Date: 12/17/10 10:01 pm Title: Chapter 16
William is so confusing >.
Author's Response: I know, he's confused too. There's something beyond his conscious that's making him act the way he does. But more of that on later chapters.
Date: 12/17/10 09:42 pm Title: Chapter 16
Awwww no, just when Bill and Tom are getting better William goes and does this again.
I gotta say though, even though William and Bill are the same person, I'm actually really starting to like the William and Tom action, even if it is a little mean to poor Tom ;)
Author's Response: Thanks! William is fun to write cause he can be a meanie! XD Good guys finish last, as they say lol.
Date: 12/17/10 09:36 pm Title: Chapter 16
no matter how wrong it sounds. i love that tom gets raped by the demon XD
Author's Response: heheheh a dominating Bill is real hot XD
Date: 12/13/10 02:17 pm Title: Chapter 15
william is such a slut! I wanna grow up and be just like him! Haha! This story is getting tragic! But in a good way! I want Tom to end up with William coz I think the sex would be mind blowingly better for ole Tommeh boy (since William says he feels nothing...?) And Bill is the boy you gotta train! Haha..well that's my opinion...but i'd screw 'em all coz I'm a big whore. Wonderful, fantastic, lovely chapter wifey! An angel gets its wings everytime you use the word 'cock' in a chapter! XD
Author's Response: I'm like William when I'm wasted lol!! No inhibitions at all. Dangerous lol. Ahh, somebody to match my pervyness XD More cock in next chapter.
Date: 12/13/10 12:36 am Title: Chapter 15
hehe, I bet the best part's coming, love how William had been protecting Tom possessively.I hope oneday Tom would realize it's William that his heart belongs to, cause Bill's too weak for him, I don't hate Bill but I think he hadn't done anything special for Tom.
Author's Response: Bill is important, both to Tom and William. And it is because of him that William "interacts" with the human world. I'll talk some more about it on later chapters :D
Date: 12/12/10 11:20 pm Title: Chapter 15
Holy crap, what a turn of events. (And I'm talking about what William said, not the chapter's end) He's starting to think he was meant to be there? I would be like Tom and not believe him at first.
What a cliffie, hehe. Another amazing chapter!
Author's Response: I hope I can keep surprising you muahaha. :D Thanks!!
Date: 12/12/10 10:09 pm Title: Chapter 15
*waits in the review box til this gets updated again*
Author's Response: LMAO haven't laughed so much with a review. XD
Date: 12/12/10 08:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
i was waiting for that but i wanted them to go all the way u_U
interesting revelations...!! our dear demon is kind of in love with our dear Tom xDDD
you were right i did like it the chapter xDDD
you know what? i´m going to recomend your fic to some of my friends because it´s damn good...!
love :D
Author's Response: Oops late reply. Somehow I missed this review cause it was under chapter 1 ?? Anyway, I'm glad you liked it!! :D Feel real happy that you want to recomend it. Thank you! ^__^ Hope you keep enjoying the story :D
Date: 12/12/10 08:29 pm Title: Chapter 15
omfg i feel soo bad for tom
Author's Response: He'll be alright. :) I think I tend to write Tom in these sad situations because to me he is the more emotional twin, even if he hides it.
Date: 12/12/10 07:33 pm Title: Chapter 15
BILL!!! oh gosh, i'm so glad i went onto recent's. i was waiting for this update, and didnt realize i'd never actually tracked it...lol. oh man, so bad. i hope he's okay...and really, why is he not gay at all? can he be? maybe...he cant stop thinking about it? ;) just wishing
Author's Response: Bill is not gay, yup, but doesn't mean he's entirely straight either. Ok, I won't confuse you anymore. :/ I'm glad you like this story, I hope you like next chapters too :D
Date: 12/12/10 06:34 pm Title: Chapter 15
So, I just realized something. William keeps saying that He and Bill are one and the same, and he also keeps saying that Bill can never love Tom like he wants him to.But, if the first comment is true I don't see how the second can be true too. If Bill and William are the same and William love/wants/need/feels connected to Tom then Bill must feel those things too and just has issues to get over before he can admit to them. right? or am I crazy and looking too much into this?...This is such a crazy super awesome fic. I can't wait for more. I'm really glad Bill wants to talk to Tom, no matter what it is he feels he needs to say.
Author's Response: William thinks they're the same because they share the same body and since he is aware of what Bill does when Bill is in control of the body, but he will change his way of thinking. You'll see what I mean in next chapter. There's an important point I'll explain later on as to why Bill can "feel" everything while William can't, but I can't say anything else or I'll spoil it, just that when Bill was made, he was meant to be William's polar opposite in many aspects. lol I swear I wasn't on crack when I thought about this fic. XD
Date: 12/12/10 06:07 pm Title: Chapter 15
soulmates, hmmm? it's weird seeing William so sincere. and goodness, youre going to give me a heart attack with all these cliffies!!!!
Author's Response: everything has a reason in this fic, so it may seem weird now :) Sorry about the cliffies. I really can't help it XD
Date: 12/12/10 05:14 pm Title: Chapter 15
ummm........ well then...... i have to say, i like william.... XD obnoxous, annoying little bastard..... he's funny.... and his relationshipt to tom is hilarious, even if i do feel bad for bill..... oh, well.... LOVE IT!!!!!!!
Author's Response: lol thanks! I like writing him as a bastard. Pretty different to how I tend to write Bill lol, but he is supposed to be everything bill is not after all.
Date: 12/12/10 03:50 pm Title: Chapter 15
FANTASTIC chapter! Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Thanks! XD
Date: 12/08/10 12:33 am Title: Chapter 14
ohhh William you ass *raises hand threateningly, pauses, realizes he wouldnt feel it anyway* damnit...this is a great story so far. I was thinking William acted more like what is traditionally the alternate personality. I'd put money on it that that is going to be important later...So...this sugar thing...If he stops letting Bill have sugar Bill will become aware of William, and then they can integrate!...or they need to put Bill on an IV sugar drip and solace William to the far reaches of Siberia...I dunno, I can't wait for more!!
Author's Response: :D Thanks! Yeah, there are many little details that I write in each chapter and that will become impotant later on. I'm glad you're enjoying it :D
Date: 12/06/10 12:31 am Title: Chapter 14
you're mean, so mean
Author's Response: muahahaha haha haha (Ursula from the little mermaid laugh)
Date: 12/05/10 12:36 pm Title: Chapter 14
xD
Author's Response: lol XD
Date: 12/05/10 05:50 am Title: Chapter 14
oh god!! cant wait to see what he's gonna make bill wake up to...but ugh, so complicated. bravo for all the little twists and turns
Author's Response: thank you! Consider my nickname as a warning, so it's gonna be bad!! XD