Date: 01/02/11 10:49 pm Title: Chapter 17
Oh, my... you're so cruel! How you dare! You cut the fic here! Argh! I'm feeling frustrated!
But I am glad as well! Sci-fi is yours, girl. I like this demon Bill at all!
So, you are latin american! Good! Here, I'm mexican!
I'm looking forward the next chappie! I'll be here!
Author's Response: Hola!! Mucho gusto! Ya se, me paso con los cliffies haha pero ya lo hago de costumbre. Gracias por el review! :D
Date: 01/02/11 07:19 pm Title: Chapter 17
this is amazing (: i love this alot, good job
Author's Response: Thank you! Really happy :D
Date: 01/02/11 10:34 am Title: Chapter 17
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! How could you end it there?!?!?! That was SO mean. This chapter was so awesome so far! I hate cliffies >_> Can't wait for more!!!!
Author's Response: lol sounds like falling from a cliff. XD I know I'm a meanie, I don't plan to be but it is easier for me to cut the chapter in cliffies. Thanks so much for the review and sorry for the cliffies. I hate cliffies myself, just not when I write them cause I know what's gonna happen. :P Sometimes I wait until the story is completed to avoid the waiting. Another thing I hate is if the story is not completed or ends up MIA. Rage!
Date: 01/02/11 08:53 am Title: Chapter 17
Awww, despite the fact that William is about to kill them all, the moments between him and Tom in this chapter were kind of sweet :3
Author's Response: Thanks! I like writing those moments when inspired by the twins :D
Date: 01/02/11 05:08 am Title: Chapter 17
A chapter well worth the wait! Now I can't wait to read more. I am dying to know what William will do.
Author's Response: Thanks! ^__^ I hope you like next chapter too :D
Date: 01/02/11 02:58 am Title: Chapter 17
OH. MAH. GAWD! I am too hungover for this!
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8xziXJTAz1w
^see, I was drunk...that's me at the end. XD
Author's Response: lol thanks! That's you with the brownie? XD Hiya!!! Have you ever tried little shots of jello with booze? Omg those are incredible hahah
Date: 01/02/11 01:52 am Title: Chapter 17
GAH!! I did not see that coming. And omg I missed this story
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad the story is unpredictable so far :D
Date: 01/01/11 11:36 pm Title: Chapter 17
you surprised me... i didn't see it coming
i was reading Demon earlier and i was hoping you updated and you did :D
love :D
Author's Response: Aww Thank you! :D More surprises coming in next chapters.
Date: 01/01/11 10:41 pm Title: Chapter 17
omg! ahhh!! you're back! i missed you!! and demon! this was like nail biting omg holy fucking shit good! WHY did you stop there!?! I wanna know! damn it!
Happy New Year Wifey!
Author's Response: Hi!! :D Happy New Year!! Best wishes to you, wifey!! I'm good with cliffies and evil with readers XD
Date: 12/21/10 11:26 pm Title: Chapter 16
I think He always saw Bill as a rival, thats why he was always downplaying him, its like what girls do to other girls when a guy they like likes someone else, they start talking shir about them and poking fun at them, and downplayiny their good traits and pointing out the bad ones and making a mountian out of a mole hill of those...I always looked at what William was doing as that same kind of thing. This was good chapter. I can't wait for more!
Author's Response: XD Yes! When people start interfering or getting in someone's turf, they tend to react to that invasion, sometimes badly lol. Thanks for the review! Glad you like it!
Date: 12/21/10 12:39 pm Title: Chapter 16
William is slowly losing the control he has of his own game. Tom's seeing it, and he has a thing for both sides of the Demon. If he's really lucky, he can push the two 'boys' so far that the two personalities become a mix and Tom'll have both the hot William and the shy Bill. That would be quite an awesome boyfriend... I'm probably reaching too far in my wishes for Tom here *g*
Tom is also getting quite out of character. By now he's really testing the loyalty of his men. He's breaking so many laws to be with his love interest.
I'm on the edge of my seat here. I'm sure you'll blow my mind again next time. This is too good. Keep it coming *g*
*Maria
Author's Response: Your reviews are always inspiring! Thanks for taking the time to write them. I hope I can still surprise you cause you really can read in between lines. I try to avoid readers from predicting what will happen or knowing how it will end, but I hope I can keep surprising you :D
Date: 12/18/10 05:56 pm Title: Chapter 16
@prozac: Actually, no, "I" is grammatically correct. You'll find ppl using "me", but that's incorrect.
Author's Response: Thanks. I actually looked it up and was glad to see it was right! :D
Date: 12/18/10 10:18 am Title: Chapter 16
i guess the correct would be: it is me who always control
william, william... i'm dying to know what's going to happen >_
Author's Response: English grammar is so confusing u__u William will surprise in next chapter, I believe.
Date: 12/18/10 02:43 am Title: Chapter 16
*in deep announcer voice* and the cliffie crown goes to..... blame_my_dirty_mind!!!! you have won the cliffie crown for the most cliffies in one story, causing your readers to have massive heart attacks as they await the next chapter!!!!! congratulations!!! ^__^
and William is a freaky thing, huh? and oh god, bill's reaction will be epic!! can't wait!!
Author's Response: Yay! I won the cliffie crown! XD I have a tendency to end in cliffies, like tv series do. They just happen lol
Date: 12/18/10 02:22 am Title: Chapter 16
Bab Tom!
Author's Response: Exactly!! XD
Date: 12/18/10 12:56 am Title: Chapter 16
well then.... at least he was "nice" this time...... XD loved this chapter, i'm really curious to see where the tom/bill/william triangle goes!!!!!!!
Author's Response: I hope nobody can tell where I'm going with this story hehehehe XD
Date: 12/18/10 12:49 am Title: Chapter 16
I told you that I was gonna wait in the review boxxie until this got updated.
Seems that I did.
HA!
Author's Response: lol XD Hope it paid off. Or at least you had nice weather while waiting hahaha
Date: 12/18/10 12:47 am Title: Chapter 16
*gasps* Like vanished as in Vanished, or vanished as in Bill's on top of him? D:
Author's Response: Vanished as in dissappeared, meaning Bill is gone too :D William wasn't so evil this time...apparently.
Date: 12/18/10 12:19 am Title: Chapter 16
mm sexayy. aw, sucks that william can't feel it. he should try to make bill do it, cuz then he would. yes. william should try to convince bill to do it...somehow
Author's Response: It's true William can feel what Bill experiences, and that's why he tries to experience stuff through him, but it's mostly pain that he manages to feel (at least that's what he thinks):D
Date: 12/17/10 11:29 pm Title: Chapter 16
Ahh! yes! This is just bliss for me! I love love love it! William lathering his ass up with jelly made me giggle! I loved it! And he's jealous! bwahah! Oh to be jealous of yourself! my dream! So when William disappeared, Bill did too! *gasp* where do demons go?! *ponders* Can't wait for the next chapter Wifey!
Author's Response: Hey, wifey! heheheh glad to please! Yeah, if William vanishes, so does Bill, cause it's the same body lol. Next chapter will be a little longer, since it will have more stuff going on. I hope you keep enjoying reading them :)