Date: 02/16/11 12:42 pm Title: Chapter 7
Interesting! I like both of Bill's personalities =)
Date: 02/16/11 12:29 pm Title: Chapter 5
I was hoping Bill was really human and the alternate personality was a demon =(
I really like your story so far!
Date: 02/15/11 07:31 pm Title: Chapter 22
well..... huh.... i wouldn't be surprised of someone hurts tom and pisses off william who then proceeds to destroy the world.... :D
Author's Response: heeee XD I like everyone making guesses. Let's see if you're surprised or not at the end :)
Date: 02/15/11 02:45 pm Title: Chapter 22
OMG! Brillaint. spend the whole day reading this.
Author's Response: Thanks! Really glad you like it. Hope it's entertaining :D
Date: 02/15/11 09:54 am Title: Chapter 22
wow.....so will william end up destroying the world because Tom doesn't love him? this is suspenseful!!! *jumps up and down in seat*
Author's Response: Lots of possibilities, but you'll have to wait and see :D
Date: 02/15/11 01:27 am Title: Chapter 22
I think I dreamed that Bill decided to ask Tom to give to him what the demon so obviously wanted all the time :D And he liked it, of course *s* And Tom was in heaven the rest of the day.
Another very important detail has been revealed now and one that should make Tom crazy because he had never thought himself a part of the larger picture. But it makes sense - if in fact the old man is right - William has no clue what Tom is talking about regarding the demon being the one. And he can't have any clue when / if Tom has been the clue the whole time. I think I should reread the entire thing and get all anal about every little important or insignificant thing that could be a huge indicator that Tom was the one causing a reaction somewhere where ever he went...
hmmmm *g* or I could wait for the next chapter :)
Anyway. I liked how Bill approached Tom in a small way even if he just held his hand. Grasping for straws, Tom is still hoping Bill will add more of this in time. Question is how much time do they have and what exactly will trigger Tom if he's the one... I can't see what Tom can do other than triggering someone else and that is William... or is it Bill? Who in fact is the one of them who has the most power? Bill doesn't know he has some kind of power so maybe he's the most dangerous of them?
Loved the update :)
*Maria
Author's Response: lol your first line! Wait till you read next chapter! Gosh, it's like you know what's gonna happen in every next chapter XD Everyone has an important part in this, even Bill :D
Date: 02/15/11 12:14 am Title: Chapter 22
Tom is the key that will lead to the end of the world O.O
Author's Response: heh poor Tom didn't expect that XD
Date: 02/14/11 11:23 pm Title: Chapter 22
This story is SOO effn good! I feel like I'm addicted to it. lol. Keep updating please :)
Author's Response: Thanks. I'm really happy to know you like it. :D
Date: 02/14/11 10:34 pm Title: Chapter 22
mmmmmmhhhmm. What did I say?...Tom was gonna be the reason.Hopefully everything will turn out well. Maye I was wrong about the reason Tom was the reason. Maybe they rty to use him as bait, and piss William off, thus endijng the world. I don't know. But I really am looking forward to more!
Author's Response: lol yeah! Good call. I read your review and was like dang! lol I couldn't say anything obvs that's why the lame reply lol. :D I hope you keep enjoying it.
Date: 02/14/11 10:18 pm Title: Chapter 22
Eee I'm convinced you're a genius for coming up with a plot like this *-*
This gives me goosebumps... It's just getting more and more exciting as it goes.
Hope you update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you. Really glad you like it. Bill is always a great inspiration for my stories :D
Date: 02/14/11 09:43 pm Title: Chapter 22
más misterios revelados y más misterios creados...! :O
ese trajecito de william... *__*
Author's Response: XDlindo traje verdad? Ahora que alguien lo dibuje. *____* Jajaj que bueno que te veo despues del msn fail. :D
Date: 02/14/11 07:36 pm Title: Chapter 22
Can't wait to read more!
Date: 02/14/11 07:36 pm Title: Chapter 22
Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: :D
Date: 02/14/11 07:04 pm Title: Chapter 22
I love corset Bill! It's mind pleasing! haha!
What the freak is the key?! Is it like...in plain sight and I just keep over looking it?! Is it one of Bill's crazy ass necklaces or something? A heel on a hooker boot?!
Crazy old man left me with all kinds of questions!!
Thank you for the shout out! And Happy Valentine's Day!! *kiss kiss*
Author's Response: Hi! lol thank you! I finally got my gift awwww thanks :3 Heheheeee got you thinking with this one hmm? XD
Date: 02/08/11 10:18 pm Title: Chapter 21
Oh my god!!!! Ahh my heart is racing lolol next chapter!!!
