Date: 01/26/11 11:01 pm Title: Chapter 20
holy mother of-- are you kidding me?!
that was freaking awesome!!
Wifey! You get an extra smack on the ass from me tonight! I'm bouncing with excitement!
Oh Bill. Bill, Bill, Bill!
***my patient did finally pass away quietly and peacefully in her sleep. Maybe she is reading your story now =) ***
Author's Response: Hahah didn't expect that hmm? Take out the spanking paddle cause there's more to come *evil grin* Aww, I'm glad she's at peace now and I'll be happy if my story offers some entertainment hee! XD
Date: 01/26/11 10:16 pm Title: Chapter 20
oh no, I hope William isn't lying...Goodness this fic is just so damn interesting...I can't wait to find out what happens next!
Author's Response: XD Thank you!! Glad you find it interesting :D
Date: 01/26/11 09:07 pm Title: Chapter 20
i can hear the drums tan taaaaan
i didnīt expect you to update today, it was a nice surprise! :D
do you have msn or something? lets change e-mails, hereīs mine thecrazyvegetarian_35@hotmail.com
love :D
Author's Response: Hi! Yeah, I usually update right after the beated version is sent back to me. I don't have msn cause I don't have hotmail. My e-mail is a yahoo one: blame_my_dirty_mind@yahoo.com but I haven't downloaded the yahoo msn yet. I can create an account on hotmail too, though. :)
Date: 01/26/11 08:16 pm Title: Chapter 20
oh my, things are getting serious. *bites nails*
and i have a quick question: what do the Leeches look like? do they look like the Dementors from Harry Potter, or different?
Author's Response: Hmm I think Dementors are scarier looking. I describe Leeches sort of zombie looking. When they haven't fed they look lifeless, dead. Pale, gray skins, and skeletal thin. When they feed, they look more like humans, they look livelier, but on a clear day they're still easily to tell apart from humans. This pic is the closest I could find to what I had in mind: http://i670.photobucket.com/albums/vv68/blamemydirtymind/leech1.jpg?t=1296106190 Hope the link works.
Date: 01/26/11 08:04 pm Title: Chapter 20
HAHA, GO TOM!!!!!!! figure it out, bout damn time you put your backbone to good use....... :D anyway, great job cant' wait to see what secrets william/the general are hiding lol
Author's Response: Big secrets in this story lol. :D
Date: 01/26/11 06:45 pm Title: Chapter 20
Aw man this is getting confusing...I wonder which one's lying!!
Author's Response: Dun dun dun...XD
Date: 01/26/11 06:37 pm Title: Chapter 20
Fantastic chapter! Now we're getting somewhere lol. Too bad i'm just as confused as Tom =) I'm looking forward to reading more.
Author's Response: Thank you! I know everyone is confused but hopefully everything makes sense as the answers come :)
Date: 01/19/11 08:53 pm Title: Chapter 19
omg! sooooo good! At least Bill didn't panic as much! haha! He is kinda taken the whole waking up naked next to Tom okay!
So my patient (who's dying of cancer. She's 48.) today asked me if I was reading anything amazing. I said yes!
patient: "what's it called?"
me: Demon!
pt: oh! sounds interesting! What's it about?
me: demon sex with a hot sexy officer, rawr! *kitty claws* It's by blame_my_dirty_mind.
pt: *hysterical laughter* You are the strangest nurse I have ever had.
me: i know. *evil grin*
I made her laugh. She hasn't laughed all day. She probably won't be with us much longer either, but I just wanted to share with you! haha
Author's Response: Awwww this is both sad and happy. Thanks for sharing this with me. I was touched while reading it. ;__; Oh, and you are the coolest nurse I know, btw. :)
Date: 01/19/11 03:37 pm Title: Chapter 19
you are welcome for the long review, sorry it was all random shir you probably didnt care about.
Wonderful chapter. Tom cares William doesn't want to go back to indifference. And Poor Bill is just stuck in the middle and confused about everything.
