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Reviewer: THbillgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/05/11 02:48 pm Title: Chapter 21

wow great chapter! cant wait to read more!!!:D

Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad this chapter got this kind of response since there wasn't any sex scenes or William in it :D

Reviewer: Haleema Kaaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/05/11 12:07 pm Title: Chapter 21

Poor Tom. It must suck to realise that the person you love isn't even real



Author's Response: Yeah, talk about your world ending XD

Reviewer: kireinayorudakara Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/05/11 05:25 am Title: Chapter 21

aaaah, nooo!!! shit. shit. no, tom can't be the trigger, he has to be the...stopper, but not by hurting him. there needs to be some way to free william from his purpose or his demon godness and maybe isolate that part and get rid of it.....? i like him ;_;

Author's Response: Of course I can't say what will happen, but maybe you'll have an idea in next chapter.

Reviewer: SoffiProppi Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/05/11 04:56 am Title: Chapter 21

:o


Exciting!!

Author's Response: :D So glad you think so. Thanks!

Reviewer: mrsjennakaulitz Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/05/11 01:39 am Title: Chapter 21

woah....everything's starting to make sense!!! what is Tom gonna do??

Author's Response: :D I'm glad it's making sense. There are still more secrets to reveal, though. What's Tom gonna do? Well, he's gonna dun dun dun.........XD

Reviewer: TragicStateofAffairs Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/05/11 12:17 am Title: Chapter 21

>_> I need a drink now. *wonders what kinda alcohol I have*

Author's Response: lmao!! XD

Reviewer: Analif Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/05/11 12:08 am Title: Chapter 21

Argh! Esto es lo que odio de tus historias! XDDD Que no puedo saber quién tiene razón y quién no, caray! Estoy que me subo por las paredes... digo, a quién creerle, entonces? William no sabe, en serio, por qué está en el plano humano? El General está diciendo la verdad?
Y lo pero, qué hará Tom? Ah, caray... Me encanta "Demon", en serio, pero siempre me deja comiéndome las uñas por más y más y argh... necesito ir a comer algo u.u
He extrañado al querido Higher Demon en este capítulo... espero verlo pronto u.u
Besitos!

Author's Response: jajajaj las historias predecibles pueden ser aburridas, digo que chiste tiene si todo mundo sabe que va a pasar, por eso tengo que ver la manera de dejarlos pensando jeje y creo que lo estoy logrando :D Muchas gracias por el review! Me agrada mucho saber cuando disfrutan mis historias.

Reviewer: TwinSwords1991 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/04/11 11:28 pm Title: Chapter 21

hmph, i still have faith in william..... or bill.... whichever!!!!!! anyway, great job, i'm literally on the edge of my seat, wanting to see what happens next!!!!!!

Author's Response: Hold on to your faith, girl. :D I'm so glad I can keep the story interesting.

Reviewer: dee25u Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/04/11 11:02 pm Title: Chapter 1

Tom better not hand William over! That would probably make him awaken if he betrays Bill and William. Nothing worse than betraying a demon. I never told, but I will now the banner for this is hot!

Author's Response: Tough choice for Tom and yeah, he knows better than to make William angry. XD So glad you liked the banner. I have no photoshopping skills at all so I just told Melanie what I wanted and gave her the pics. I think she did an awesome job :D

Reviewer: ladyX Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/04/11 10:42 pm Title: Chapter 21

*gasp*...* thinks about it*...William, screw the world save William...

Methinks the turning point might be Tom betraying him to the Order. If he doesn't do it the world wont end.

Wonderful work this chapter. I am totes looking forward to more!

Author's Response: XD lol poor world! Can't say exactly what will happen so you'll have to keep reading to see if you guessed right :D

Reviewer: brandilew84 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/04/11 10:01 pm Title: Chapter 21

Save the demon! haha

Screw the sacred writings! Let TomxWilliamxBill write a new chapter! Jeez!

I was just thinking about you and you popped out a new chapter! yay!



