Date: 03/28/11 10:26 pm Title: Chapter 25
NOOOO!!! William!!! *sobs*...oh god...no....this is not good. Please pelase pleaser update soon!!?!?!? omg I'm hyperventilating....I am going to be waiting with bated breath at the edge f my seat until you update!! Keep up the fabulous work!
Author's Response: Thanks! That's why I tend to read stories when they are complete cause waiting for the updates drives me nuts. XD
Date: 03/28/11 08:39 pm Title: Chapter 25
wow, tom, you're an idiot....... *sigh* great job on this, the emotions were.... wow!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! I like a little drama in the story. :)
Date: 03/28/11 08:22 pm Title: Chapter 25
WHAT WHAT NO THIS CAN'T BE THE END WHAT
Author's Response: lol no, I wouldn't end it like that. That'd be cruel! XD
Date: 03/28/11 07:10 pm Title: Chapter 25
Oh my gooooosh! I wanna believe that William's just pretending, but I don't think so >.<
And the "bare" in the second-to-last sentence should be "bear".
Waiting with bated breath for the next :)
Author's Response: Hi! Oops! So glad you noticed. This is why I shouldn't edit after my beta already beated. lol!!! William is indeed gone...but I can't say more. XD
Date: 03/28/11 06:55 pm Title: Chapter 25
Oh, wow. I can't believe he actually left ;______;
Author's Response: Yeah. He wanted to make Tom happy. u___u
Date: 03/24/11 04:00 pm Title: Chapter 24
OH MY FUCKING GOD! MORE! I am crazy after this story and my brain aches to know the ending, to read more. I can't give a good review right now since I'm too elevated, but once this story's done, I will. The plot is fucking amazing. My eyes nearly bled from the joy and pleasure the words brought me as I read. xD
Author's Response: XD Thanks for the nice review! Makes me happy! Hope you keep enjoying it! :D
Date: 03/19/11 08:42 pm Title: Chapter 24
this is genius. really like it. cant wait the next chapter...:-)
Author's Response: :3 Thank you! :D Glad you like it!
Date: 03/16/11 08:49 pm Title: Chapter 24
The action in this chapter was amazing my love! I was pumped through the whole thing! Stupid William! Sometimes I wanna punch that demon boy in the teeth!! And Bill knows everything now!
Poor Tom too! He can't catch a break.
I loved it!! Looking forward to some more drama!
Author's Response: Hello there wifey!! Glad you liked it XD I like writing and figuring out how the readers "see" the scenes in their minds. Hopefully the same as me!! lol More drama yeah jus for you! :D
Date: 03/10/11 09:59 am Title: Chapter 24
Love love loooooooove the action sequence in this chapter!! I could feel the adrenaline while they try to escape..XD
Although I don't quite know how I'm liking the whole turn of events. I feel sorry for Bill for finding out the truth like that. But whatever way he'd find it out I guess his reaction will still be the same.I feel sorry for William. Yeah, he's mean to Bill but it's his body... Just sad he's in the human world when he didn't even want to in the first place, and he's not loved - or not the same way as Tom loves Bill. He was willing to let Bill out instead for Tom (or was this just a plot of his? Gaaahh imma read again-_-). How martyr's that?? He is his own rival. Frustrating. As for Tom... Poor Tomi, torn between two lovers. Lol... But At the same time I wanna kick him or something..XD
I'm still a bit clueless as to how William will awaken and lose control lol too confused to think..XD
Author's Response: :) Glad you enjoyed the chapter! I always make up for all the drama and stuff in the end lol so don't worry. I don't want to spoil next chapters, so you'll have to keep reading to know heeeee. Thanks for the review!!
Date: 03/09/11 11:16 pm Title: Chapter 24
wow.......... somehow that doesn't surprise me......... good chapter, though!!!1
Author's Response: Hi! Late reply! u__u Thanks! Glad you like it, even if it was a little angsty lol
Date: 03/09/11 04:17 pm Title: Chapter 24
siento pena por Bill pero prefiero a William, Bill es una reina del drama, pussy como nadie
ese cabrón me caga, me caga
xD
amor :D
Author's Response: jajaj si ya se. Es todo lo que no es William, lo contrario, y por eso el mismo William dijo que era un bebé llorón. :D le puse crybaby y no pussy porque William aun no usaba palabras antisonantes XD
Date: 03/09/11 09:37 am Title: Chapter 24
Wow! That was intense. Great chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you! ^__^
Date: 03/09/11 12:36 am Title: Chapter 24
WOW.
Author's Response: =D
Date: 03/08/11 11:43 pm Title: Chapter 24
yea, I figured you wouldn't be able to answer. And about 6th Sense, I knew something was off, but couldn't put my finger on it.
Im not exactly sure what to say about this chapter. It was spiffy awesome. Had a little bit of everything I love, a good fight scene, anger on Bill and William's part, angst for everyone, it was just wonderful.
I can't wait to see what comes next.
Author's Response: Thanks! So far everyone is like o__o or u__u with this chapter. So many things happened. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)
Date: 03/08/11 09:33 pm Title: Chapter 24
I got so scared even though I know he can't die by a mere fall XD So many close calls in one chapter is... I don't know... nerve wracking to say the least.
Author's Response: lol yeah I put some action and drama into this chapter. :) Hope it was entertaining.
Date: 03/08/11 08:44 pm Title: Chapter 24
oh, this breaks my heart, and Bill knows everything now!!!
Author's Response: Yup, which means things are about to climax :D
Date: 03/08/11 07:12 pm Title: Chapter 24
mmmm
nada que decir :D pero comento
Author's Response: jaja :D Se vale
Date: 03/08/11 04:44 pm Title: Chapter 24
oh my god. WILLIAM!!!! you can't just...do that to Bill!! so cruel :( aw man, every time does something like that, trying to piss William off, i think that he's probably gonna set off whatever it is he's trying to prevent. aaah
Author's Response: Yeah, right now it could be anything, but you'll have to wait and see XD
Date: 03/08/11 03:06 pm Title: Chapter 24
Ouch...
Sorry, but I don't know what to say. This chapter is so hurtful. Good, very good, but hurtful. I mean, I almost scream with Bill and I could sense the pain (that was pain?) in William. And Tom.
God, now I look forward eagerly for the next chappie!
Author's Response: Hi!! A este capítulo le viene bien la de "Pain of Love" XD A lo mejor el siguiente capítulo estás mas angsty. :/
Date: 03/08/11 02:17 pm Title: Chapter 24
Oh, Bill ;_;
He's definitely got the worst part of the deal...makes me so sad ._.
Author's Response: I know u__u I am usually bad to Tom in my stories, not Bill lol