I can't wait to find out what happens next. Keep up the awesome work.
Author's Response: Oh no, I love long reviews :) I always want to know what people think of the chapters and the story in general, so thanks :)
Date: 01/19/11 12:18 pm Title: Chapter 19
My first review for this story :-)
Bill is sweet and all but I think that it is William who belongs to Tom. It is so cute when he is protecting Tom, I love it:)
Author's Response: Hi! Thank you for reviewing! I'm glad you like the character. :D
Date: 01/19/11 04:50 am Title: Chapter 19
oh man...bill, feel something different for once! go wank and then feel confused...;) maybe tom should explain to bill that the demon side is in love with him? see what that inspires
Author's Response: lol, like I replied to another comment below, Bill is only acting the way he knows how hehe. Bill says something about that in next chapter, but I can't say more for now :)
Date: 01/19/11 04:23 am Title: Chapter 19
[Woah, review #2 from me] Ooh, couple more minor errors. Only fix 'em if you want to.. :)
and that there’s no way the trap seal would work
"there's" should be "there was"
And that feeling William speaks of
"speaks" should be "spoke"
Only 'cause the story is supposed to be in past tense.
Also, oh my goodness, now I expect William to get trapped in that thing. I have no doubt that seal actually works XD
Author's Response: :D Thanks. I appreciate these tips a lot. I just fixed them and yeah, much better :) lol can't comment about your seal comment or I'll spoil it.
Date: 01/19/11 04:00 am Title: Chapter 19
Eee! Amaziiing :DD
The only thing I would fix is where it says:
“Of all the eras and places to stumble into your world, it happened in yours.” Tom turned to look at him.
“What do you mean?”
It would be much easier to understand like this:
“Of all the eras and places to stumble into your world, it happened in yours.”
Tom turned to look at him. “What do you mean?”
People's motions stick with their dialogue ;)
Date: 01/19/11 02:44 am Title: Chapter 19
wow, i love how William and Tom were having just the most normal conversation while having sex. and Bill....he needs to loosen up. he knows he likes it ;)
Author's Response: lol yeah, it sure helps a lot that William can't feel a thing, which is why Tom told him to shut up. haha.
Date: 01/19/11 02:03 am Title: Chapter 19
Ok, I will tell you this again: I like this William so much and I hate Bill(a tiny bit) XDDDD
I want to know how the boy and the demon are going to sort this mess out *sigh*
Author's Response: lol poor Bill haha. It is difficult for Bill to act different except the only way he can. I was going to write another word but it would be a huge spoiler lol. Let's rather say he can't evolve to something else, but you'll see why in later chapters :)
Date: 01/18/11 10:11 pm Title: Chapter 1
i love you xD i wish you could write faster u_u
Author's Response: Awww thank you! I am writing as fast as I can, but it also depends on my beta reader's busy life lol. Next chapter is already being betaed
Date: 01/18/11 10:07 pm Title: Chapter 19
Fuck, William. You sure know how to send a guy over the edge!!
Another amazing chapter!! I wonder if Tom'll be able to convince him...
Author's Response: Hi! Thanks! Can't say what will happen. I love to surprise people :D
Date: 01/18/11 09:48 pm Title: Chapter 19
Fantastic chapter! Can't watit to read more.
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Date: 01/18/11 09:41 pm Title: Chapter 19
ugh, william's a stubborn little bastard, is he not???? lol
Author's Response: Yes, he is! XD Like a little brat.
Date: 01/11/11 10:28 pm Title: Chapter 18
i think i hit enter twice to make breaks?!
haha.
i think.
let's try it here.
did it work?
if not, i love you wifey!! and your kinky ass!
Author's Response: Nothing happens if I hit enter pfff!! I have to put the htlm break code thing. bah! Ah, you mean you love my dirty mind? I love it too, have so much fun with it, if you know what I mean. heheheheh *evil horny grin*