Date: 03/01/11 10:52 am Title: Chapter 23
Ohhh poor bill! I love thisss storyy
Date: 02/25/11 09:27 am Title: Chapter 23
I am both quite thankful and at the same time feeling like an idiot too for only reading this fic today. Thankful because of the already many available chapters I could read... Yet quite feeling the regret for not reading this fic sooner... Because... OMG THIS IS JUST SO GOOD, DAMN IT!!!! WHY WHY WHY HAVE I ONLY READ THIS TODAAAAAAAAYYYY *head meets wall 1000x*
AND DAMN THE CLIFFHANGER HOOOOOOMG!!! *flails* I threw my ipod on the bed after reading that last damn sentence and squealing and screeching in the room for that kind of ending!! TOM, YOU IDIOT!!! Such a blabbermouth!!! Now Bill's going to be upset and William might get angry now!! UUUUGGGHHH *pulls hair* WHY WHY WHY WHY...
Okay..*breathe* Tom's just really stressed with their situation.. But he's still an idiot. I feel sorry for him though. And for William and Bill. Such a complicated relationship:( And I felt sorry for William in this chapter when he has to step aside for Tom's pleasure or something like that. Ehh..
I am getting frustrated with their complicated lovelife LOL and how they have to deal with the rest of the people. And then there's something with the awakening and the end of the world too.. Aigoo..*scratch head* I'm still a bit clueless about that part. I do kind of get that William unleashes his power when it has something to do w/Tom - or matters of the heart, and when provoked concerning what's his (aka Tom- or anything Tom related).. Like when the necklace melted. Will a heartache drive him to being awakened? Just a thought, though. At this point Tom's broken a promise... And it could be possible Bill might just disappear.. Will Bill disappear now??:( Or maybe he'd fight for his existence. Can he fight William? And if Bill would be gone, can William be okay on his own?:O Can't there just be a way for them to mold into one?? Gaaaahh it's frustrating... Okay I don't know what I'm saying. I'm babbling. Sorry..*headdesk*
I'll be reading this fic from the start again (cuz it's just thaaaaaaaat amazing-I really love AUs fantasy/creature fics like this) and I'll try to leave reviews on previous chapters too.. GAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHDD I am so loving this..*flutterclaps* Sorry for sounding like an idiot but... I LOVE YOU AND I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTERS!! *hibernates*
Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much for this inspiring review!! =D I am really happy to know you gave the story a chance and liked what you read. The relationship between the three is really complicated, yeah. I hope you like how the story turns out :D Thanks again for the amazing review!! Loved your reactions XD.
Date: 02/25/11 01:47 am Title: Chapter 23
OH NO!!!!! NOOOOO!!!!!! *runs out of the room*
Author's Response: XD haven't gotten used to the cliffies hmm?
Date: 02/25/11 01:44 am Title: Chapter 23
OH MY GOD. I'M ON THE EDGE OF MY SEAT. FUCK! WHY'D YOU STOP IT THERE?!
Author's Response: XD Sorry lol I tend to end chapters in cliffies :D
Date: 02/25/11 12:04 am Title: Chapter 23
Thank you for the update!
Author's Response: More than welcome! :D
Date: 02/24/11 11:59 pm Title: Chapter 23
wow, tom, fail........ and i wouldn't be surprised if thats what pisses william off enough to start the apocalypse..... :P brilliantly written, as usual.....
Author's Response: LMAO you made me laugh at Tom fail!! haha XD Thanks, glad you think so.
Date: 02/24/11 10:48 pm Title: Chapter 23
odio a Bill, ¬¬ ojalá se muera xD
Author's Response: jaja pobre Bill
Date: 02/24/11 10:44 pm Title: Chapter 23
oh no *shakes head sadly* Poor Bill.
uh oh, I just thought of something else that could be the reason Tom ends the world, and it involves that last bit of this chapter. Could it be by informing Bill of the reality of the situation at hand, it leads to crazy armageddon BS?...somehow?...I dunno...yea...
Spifftacular chapter. And don't be too bummed about me guessing about Tom being the key, I am super good at guessing things like that. When I was 6 and saw wizard of oz for the first time, I knew she was hallucinating, well, I called it dreaming at the time, but still awesome guess from a 6 year old right?
Really looking forward to the next update! Keep up the amazing work!
Author's Response: I can't answer your questions without spoiling it XD. That was a good guess on the Wizard of Oz. How about the sixth sense? Did you figure that one out? I was like WHAT?!? yeah, the end took me by surprise!! But I love those sort of endings, it seems now move movies are doing that. Thanks for the review!! :D
Date: 02/24/11 10:37 pm Title: Chapter 23
I don't even have words.
Author's Response: XD hope that's good lol
Date: 02/24/11 09:54 pm Title: Chapter 23
that chapter was delicious! wooo~
Bill really should have enjoyed that as much as I did! He is being entirely too selfish! I would let Tom fuck me in the ass and never complain!
Excellent Chapter! I hate that Bill heard that last part! Damnit!
Author's Response: Hi!!! Glad you liked this one. Next chapter has more action and whatnot lol. Hope you like that one too :D
Date: 02/24/11 08:58 pm Title: Chapter 23
(reply) Oh geez, yes, of course I meant to say it was William, not Bill. *blush*
And okey-dokey, just wanted to bring it to your attention.
Author's Response: lol, I'm glad you do, cause maybe you're not the only one who was confused. I tried fixing it a little, hopefully now it's better :D
Date: 02/24/11 08:39 pm Title: Chapter 23
Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: :D Thanks. Hopefully next week.
Date: 02/24/11 06:47 pm Title: Chapter 23
Oh. My. God. 0.0
Bill heard?!? Noooo
Also, I recommend being more clear when Tom was near the church and people started screaming. It seems like Bill just came out of nowhere. Kinda jarring storywise. Did he not see him coming? And maybe rephrase the part where Bill first starts flying with him. Kinda got lost there for a few seconds too XD
Author's Response: Hi! Umm, well at least you got it in the end that they were flying lol. It's William, not Bill, who appears out of nowhere, cause he can appear like that, so no, Tom did not see him coming at all. I don't know how to rephrase the scenes, but I'll see if I can. Thanks :)
Date: 02/24/11 06:37 pm Title: Chapter 23
:o Poor Bill :(
Awesome updates, some things are getting clearer for me now, I'm slow hahha :)
Author's Response: lol I know. I try to keep the mystery all the time. :)
Date: 02/24/11 06:23 pm Title: Chapter 23
justo acabo de releer el último capítulo dd demon y vi que habías actualizado :D
la escena de sexo me pareció de lo más romántica
Author's Response: Hola! Gracias que bueno que te gusto :D
Date: 02/24/11 06:02 pm Title: Chapter 23
FUUUUUUCK! uh oh......
Author's Response: XD cliffie
Date: 02/24/11 05:41 pm Title: Chapter 22
oh snap! its gonna be Tom that sets him offf??
Date: 02/16/11 06:04 pm Title: Chapter 18
Please don't do that Tom!
It's so sad he doesn't love William, he and Bill are one being, two sides of the same coin =)
Date: 02/16/11 05:58 pm Title: Chapter 17
Wow! William is pretty pissed =D
Date: 02/16/11 12:51 pm Title: Chapter 8
the demon is playing with him and Tom don't want to hurt Bill. How cute!