Author's Response: LOL What to believe, right? I sure put poor Tom in some predicament. XD I had just got the betaed chapter and was going to post the next day, but in the last minute I posted it in the same day. Maybe it was ESP or something :D

Reviewer: prozac Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/04/11 09:52 pm Title: Chapter 1

ahora ya me largo a ver the soup *_*

joel mchale *____*

Reviewer: prozac Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/04/11 09:48 pm Title: Chapter 21

i´ve been waiting for your update all week T_T i´m online just because of demon

emmm cierto cierto hablas español jejeje la costumbre, si hay una profecía sobre william me muero por escucharla
lo he extrañado en los últimos capítulos, se que es necesaria su ausencia pero ¿estará en el próximo? di que sí :D
te juro que me muero de ganas por ver la reacción de tom y william ante todo esto, tal vez la información que le de tom (si se la da) sea el detonante para que despierte

amor amor amor :D

Author's Response: Hello!! Gracias mil por tus compentarios. No te preocupes que habra mas William en los proximos capitulos jeje. :D

Reviewer: prozac Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/01/11 12:02 am Title: Chapter 1

el mio también! xDD Soy de México y tú?

Author's Response: yay! Ya te mande un mail :D

Reviewer: Nia Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/27/11 01:52 pm Title: Chapter 20

So many secrets :O


I love it :))

Author's Response: Thanks!! :D

Reviewer: Maria Dane-Edwards Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/27/11 01:48 pm Title: Chapter 20

Hey :)
Why did William create his other personality to far away fro himself as possible? He could have created a person with the same opinions but also with the feelings he craves so much? I suppose he needs someone who has none of the speculations William deals with. If he can create one personality, he can create two. If he's this godlike higher being.

Oh, and that is so thrilling I can't tell you how much! Well, I can and it's a lot :D

William should have the power to do exactly as he please so why is he spending so much time complaining that he wish he had both when I'm sure he can have whatever he wants.

Tom was in for a shock in this chapter. The way the leech told him more than he might want to know, but at the same time, it was important he got that bit of information to form an even preciser profile of what William is- even if it's almost too much to bear.

Tom and Bill - well, :) Bill is really sweet in his smooth acceptance of their friendship even if he 'pays' with sex. Wow, that almost makes Bill a whore, doesn't it? William is still the one who gains a lot from this and Bill is the sucker. Tom is lucky he isn't insane by now :)

*g* I love this so much. *Maria

Author's Response: Ahhh I knew you'd delve deeper into the personality stuff.
rnThere's a reason for why William is the way he is, and Bill is the way he is, but it's all I can say. I'm just glad you're noticing all these 'oddities' about the demon's 'split personality'. I think next chapter will clear some more things up, but a lot more secrets will be revealed until further on.
rnTom is assuming Bill's thoughts,remember, and he thinks that Bill thinks he'll lose Tom's friendship if he stops the sex, like he isn't worthy enough for Tom just being who he is, and that's why Tom knows that Bill doesn't really know what love is. :)
rnThanks!! Glad you like it! :D

Reviewer: prozac Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/27/11 08:16 am Title: Chapter 1

it would be nice if you get a hotmail one

by the way, what's your first languaje??

Author's Response: Okay Imma try get one. My first language is Spanish :D

Reviewer: kireinayorudakara Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/27/11 01:37 am Title: Chapter 20

aw shit, what? did you mean, for us rooting for william, this chapter would help or stop that behavior? cuz i dont know what to think, but i like william...hmm, so confusing

Author's Response: lol I just knew this chapter was going to be confusing and I'm just messing with you guys. :PrnAnyway, can't judge anyone in this story until the end :)

Reviewer: TragicStateofAffairs Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/26/11 11:33 pm Title: Chapter 20

:O this story keeps getting better and better. For reals.

*goes back to bed with fever* (im super sick. :/)

Author's Response: Aww, hope you get well soon!! What works best is to get enough rest, I'm told. :) I guess not even a fever can keep you from reading fics XD

Reviewer: Hanna_LiebeTH Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/26/11 11:07 pm Title: Chapter 20

Soooo good!!!! Great chapter

Author's Response: Thank you ^__^

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