Author's Response: Hi. Late reply sorry! Missed this review. I'm glad you like the story so far :)
Date: 02/06/11 12:27 pm Title: Chapter 21
Holy crap. Lol truly it just amazes me how you're able to keep pulling out these twists and additional information XD
Author's Response: Thanks. As long as readers are surprised, I'm glad it's working XD
Date: 02/06/11 05:25 am Title: Chapter 21
Aha :) Thanks for the kudos!!! :D
Well, this is even better than my little needling was musing. That there are things coming that not even William is aware of. That he didn't create Bill consciously -however thinks he did is extremely thrilling because what the fuck is to come then? A second Jesus? Or perhaps the end of the world literally. But that is so based on religious beliefs and I doubt true evil bears nothing mankind so whatever it is will be so extraordinary that nothing the general knows about can be prepared for even that.
Tom could try and ask William next time but it's likely that not even William knows the answer because it's bigger than him and buried deep down in his gene pole waiting for the right moment and time. And I've forgotten how long William's been on this plane. Is it recently, or has he been playing nice student for decades/centuries?
Tom's confidence in William's love for him is justified, but can he be so sure the higher demon will leave anyone but Tom alive when this Armageddon disaster is over? What kind of world will he have survived. Oh man, lots of thrills and twists to look forward to!
Wahnsinn!!!! :D *Maria
Author's Response: Dang, girl, you're always ahead of me! Yes, there are things that neither William and the General know but that's all I'm saying. I'm just glad I can still surprise you with every twist :P
The end of the world is not only based on religious beliefs, you should see what some scientists say in regards to that, pretty scary stuff lol. Anyway, I love that I can mix facts into fictional stories, just cause I think it makes the atmosphere easier to fall into, or something heh. You can just about do anything your mind will take you with Sci-fi and Fantasy too, that's why I always write in these themes.
William has only been on the human plane for a few weeks, but has been longer in the demon plane. Time elapses differently in every plane (this I learned from googling about dimensions and planes and stuff) and so what may appear as years in the human plane could be many ages in the demon plane.
rnI'm leaving the rest of the story to answer your last questions :D
Date: 02/06/11 04:17 am Title: Chapter 21
Hi.
First of all let me tell you that this is my first review to this unbelivable fic, but i've followed it almost since the first chapters.
I can't explain how much i love this fic, everytime i see the alert in my inbox, i wanna jump of pure happiness, believe me, im obssessed with this fic. (in a good way, please don't think i'm a freak or something like that =P)
sorry if i haven't leave a rev before, but as you may already seen my english isn't that good, i know it don't make sence sometimes, so... yeah. anyway i couldn't just sit here and read and don't tell you how awesome this fic is. also i have a super motive that've encouraged me to write to you, i'm lovin William!!! he's more "human" than Bill himself (if you know what i mean) I can't understand how could you develop the both of them; Bill's character is like a newborn: sweet but can't really understand what's happening around him, not saying the fellings at his sorroundings, otherwise William's so real, the way he falls for Tom is perfect, the way he would sacrifice his convictions to stay 'round him... i dunno if i'm making any sense at all...? hahaha
At the very beginning i was expecting for Bill's heart to change and love Tom back, but now, OMG now!!! i just shout alone in my room to my screen "C'mon Tom just love that demon!!!" lol i know it sounds stupid sorry.
I hope this will have a happy ending for him... (not that i expect this story to end soon, it's so much to give!)
I love everything in this fic, the romance, the action, the suspense, the passion, your awesome writing flow... it has EVERYTHING, i'm telling you, i'll print this and put among my favourite books to read it over, and over, and over again!
Well I think this is long enough for a life! lol. just wanna you to know that you have one faithful reader that waits for more Tom/William... haha joking, for more of your wonderful extraordinary fic.
Thank you so much and have a nice day!!
Author's Response: Hi!! Wow, thanks so much for your awesome words. I'm honestly flattered and really really happy that it makes you feel like that. I had a huge smile on my face while reading it. Your english is quite good XD I understood everything. I'm also awed. You made a truly important observation about William/Bill which I will discuss in later chapters. I am glad you can see more to the story than what it looks like. Everything, and specially the way everyone 'feels' has a reason, but it will only be cleared later. I like my stories to be a ride, so I'm super happy you told me what you think. I hope you can use this story, read it again, whenever you want to feel happy XD Thanks again for your review! *hugs*
Date: 02/05/11 08:56 pm Title: Chapter 21
Omgosh! Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: XD Thanks. Hope to post next chapter by next week.